Yeh Hai Aashiqui (Ishra OS on Pg 33) - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
u presented an os 2 show how brutal honor killing is.sandhir eloped,her father brought her back thru betrayal.tho they tried 2 escape they tried 2 kill them.so sad.they committed suicide not wanting 2 b dead by them.sad.i wish they had'nt done that as she was preg.anyways as per d myth the lovers lived happily in heaven
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Posted: 10 years ago

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Manan OS : Main Hero Tera

Nandini : Manik tell me that you love me.I know you don't love me Manik,you just love your guitar.

Manik :No Nandini,I love you a lot.Tell me what can I do to prove my love for you.Tell me Nandini.

Nandini : If you really love me ma you would have proposed me in a romantic way,sang for me a beautiful song while your guitar and shower me rose petals that would be the best date Manik.But you, only know is how to fight with me and nothing else Manik.Go I am not talking to you.

Manik : Nandini,you also na you are really filmy.(Manik proposes her with a ring but Nandini rejects and says) "First,you arrange a proper date in a romantic style then I will accept that you love me truly"Nandini leaves and manic holds her hand and says "I will prove you that I really love you .Nandhini replies " then prove and show(giving a care free look"

Manik arranges books a resort swimming pool area for his filmy romantic date for his Nandini.Manik arranges the bouquet and puts it in flower vase, Puts rose petals everywhere, arranges the band where he is going to play for her some romantic songs and the dance floor was set for them to dance.Manik did all the arrangements to make it like a filmy date for his Nandini.He only wished that Nandini likes the arrangement.

Manik gets a call from Nandini before she could call him."Manik where are you.I am in a big problem.hese goons are back of me as they eve teased me and they are robbers.I ran to save my life and I am stuck here come here soon Manik" her teary voice pricked his heart and he ran and left the venue to save his Nandini.When Manik reached there he seen Nandini laughing and giggling and she came and hugged him

"Ooh my sweet Manik.It was a falls alarm about the goons attacking me.Actually I wanted to check whether you really love me or not." Says Nandini

Manik :Nandini how dare you play ssuch bad jokes I just hate it.I really love you Nandini.You are making a fun of our love Nandini.Please try to change your habbits of these silly jokes which hurt others.

Nandini : Look back Manik, be careful see a goon behind you.Trust me Manik.I am not joking Manik really it's a goon Manik.

Manik doesn't listen to her,then Manik then gets hit by the goon,but cause of the police siren.The goon runs away.Nandini sees blood flowing through his head and gets nervous her heart just skipped a beat and shiver ran down her spine seeing Manik unconscious.The police who arrived there had arranged for a ambulance to take Manik to the hospital as soon as possible.The doctor examined Manik and the doc came out with a sad news that Manik is in coma.His brain was damaged.Nandini couldn't believe what she just heard,she went near Manik and cried bitterly.She kept her head on his chest and she said "I am sorry Manik.I really don't want anything except you.Please Manik come back to me .I won't be in peace till that goon doesn't be arrested"

After 6 months

The goon was arrested,but still Manik didn't came out from coma.Nandini was busy dressing herself up as it was Manik and Nandini's first date anniversary.She was in Manik's thoughts those moments spent with each other,their dance , their first I love you . Nandini wept thinking when will all these moments will come back into her life.Suddenly Nandini sees Manik on her mirror and thinks its just her thinking as she is madly in love with him.That's why the flashes are playing in front of her eyes.

Manik : Its not your dream Nandini.I am really next to you.You can feel me I am there besides you.

Nandini turns and feels that really Manik is there besides her and hugs him and he wraps his arms on her body and Nandini weeps"I am sorry Manik,for what I have done.My intensions was not to hurt you.Manik,I don't want any surprise,I don't want a date.You are my hero and I don't want anything else other than you.I had got a call on your accident day from the resort which you booked that the arrangement for the date is done.Thats so sweet of Manik,that you thought of my silly wish.I know I have troubled you a lot.i am really sorry."(they break the hug)

Manik : If my sweetheart will cry a full bucket then obviously I will get hurt na.i heard from Mom and Dad that you cried a lot for me and nor did you eat your food from past few days as a fast for me,That's wrong Nandini.I am always besides you,See our love is that storng that I overcame my coma..

Nandini : I am glad you back that's only I wanted from god.Tum jho mile zindagi mein baat ban gayi.(Nandini takes Manik's hand and kisses it)All I want is you Manik.(Manik hugs her back)

Manik :Well my sweet Nandini close your eyes(Manik closes her eyes with a cloth) and he takes her to the poolside "Manik where are you taking me,infact you need to rest Manik"says Nandini.Shushh says Manik and opens the blindfold and Nandini slowly opens her eye lids and she sees the most beautiful decorated pool side with rose petals and a guitar and Manik goes near the guitar and starts singing "Ke Mein Hoon Hero Tera"

He takes Nandini's hand and starts dancing while the song is playing as a BG tune by the DJ and Nandhini questions him while dancing "Manik,how did you this,but you were in hospital right ?"

Manik : I had asked my one friend to arrange this for us.When I got discharged yesterday night.

Nandini hugs Manik and says "I love you Manik.I really love you.Thanyou so much for evrerything"

Manik breaks the hug and goes on his knees and says "Nandini will you be my lawfully wedded wife".

Nandini : Sure ( He puts ring on her finger and he takes her hand and they both continue to dance on the song Mein Hoon Hero Tera.)

The End.



Edited by -Dellz- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww such a cute os
Moi loved it to the core

Very entertaining

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super Cute One-Shot

Loved it <3

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow great short story
I like the ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
sweet and cute story😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
Love it
It was so cute
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome story...
liked it very much...
though not much familiar with d characters...
keep writing...
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very cute OS
thanks for the pm...





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