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ENTRY NO 1

.....But I still love him

I kripa sharma sat in darkness, tears flowing from my eyes. The door opened and a girl entered and put some food near me. She looked at me for some time and left. I knew she wanted to know what had happened with me , actually everyone wanted to know what had happened me……the most famous doctor of the city of Mumbai , why was I sent to mental asylum? Why had I ruined my life?

There were many questions whose answers only I could give but I was broken , I had stopped talking , actually I had stopped my life .

I don't even remember how my voice sounded.

The things I remember are his eyes, his face, and his smile.

My thoughts wandered to my past ….past which was beautiful but the end wasn't…

As a teenager I was one of the simplest girls of my school. I knew that if I wanted to be beautiful I could be but I didn't believe in that. My friends and he said that I had gorgeous eyes.

I loved him from my teenage Life but being such an introvert gal I never got the guts to tell him or maybe I didn't want to….

Years passed and the most beautiful phase of my life came……

We finally became very close friends

those days I never stopped smiling.

Those calls, those meetings sigh they were too happy to be with me 4ever.

Then came the happiest day of my life. He proposed me 4 marriage.

he said he loved me. Oh! I still remember that special day.

I was ready to do anything 4 him! Anything?

He was in a serious financial problem but he refused to take my help. I asked him if i could do anything 4 him?

He said "could u kill that guy who is creating all these probzz 4 me?" and I said " Of course yes!

At time I was sure that he was just jokin. then that time he came to my home and said "u r gonna kill that guy 4 me na?"

I stared at him. He hugged me tightly and cried .

I couldn't see him like that.

I took out my gun which I had kept 4 my protection.

He gave me a weak smile.

Sumthing buzzed in my head but my love was louder than that and the voice went unheard.

We made a plan to kill that guy …a full proof plan.

We planned to make the murder look as a suicide .

I at last went to that guy's house .

everything went according to the plan. I did the final act. I shot the guy. And I looked at him.

He gave me a strange smile i went to him and gave him the pistol to rub the fingerprints with a particular acid like everywhere he had done.

Then only I heard a gal laughing behind me .

he went to her and hugged her and spoke those words which still hold mark on my heart

"Don't u see I don't love u? I used u dear … I used u to kill this guy who was creating many probz 4 me I knew u loved me read yr diary that day when I came to yr home and all the plans started"

And he laughed again a merciless laugh " so baby the love story has a tragic ending and now we have to call the police"

I stood rooted to the spot

Everything went blurry…. It's blurry till now

I was taken to the police, the court said I was mental and angad khanna…my love even gave some fake proofs.

I was sent to mental asylum

Now I just sit and cry

My life has just stopped

Of all those hurts he has given me of all the tears he has given me still make me cry but those beautiful memries still sre clear in my mind

my soul hates me 'cuz I still say that even though he tore me apart……But I still love him

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ENTRY NO 2

this story is about sujal , kashish.. it's about their hatred , their enmity , their forced marriage , their differences & finally their love which wins over all the odds to become the unconditional love…. So presenting to you conditional & unconditional love....

the main characters :-

Sujal – played by the heartthrob

Rajeev Khandelwal

Kashish – played by the gorgeous Aamna Shariff

So presenting to you conditional & unconditional love……. hope you like it…..

Conditional & Unconditional Love…….

