Bandhan #6 - Page 8

Originally posted by: taahir004

I'm gonna have to read the story once I'm home
and I'll comment too

Originally posted by: passiflora4eva

Hey Ria😊hi dear

Finally commenting! I was so busy reading your ff that comment karna hi bhool gayi...😉

So here I go:aww its really sweet of you😊

Thread One Intro, Parts 1 and 2:

So When I read the intro the first thought that came to my head was that So... Raj is going to be the guy who does't believe in love, is unromantic and has attitude problems...' its different from the Original character... yup his character is that sort

So I was curious to see how you were going to present him. For which I had to wait till part 3!!!...( not fair to keep raj away from his fans for so long😉)hehe but hero ke entry toh der se he hoti haai 😳

Your story had nothing to do with KMA or the Army. So I was wondering about it, as I'm very fond of the original background story. But I decided to give it a try anyways since I'm a sucker for romance!😆yup its totally based on a different concept actually i hardly write on KMA backdrop

Not to mention Rajveer -Naina...😆 So I just had to read it! and i'm happy I did.

You presented a nice picture of Naina's family in these parts... a happy family, but with a secret.

The Vaishali-secret!😃yup which is needed for every story 😆

Your portrayed them well, you were very descriptive about it. All the characters were shown well. The narration was nice. Good Job!👍🏼thanks me glad to hear

Only thing, while writing you should have separated the dialouges. I mean language baraber hai, what you have written is proper but everything seems cramed in one para. Should have written it a bit more clearly. Actually in Part 2 I think you did separate things towards the end. Which made it so much better!😃yaa ...sorry for the difficulty

One thing I have to say is that this thing you are doing with images is so awesome! You have have tried to show their expressions for the scenes... thanks dear

Amazing!😊 Its a tough and time consuming job! And you still did it! 👏 GREAT!!!! I applaud you!👏

If you every start a FF on RN again Please do let me know!😃

Nice FF! Still reading it and hooked on!👍🏼

Will comment on the other parts soon!

Cheers

R.