IPKKND:Bitter Sweet aquired taste TH2 C20 p10 Conclude NEW SS note p19 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Nice one!!! ASR will be the best father!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Awesome.do write more arshi stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Marriage brings a lots of changes in men , but ASR has changed after khushi's pregnancy . Aditi has wrapped up her father in her little finger . Daughters are very close to their father , no wonder Arnav is ready to loose million dollar deal for his daughter's smile .
Loved khushi's take on bitter sweet
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
aww! loved it! will miss this story a lott! come back soon with a new story please!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Superb ending...
Arnav changed for a good reason...
Little aditi made all possible...
Khushi now happy with her husband...
Love the epilogue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
lovely..!!
A beautiful ending to a bitter sweet ending...
But i wish to have arav with his sister a bit.. :P :P

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Another story of your meets its end. when I started reading it first, I was not very interested to read it. The complex Arnav and Khushi were too egoistic for me. Thanks to your slower updates :p I re-read it many times and try to understand the characters and that's when I start liking it. Bitter Sweet actually talks about today's Arnav-Khushi, they have issues, but the love keeps them together.
I love how timid yet firm Khushi you showed, how Sheetal showed the mirror to ASR who eventually realize how important Khushi is for him and try to change for better just for her, the bonding between Arav and Khushi and Arnav.
AAANNNDDD...I fell in love with your last line said by khushi...loved it totally.
It's a beautiful story, a bitter sweet to cherish forever.
beautiful work Jagruti👏

thanks for the pm
looking forward to read more.
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
nice awesome finish!! what a change in arnav!! playing with his daughter!! so cute!!
Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Well ya an earlier end would also have worked,
But whenever has extra of ArHi been not welcome!!!!
Loved the end,
Especially the last line,
Tongue twister
But nice thing to say!!!!
Good Job!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Hey,
A beautiful completion.
But if could have included some beautiful moments .like,Aaravs and Arnavs first reactions
after seeing the baby,their helplessness when she was screaming in the OT and why Arnav was avoiding the office meetings etc.
IF U CAN GIVE US AN EXTENSION IN THE EPILOGUE,IT WILL BE A WONDERFUL TREAT TO US.DO GIVE A THOUGHT.
GOD BLESS YOU AND COME BACK WITH A BANG.

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