Sujal garewal , kashish sniha belong to rich households.. they are strangers to each other but they have seen each other but then they are enemies.. sujal is a business man & he does not believe in marriage , wants his freedom & has a loads of attitude but will never do anything against his mother's wishes….…
Kashish on the other hand is also a business person & she is a kind of person who lives for her mother & her business .. she has a hatred over marriage as her father divorced her mother when she was very young for some other woman & they had to face a number of difficulties to come up in life …
Sujal , kashish study in the same college.. but they belong to different gangs.. the gangs members were always at logger heads with each other…thus whenever sujal , kashish meet they ended up fighting.. the college finished.. life moved on for both of them.. sujal & kashish became business persons at different places… they never thought that life would make them meet again nor did they want to meet again..… but life had it's own twist & turns… after 3 years sujal , kashish meet up in a business meeting.. they meet as business rivals this time… in the meeting again both their ego's clash.. both are unable to forget their past enmity….. this time again they part ways not as business associates but then as business foes…
Life carries on for two more years.. & in kashish's house her mom is asking her to get married.. kashish refuses… sujal is undergoing the similar kind of case from his family.. sujal's mother tries to tell him to get married but this ti me sujal is adamant on his stand that he wouldn't get married… now sujal's family puts a condition forth him.. they say that if sujal does not get married with in a period of one month then the whole garewal property will be handed over to the trust.. sujal forcibly agrees for the marriage & the family starts looking out for girls…. Kashish along with her mother comes to Shimla {sujal stays there } to attend a conference .. in the conference sujal , kashish meet up again & their rivalty increases further..
Accidentally when kashish & her mom go to the Temple. In the Temple sujal's family see kashish & think that she would be the apt bahu for their house.. kashish leaves the Temple as she has a important meeting to attend.. sujal family then meet kashish's mom.. they become good friend's & then they decide that why don't they get sujal , kashish married.. at sujal's home he is told that they have got a girl who would marry him.. sujal is least interested in the matter & says that as long as his family is happy he is happy & he does not want to know anything more about the girl….. & he leaves the place… in kashish's home kashish is not ready for the marriage.. she & her mom have a heated up argument & then kashish's mom convinces kashish to get married…kashish finally gives up as she knows that her mother wouldn't listen.. both sujal & kashish put forth a condition that the marriage will be a low profile… sujal , kashish don't meet.. they directly meet on the day of their shaddi in the mandap.. that is at this point of time that of them realize whom are they getting married too… the marriage ends…all the rituals take place..
In sujal , kashish's room :-
Sujal :- so miss kashish u wanted to get married to me , then why did you act as if u hated me oh may be that is because u wanted my attention .. u girls..silly girls.. I'am telling you na.. { he say's scarcastically } .. but get one thing straight u mean nothing to me.. I have got married to you only because of my family.. & my property it was just a compulsion & nbsp; to get married to you & I'am stuck with you.. ya u don't even think you will win over my hearts feelings.. I have & will always hate you & nobody can change that.... do u understand that { he clicks his fingers in front of her }
Kashish :- mr. Sujal garewal I think you are totally mistaken I have married you just because of my mother.. if I had got a chance I would never have got married.. it just because of her.. & do u think I want to win over your heart stop dreaming sujal garewal.. it's high time you stop dreaming.. & ya I agree with u on one matter.. even I hate u & will always hate you from the bottom of my heart… welcome to hell…. { kashish gives him a evil smile }
Sujal :- { sujal smiles in the same way & says } welcome to hell to you too…
This is how their new life starts they get married on condition basis.. now sujal , kashish being married but are still on two different paths.. there views , ideas never combine , they are always on opposite tracks.... though married kashish & sujal work separately as rivals.. they live in the same home but know nothing about each other they just act like strangers to each other… sujal , kashish decide to get divorced very soon as they can't live like this.. they try to surpass each other in every deed they do…
One day sujal's mother falls sick kashish nurses her back to health.. this gains sujal's attention.. he is moved that though kashish does not like him she has not shown her disliking to his mother.. sujal wants to thank her but then his ego does not let him to.. sujal , kashish relationship starts improving…
Sujal & kashish go to attend a party.. in the party a girl comes who happens to be sujal's ex-girlfriend .. she is unaware of the fact that sujal is married and that too to kashish.. sujal , kashish are standing at different corners when this girl comes to sujal.. kashish sees that sujal is talking to the girl she unknowingly starts feeling jealous.. she walks over to sujal..
{ think the girl is archie – Urvashi Dholakia}
archie sees kashish.. coming towards them & then says to sujal :- sujal see there kashish.. I think she has got married & I'am wondering how her husband is tolerating her… I think he would be dieing daily living with her..
kashish hears all this & she is waiting for sujal's reaction.. sujal who sees kashish just to irritate her
says :- ya archie you are right { both archie & sujal laugh }
kashish now comes to sujal then says :- sujal I'am going home.. & she leaves { sujal just sees a glimpse of tears in kashish's eyes }   ; ; ; ; ;
archie is confused as to why kashish told sujal that she was going home she asks sujal :- sujal why the hell did she tell you she is going home ??
sujal :- actually archie.. actually { he hesistates }
archie :- I think she has gone mad sujal.. anyway leave it..
{archie starts walking off to get herself a drink when sujal holds her hand & pulls her back }
sujal :- no archie she is not mad.. she is my wife.. she is

