EK PAL KA MEHMAAN Manan ff

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Posted: 10 years ago
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EK PAL KA MEHMAAN
PROLOGUE:
The whole atmosphere was bizarre!!! Sitting in corners and weeping mourning and praying fa juz one soul... one good bubbly soul... one cheerful leader... one eternal friend!!! A friend who trusted no matter what... A friend who stood up fa all right and wrong... A chirpy cheerful soul who cud make anyone smile at any point of time.. A soul who can bring out people from sorrows... But as for now the soul is heartbroken and counting breaths for her survival!!! There is no use crying over spilt milk... What shouldn't have happened has happened... only god knows wat her destiny is!!!! The one solid person to be complained for her state is the great MANIK MALHOTRA!!!! Par bechara dint know wat he was doing... As part of everyones deeds end up NANDHINI MOORTHY in the most haunted place of her life!!!! And almost taking breaths of survival.. the only living soul trying hard to push herself to come back to reality!!!! Friendship???? Love???? Infactuation??? Foolishness???? Or revenge??? What could have brought Miss. Nandhini Moorthy to this stage of her life!!! Dat moment fighting against death!!!!!

Okay guys as fa now this is my chota wala update!!!! But do comment and tell me if yu ppl like me to continue!!!!

PART 1
May 2 2015:
In the buzzling city of Mumbai people roaming around running behind their dreams there is one soul who has lost all her dreams and striving for survival fighting against death!! Besides her death bed or the bed of survival whatever we call there is a personality doomed with guilt crying his heart out... please wake up nandhini this is wat he cud say 24*7 now!!!! There is no one to comfort the crying heart!! No one or like he doesn't allow anyone to come near him... someone tries to speak to him the angry young man side comes out of him!!!
Two petty figures enter into the room neatly dressed nd clothes tightly sticking to themselves!!! Mukthi and alya the so called besties of Manik and Nandhini!!! Followed by the two young guys of the group...
Dhruv : girls control urselves please for heavens sake!!! We cant see manik n the worst condition so behave!!!
Alya: hey manik kaise ho tum?? Nandhini kaise hain??? Any scope for improvement!!! By te way happy birthday dude!!!
All: yea happy birthday dude!!!
Manik slowly turned around to face his friends.
Manik: y did yu ppl come here!! Happy birthday???? How do yu think I wud ever njoy my birthday without her??? Wat trying to prove urselves as best friends huh??? Woh toh tum log pehle hi karne chahiye tha!!!aur alya kya kaha tumne scope for improvement??? Yu wat do yu think??? Pls get outta here I know my nandhini will come back to me very soon very very soon... pls stop ur free advice and mind ur own business... maybe ur deeds cud follow yu !!! someone cud be stalking around yu to make ur life hell please don't come in front of me again!!!!dhruv: dude relax nandhini will be alright definitely alright yu juz relax!!!
Mukthi: haan dude relax nandhini theek ho jayegi!!!
Manik: I know she will but please both of yu get outta my sight!!! I beg yu...
Meanwhile navya enters the room!!! She sees all the hungama taking place and shouts!!!
Navya: guys wat te hell do yu think of urselves???? Isn't it enuf to put her in such a condition?? Aur bigadna chathe ho kya tum log!!! Chale jau yahaan se and dobaara mat aana please chale jau!!! Nandhini stupid thi dint know to differentiate between right and wrong good and bad!!!
Mukthi: oh hello miss!!! Stop dat!!!!
kabir: attitude dikane ka koi zarrorat nahi hain yahaaan
Alya: see he is right!!
Kabir: maine mukthi aur tumhe kaha now come off guys dats it fa now!!! Enuf of everything!!! Come on guys!!!
The four people went off!!! Navya and Manik were left behind!
Navya: tum kyun kadi ho yahan tumhari vajah se yeh sab hua!!! Aur tumhari himmat kaise hui yahan aane keliye!!
Manik: navya please abhi tak mujhe kuch nahi pata tha!! Mein pagal ki taraf kuch bhi kar rahe the!!! Par ab mein sab samaj gayi !!! I know now which is right and which is wrong!!! Mujhe meri nandhini wapas chahiye navya !!! aur isme meri help sirf tum hi kar sakthe!!
Navya: how do I believe yu!!!
Manik: pyaar aur dosti mein trust ki bina kuch bhi nahi hain!!! Aur mujhe meri nandhini chahiye!!! I know yu will trust me!!! Please navya!!!
Navya: yu are responsible!!!!
Manik smiled at her and slowly went and sat near nandhini.
Manik: nandhini um sorry fa everything!!! Please wapas aajao!!! I need yu um sorry fa beig stupid!!! Its ma birthday today I need yu back as my gift!!! Ur my best gift ever nadhu pls come back... I want you to wish me on my birthday atleast wake up for dat!!! Um sorry fa everything!!!
A lone tear escaped from his eyes!!! He slowly started weeping and crying his heart aloud!!!!

Um done agn silent readers do comment!!! Feedbacks welcomed...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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it looks quite interesting...waiting for the next part. update soon dear😊

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