Mrs. kashishsujalgarewal ..
archie :- what ??????????????????
sujal:- yes archie she is my lawfully wedded wife..
archie was shell -shocked & sujal felt good calling kashish his wife.. this was the first time he did that but he felt good.. sujal left the party & went home .. he goes to his room & sees that kashish is standing in the balcony.. sujal just goes to her.. he sees that kashish's eyes are red something like she had been crying.. kashish sees that sujal is there & begins to leave the place..
sujal :- { slowly calls out her name } kashish…
kashish just stands there without turning around waiting for him to continue..
sujal :- kashish why have you been crying { he has the concern in his voice }
kashish :- no I haven't been crying…
sujal :- ok..
kashish starts walking again when she hears sujal say :- I'am sorry.. I didn't mean to hurt you kashish.... kashish turns back & there are tears in her eyes….

Sujal continues :- kashish I was just joking.. that's all..
sujal goes close to kashish & says :- please stop crying , I don't know why but I can't stand you in pain… I'am sorry if what I did hurt you…. {he has a apologetical face}
kashish tears keep flowing & she says :- no you have not given me any pain.. … it is just that I was just reminded of my father who left me & my mother for some other lady.. that's all.. you don't have to be sorry..
sujal :- ok.. but still I can't see you in pain.. please wipe off your tears..
kashish just wipes her tears & smiles & says :- thanks sujal for having concern towards me…..
sujal :- kashish I'll definitely have concern for u afterall you are married to me.. you are my wife..
sujal & kashish just look at each other..
sujal :- kashish till today we have been like strangers , can we forget the enmity between us & get to know each other better….kashish can we be friend's { he puts his hand forward }
kashish just smiles puts her hand forward & says :- done , friend's………
this way sujal & kashish became friend's. even now they worked separately but both respected each others work.. they began understanding each other.. archie was the one person who never liked sujal & kashish being together.. she worked with sujal & always tried to create some misunderstanding & create hatred in sujal's mind for kashish.. but she did not succeed.. sujal & kashish lived their life peacefully .. slowly but steadily both started gaining feelings for each other.. but both of them were not ready to come forward & accept their love for each other… both wanted the other person to accept their feelings… both of them pretty well knew that the other person had feeling for them.. sujal knew that kashish loves him & the same way kashish knew that sujal had feelings for her…. Days pass by & all was going smooth between them....
one day archie creates a wrong notion in sujal's mind that kashish is going to divorce him very soon for some other guy .. she even says that she has seen kashish going out with some guy often….. sujal is angry he does not want to loose kashish at any cost as he loves her .. he feels that he should confess his love to kashish at any cost… sujal decides that he would confess & thinks that after that it would be kashish decision whether to accept or reject his love….. kashish is at a business party.. sujal comes there sees kashish & he goes to her holds her hand & then just drags her out of the party takes her home.. kashish is not able to understand why sujal is behaving like this.. sujal takes kashish to their room.. he does not even give her a chance to speak…
kashish :- sujal.. what's with you.. why are you behaving like this..
sujal :- what do you think of yourself.. do you think you can play with my feelings whenever you like… you came into my life when I hated you.. but today when I have started to love you , you are planning to leave me for some other guy..{ he holds her hand very firmly says all this very angrily }
kashish :- { just couldn't believe her ears sujal had just told her he loves her } :- what did you say ? {surprised}
sujal :- yes I love you.. don't you understand it..
{ kashish could see the anger in sujal's eyes }
kashish just has tears of joy in her eyes.. she just sees sujal & then goes into his arms slowly.. both stay like that for some time & then sujal separates her & then says :-

sujal :- kashish I don't know when , why , where this happened but the truth is I can't imagine my life without you.. you mean the entire world to me…. You are my life , my soul…. I love you …. I really do… {kashish just keeps looking at him & tears of joy are rolling down her cheeks & also kashish is blushing a bit}

sujal touches the tears on her cheeks & then says :- soo do you love me ??? would you like to be with me all my life ?? I promise I would stand by you , be with you always….

Kashish does not reply… she keeps shying… sujal waits for his answer.. but kashish instead giving him a answer hugs him tightly….. sujal wraps his hand around her & let her be like that for sometime

then again sujal said :- kashish how about telling me I love you too..
kashish just nods her head in a no still hugging him..…
sujal :- common kashish I know u love me… please for my sake tell it once..
kashish just goes near his ear & whispers in his ear :- I love you too sujal.. she says this & again goes into his arms…
both are in each others arms lost in each other's world when archie barges in & is shocked to see sujal & kashish hugging.. sujal & kashish look at archie..
sujal :- archie.. what are you doing here..
archie :- sujal I actually came to check if you are ok.. I thought kashish was going to..
sujal cuts her in between & says :- you were mistaken archie.. but it's ok today because of you I was able to win over my love.. thanku so much archie..
archie is just shocked she leaves the place confused without even uttering a word…...
sujal & kashish stare at each other & kashish says..
kashish :- sujal may be archie did all these with an intention to separate us but then she has brought us together.. we have to really thank her for that..
sujal :- I think you are right.. but then at present I have better things to dicuss rather than archie… {he gives a muschevious smile & pulls her closer by her waist..}

Kashish :- better things like..{she says this with a purposefull meaning} she plays with his shirt buttons…

sujal :- like…. He just pulls are even more closer & then kisses her forehead , her cheeks… & again takes her in his arms.. & then lifts her of her feat & carries her away……

Both sujal & kashish leave their dark past behind & promise each other to start a new life which has trust , belief & love for one another & nothing else…
archie then left the country as all her efforts of winning sujal's heart went in drain.......

one year passes by sujal , kashish now work together they have merged their business & their love is growing day by day & nobody in the world had the strength to separate them.. may be sometimes they had different opinions about things but they never tried to show that the other person is wrong .. they never let down each other…. though they fought they completed each other & complimented each other … thus both sujal & kashish got the love they deserve in life
" THE UNCONDITIONAL LOVE " which neither will nor can be changed in any circumstance ………..

& they lived happily ever after….

ENTRY NO 3

Prologue: Scene One, Take One

I going to let you in on a little Hollywood secret: Movie starts don't always get along. It's true. You can't believe everything you hear during interviews on Access Hollywood. When a star is asked about her costar, she'll gush about how the two are best buds who go to starbucks every Saturday for a fat-free vanilla shake. The truth is they probably haven't seen each other outside of work for six months; except for that occasional run in at a premiere or in a launch party.

How do I know? Im one of them. One of People's "20 Hottest Stars under 20" and number 6 on The Insider's "It List"… and unfortunately, Im as guilty as anyone of this. What can I say? My publicist, Liz, says that unless I keep up my so called 'Image' , I won't get the love of America and the jobs that will make my resume even more impressive.

But let me tell you, it is HARD as hell. Ever since I was 4, I was under a spotlight. My mother, Gayatri, who now goes by the name "Gina", was from India. She married my dad (Suryaben, but now Sam) and they both came to the US. One day, as they were working the hot dog stand in Central Park, an agent came up to them, took a look at me and offered my parents a deal.

"If you let Kripa work in a new and upcoming soap, Family Tragedies, we will give you half a million dollars. Depending on how well she does, we will sign a contract."

My parents, who were basically desperate for any kind of income, said yes.

And that's how I, Kripa Sharma, born and brought up in the US, became the first Indian kid to get a 5 year contract on a primetime drama on ABC. But it's not all a fairytale. Like the saying goes, "Good comes with the bad". And the bad came for me in the form of Mishti Bose. The second Indian teen to land a primetime gig. Our relationship was rocky since the first moment she hit it me in the head with her pink Barbie Corvette.

Mishti was the polar opposite of me in real life as well as reel life. We both had brown eyes but that's where the similarities ended. She had long , black, hair that had to be treated because of all the damage she did to it- while I had long dark brown hair that was healthy and shiny. She put so much make up, that she usually went through her foundation within a month, whole I just dabbed a little eyeliner and lip-gloss. (Unless I was on set- then Shelly and Paul , my hairstyler and makeup people, made me put full fledged make up on.). I looked my age, (which is 17 by the way) and she looked like she was 25. And in Hollywood, 25 is like 40.

On Family Tragedies, she was the bad girl. This season alone she had crashed the Lexus, had an affair with our TV-dad's boss, and ruined our on-screen school.

I, however, was the good girl. Infact, it made me kind of sick how unbelievably 'good' I was on the show. For instance, in one episode, I skipped my Homecoming Dance (where I was going to be Homecoming Queen, of course) and helped organize a food drive for the homeless.

I was used to Mishti's catty nature, and she often made me pissed. ("Nice zit K", she had said to me one morning. "Every heard of Clearasil?") And I, being the goody two shoes I was, didn't say anything in return.

Now as the season of Family Traceries was coming to its 12^th season closing, she had outdone her self. All the tabloids were staying stuff like "KRIPA SHARMA, TV'S GOLDEN CHILD, IS REPORTED TO BE KILLED IN HER DAILY SHOW" and stuff like that.

But now that I don't have any projects lined up (atlease, not yet!), I am going to take a hiatus from the Hollywood scene- and I bet that no one has ever taken such a hiatus. I, Kripa Sharma, am going to go undercover.

No, im not going to be a spy or travel around the world, trying to find ways to torture Mishti, (although, that idea seems extremely satisfying!). I am, however, doing something more interesting than that.

I will go to a regular high school with my only non celebrity friend, Alliyah. But little do I know, this hiatus may lead me to lose my career and find true love in a very hot hunk by the name of Angad Khanna… how and when? That's coming up!!!

ENTRY NO 4

"NO ENTRY"

Angad, he was one of the college's cutest and the most adorable guys. Girls went crazy just seeing him. He was perfect, smart and had his own style; he had everything. Girls even asked him out but he always rejected because he believed in 'having only one girl'. He used to flirt with girls but never went on a date.

Then one day, a girl named Kripa entered the college gates; everyone was mesmerized by her beauty and her style. Later word got out that she came in a 20 feet long Limo. She was elegantly dressed. Boys tried to flirt with her, their girlfriends gave her dirty looks, but she was heading for the Principal Room.

Knock. Knock.

Kripa asked 'May I come in, Sir?'

Inside the room a deep voice replied 'Yes.'

Kripa entered the room which was very bright and saw a big cupboard where around 500 trophies were kept; the oldest once since the 1980s. When she turned back she saw the Principal doing some paperwork and a good-looking guy sitting on the 'waiting' sofa inside the principal's room staring at her.

The principal looked up and said 'Kripa, sit down. Angad, can you please come here as well?'

Angad came and sat next to Kripa, they were sitting directly opposite the Principal.

The Principal began 'Kripa, he is Angad. Angad, she's Kripa, my daughter who just came back from Japan to finish her college in my school.'

Angad and Kripa said 'Hi!' in unison. They both smiled and then shook hands.

The Principal ordered 'Angad, I trust you the most here in this college and I believe you are a responsible young man. So, I want you to help my daughter so that she can adjust here. Is that okay with you or do you have something else to do?'

'No, sir. I'm totally fine with it. I'll help Kripa adjust to the college's environment. But I hope she doesn't mind?' said Angad.

The Principal gave his daughter a questioning look. 'Sir, I don't have a problem with it. I'm totally fine with it too.' said Kripa.

Angad was thinking 'My, my…what a beauty she is. Of course she is a beauty; she has to be one since her dad is wealthy and has a big heart so that's obvious that God will present him a beautiful daughter. I can't believe my luck that I got to take her around the college.'

The Principal said relieved 'Okay, so you to can leave now and I permit you both that you can slip all classes today but only on the condition that Angad, you make sure she knows everything about the college and gets familiar with every corner too.

'No problem sir.' Replied Angad. With that Angad and Kripa left the Principal's room.

Outside the Principal's office Angad and Kripa were walking along the corridor, Angad was thinking how to talk to her. If Kripa wouldn't be attracted by the 'NO ENTRY' sign board, she'd be thinking the same. Finally Angad gathered his courage and began 'So…you just came back from Japan?' He was a little taken aback when she didn't hear him.

Kripa returned from her thoughts and was confused 'Huh?'

Angad didn't want to make a fool out of himself and so he said 'Well I was just wondering why you were staring at that door? No one's allowed to enter that door.'

Kripa was now really interested and determined, 'Why is that so? What's in there?'

Angad hesitated for a while and said 'Umm…actually…um…I don't know.'

Kripa was now confused as to why Angad was hesitating. 'Are you sure?' she asked.

Angad wanted to change the topic and so he said 'Well of course I'm sure. Hey do you want to check out the canteen, it's really big. It's one of the biggest college canteens in Manchester.'

Kripa happily agreed. The whole day Angad showed Kripa around the college and told her about the college and its gossips. Angad told her who to stay away from and who to be friends with. Since he studied here and is very close to the Principal and the college, Kripa believed him in everything he said. During recesses, Angad introduced Sneha to the teachers.

At lunch time, they had gone to the canteen where Angad's friends were. When they entered, the canteen seemed to be whispering, everyone was wondering who the beauty is and what is Angad doing with her. Everyone was glancing at them secretly. When they reached their table, Angad introduced his friends to Kripa and they told him a lot about Angad. They told him also about how the girls ask him out and he kindly rejects them. When everyone had gone to their homerooms, Angad started to talk about his personal life. Kripa and Angad talked about themselves while walking along the school corridors and developed a relationship of TRUST and became friends.

They reached the 'NO ENTRY' door again. Angad wanted to move away fast but Kripa wasn't moving an inch. She stood still staring at the door. She almost had her hands on the door knob when Angad catched it and moved her from there.

Kripa was a little annoyed and screamed at Angad 'Why aren't you telling me what's behind that door? What's there to hide? Why can't I know what's inside there? You know, when you're not telling me something, you hesitate that makes me more curious. Now I can't just ignore this, there must be something as to why you're not telling me what's in there?' She started pleading '' Angad, why? What's there…I can't stand something when someone hides it from me. Am I not your friend?'

Angad couldn't see her like that. He didn't want to hurt her. He felt guilty and said a bit hurt 'You're my friend that's why I'm not telling you. But please don't ask me about that door again. I promise you that I will tell you next week everything about it but not this week.'

Kripa was still not convinced but still she said 'Okay fine, but next week you are telling me all about it.'

Angad was a bit relieved 'Yah I will. But promise me that till then you aren't going to ask others about it.' And with that he started to walk.

She still stood there. 'Okay but can I ask why?' Kripa asked softly. Angad looked over his shoulder and told her 'Only your father and I know about it and on one else. Now shall we?' and he gestured her to walk.

She catched up and apologized him for being so stubborn. He said its okay and he knows why she behaved like that; he can understand.

The bell rang and it was time for changing classes. Everyone rushed to their lockers. Everyone was slamming their locker doors, screaming, calling each other and with that they all went to their classrooms. There was one guy who was getting late for his class, he was running really fast, he ran so fast that when he brushed Angad and Kripa they fell on top of each other. They stared at each other for a while. Each admiring the other's closeness. After a few minutes when they both got back to their senses, Angad helped Sneha up. Both said 'Sorry' in unison and then smiled and looked away blushing.

After an hour, the Principal came to them in the canteen and told Angad thanks and took Kripa home.

At home, Kripa's father enquired Kripa about the college and how she felt. 'It's nice there. I'm comfortable.' she said while thinking of Angad. Kripa's father was happy hearing that.

After dinner, Kripa went to her room to sleep but couldn't as she was thinking of Angad. And the same with Angad. He was thinking of her the whole time. He tried sleeping; closing his eyes, shifting on his bed but it didn't do any good. After a few hours they both drifted away to sleep while thinking of each other.

At three in the morning, just about one and a half hour after they slept, Kripa woke up scared. She had a dream about the 'NO ENTRY' door. She couldn't get it off her head.

After half an hour later, she was all dressed and ready to go to the college. She crept out her house and ran to the college. She reached there in fifteen minutes.

As she was walking through the gates and up the stairs, she was having flashbacks of the dream. When she reached the 'NO ENTRY' door. She was scared, frightened but more determined to know about what's behind that door. She was feeling cold, not because of the weather but because she was about to open the door, the door which only 2 people in the whole universe knew about and she was going to be the third one in seconds. As she laid her hand on the door knob she remembered when Angad promised her to tell her about what's inside next week. She had flashbacks of the times she spent with Angad just yesterday. She then remembered the time when she fell over him and they were staring at each other. Then she felt that she kind of liked him, admired him……..LOVED him. She was so happy that she was in love. She was admiring that thought when suddenly she was having flashbacks of her dream. Then she remembered where she actually was at the present moment and why she was there. She turned the door knob and went inside. It was pitch dark in there. Then she did something strange. It felt strange to her but she didn't have control on her brain anymore because what she did was something which no human would do if they were in her shoes and in their senses. She closed the door behind her and locked it.

When the world outside was waking up, Angad was still in his bed dreaming about Kripa. He opened his eyes and was grinning wide. He couldn't help himself, he felt strange. He was constantly thinking about her and only her. He felt all happy and excited at the thought that he'd see her at college again. He loved being with her, standing close to her. Then suddenly a thought came to him which made him all jump and act childish around the house, he thought that he was in love. He couldn't believe that finally he got his Mrs. Right. He was so happy. Then he remembered the moment when Kripa was on top of him. He thought 'Gosh, I love her so much.' But later his smile faded away because he was thinking about her, would she say yes or reject him, he didn't know. He told himself 'This is enough, I can't stand this anymore. I'm going to tell her my feelings for her today; the very moment I see her I'm going to spill everything out. Who cares if I just met her yesterday only and I know her barely, I don't need to know her whole life-story or be with her for months before I tell her "I love you". I met her yesterday and she'd change my inner side already, she's always on my mind now. If this isn't love then I don't know what is.'

He quickly took a shower and threw all his clothes out. He was sorting through his clothes, he didn't want to look a fool, and he wanted to impress her. He was searching for one of the best shirts he had and a pair of jeans. Finally he got a black striped t-shirt and a pair of designer jeans. He looked great. Before leaving his room he took his blue-black jacket with him too. He went down the stairs and into the kitchen. His mom and dad were having breakfast and his sister, Aaliyah, was leaving for the University. Angad quickly ate his breakfast and said Goodbye to everyone and left for his college. He took the BMW that day.

He reached college and met the Principal. 'Good morning sir' he greeted. 'Good morning Angad. Have you seen Kripa yet?' asked the Principal. The Principal looked a little disturbed.

Angad got worried and he asked 'No, not yet sir but what happened? Why do you look worried?' The Principal hesitated but told Angad everything 'Angad, I haven't seen Kripa since morning and I can't find her in the college too. I'm worried as to where she is now.'

Angad tried to comfort him. 'Sir, don't worry. I'll look for her now.' Angad was about to leave but the Principal hold him back.

'Angad did you tell her about…' before the Principal could finish his sentence Angad interrupted. 'No sir. Not yet. But I promised her to tell her next week about it all. She was really curious. I couldn't see her like that so I…' Angad stopped when he realized what he was about to say. The Principal didn't notice that and he continued 'It's okay Angad. You can tell her. And oh yes, I'm sorry for her behavior. She just can't stand things hidden from her.' Angad told the Principal that it was okay and he didn't mind anything at all. Angad confessed 'Sir, I'm sorry but I was going to ask you today at lunch time that if I shall tell her about it or not.' The principal slapped Angad playfully. 'Kid, you don't need to be sorry. I'm happy at your wise decision.' That cheered Ryan up. He said 'See you later sir.' and with that ran towards the canteen. He searched for Kripa but couldn't find her anywhere later he was walking towards the corridors searching for her in each classroom but couldn't see her anywhere. Then he came to the 'NO ENTRY' door and remembered how determined Kripa was to know about what was behind that door. He became tensed. At that moment a soft hand touched his right shoulder which startled him. He turned quickly and relaxed, it was Kripa there. She was smiling. He was happy to see her and remembered that what he had wanted to say to her. Before Angad told her that he loved her he asked her 'Kripa can you promise me that you are never going to go inside that door ever?'

Kripa smiled and promised. 'Of course Angad. I promise you that I'll never enter that room ever.'

Angad was relieved. Then he began 'Kripa I …..um……I wanted to tell you something.'

Kripa was smiling and asked softly 'What Angad?'

Angad came closer to her and told her 'Kripa I know that we've just met yesterday but I don't why but I always see you everywhere. I feel happy when you are around. I forget everything when you are standing close to me. I don't know what you'll say but I LOVE YOU and I can't live without you.'

Kripa didn't say anything for a while. She wasn't shocked and she surely didn't look mad at all. She smiled again and said 'Angad I wanted to say the same thing to you. I was waiting for you to tell you that. I love you, too.' Angad couldn't believe his ears. He hugged her.

They were hugging when they heard the Principal behind them cough. They parted. The Principal said 'Well I see that Angad you've found her but remember not to loose her. Take good care of her. I'm happy for you both.' This made the both of them happier. Angad said 'Thanks sir.' and Kripa was overjoyed and said 'Thank you Dad.' The Principal was walking away and Kripa and Angad were talking when one of Angad's friends, Prithvi, called out 'Angad!!' from his gang. They were going to their homeroom and it was very crowded in that side of the corridor. Angad looked up and screamed 'Hi!!' to Prithvi. Prithvi then asked him something which made the Principal, who could hear Angad and Prithvi scream greetings to each other because he hadn't gone too far yet, stop in his tracks and shocked Angad. Prithvi had asked Angad that who was he talking to and why was he acting weirdly. It was clearly visible that Kripa was standing there to Angad and the Principal. The Principal could smell that something was wrong and he screamed to Ronald 'Prithvi, Angad is practicing for the play!!' Prithvi tuned to the Principal and said 'Oh!! Thank you sir. See you later. Bye Sir.' and he turned to Angad and said 'Bye Angad. Meet you in the canteen at 10!!'.

The corridor was quiet now after all the students went into their homerooms. The Principal came up to Angad and Kripa with a tensed look and Angad had his head down, he was staring at the floor. After a while, Angad looked up at Kripa who had tears in her eyes. She whispered 'I'm sorry Angad.' Angad knew then that it was too late now. The promised he took from Kripa was too late. He should have asked her to promise him yesterday. He felt that is was his fault. He looked at the Principal with teary eyes and looked helpless. The Principal said helplessly 'It's okay Angad. It was not your fault. You couldn't have known that.' Tears were strolling down Angad's cheeks 'No sir. It was my fault. I should have told you how eager Kripa was to know what's inside. I should have told her hen she wouldn't have….' The Principal, whose eyes were red then, interrupted Angad 'No Angad. It was never your fault. Don't blame yourself for what happened. I should have got the lock fixed. I should have known that she'd…' Kripa interrupted her dad 'Dad' she looked at her dad with teary eyes and then at Angad 'Angad'. 'Please don't blame yourselves for what I did. Angad had warned me but when I dreamt about it I couldn't resist coming here and I went in. I'm sorry for my silly actions. I know it's entirely my fault and I'm paying for it but…' Her dad stopped her. 'No Kripa it's not your fault. What had to happen, happened. We can't change our destinies now.' Angad spoke up 'Sir I don't think we shall blame one another now or ourselves. We can't do anything now. We both shall act normal and I'll come to yours tonight to visit you both. But don't let the word get out. Kripa is only visible to you and me. We shall be happy that she survived at least.' And with that the three of them, the Principal, Angad and Kripa hugged each other and wiped each others tears. 'I'm sorry Angad that I destroyed your life when it just got started' Kripa apologized. Angad cupped her face and told her that 'Kripa, you don't have to be sorry. I loved you for what you are, not how you look and I will always love you. I'll love you more day by day. I'll stay by your side always and forever' Kripa was in tears and they both hugged with Kripa's dad's hands patting Angad's back.

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ana

OMG....WOW
that was mind-blowing
it was a hard choice between those stories them
i loved all of them
gud work by all the writers 👏

i choose no entry by the way...i thought it was amazing and he eva wrote it put a lot of imagination into it👏👏👏

by the way ana wat does the winner get...do they get a siggy with fan fic of the week...just wondering😆

loved all of them! i wont say which one i votd for cuz then every1 would know which one was mine. No Entry was also VERY good and i think i have an idea as to who the writer is 😉

x3 Prakriti

preeti- u shuld make this a sticky

guys
voting has shifted from here to

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ana