A manan ff- I FOUND PERFECTION WITH U!! (CONTINUATION NOTE ON PG 3))

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PROLOGUE

Its morning in the Murthy house...chachi is making breakfast for
everyone..suddenly there's a knock at the door..chachi shouts "Nandu!!
Darwaza khol...tere dost aye hai sahed.." nandini opens the door and its
fab4!!! They're here for breakfast...chachi is very happy to see
them..
Chachi:agai tom log!! Kabse hum bethe the...
Mukti:may to pehle e a jati..is malhotra k vajai se deri ho gai..
Manik:ya right!!! Dhruv k ghar me deri hui thi...
Dhruv:oh really?

Nandini stops dhruv and asks everyone to eat first..itm the mean time
cabir is already at the table...mukti and dhruv attack him..

Manik and nandini started discussing abt their schedule today...chachi
smiles and says u guys are made for each other friends...I hope u
always stay like this smile emoticon
Nandini:of course we will...we r fab5!! Bff forever...

Manik: yes chachi...and we will always be together and keep disturbing
u every morning for these manchurian puris tongue emoticon
After
breakfast chachi reminds nandu that today her distant cousin navya will
join college...she asks nandu to take care of her
Then they leave for college together.
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Fab5 reach college...manik tells everyone to go inside while he parks
the car..fab4 enters college..Harshad sees them and smiles.nandini
goes to him and starts talking to him..
Harshad:nandini how do u manage to look that good every morning!!! *-*
Nandini blushes..manik enters college and sees this...
Manik: what is she doing with that loser?
Mukti:aise kiyu bol raha hai? Harshad is a nice guy..he likes nandini alot...
Cabir:y dont u understand mukti...manik k dil mai kuch kuch hoita hai jab wo un dono sath hote hae...
Manik:listen esa kuch nahi hai...I think nandu deserves better..
Dhruv:jaise ki... our very own Ma...
Manik: buddy shut up yaar..
Everyone breaks down Into laughter...nandini comes back and joins them..
Nandini: whats so funny guys?
Manik:nothing...tum uske sath kya kar rahi thi?
Nandini:just normal conversion...
Manik:well if ur done "conversing" can we plz go and practice?
Nandini:ok... unsure emoticon
Fab3 laughs..and they all go to the music room and start practicing...

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Amazing!
The track is completely new and different!
Seems interesting
Continue soon..

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2nd update
pre-cap:nandini is a part of fab 5..harshad has a thing for nandini.manik cant stand them together...fab5 teases manik about nandini..

Now-
Fab5 are done practicing. So they decided to go to the canteen for a break..
Nandini sits first, manik was going to sit beside her but at the last moment cabir pushed him and sat beside nandini..
Manik: what the hell!!
Cabir:I just wanted to sit with my bestie.y do u hav a problem?
Mukti:ya manik..do u hav a problem? ??
Manik smirks and sitd beside dhruv whereas nandini is clueless abt whats happening...
Manik gets up and brings sandwiches for every one...when cabir tried to take one manik slapped his hand and said its for Nandini...
Dhruv:ooo...so a special one for nandini huh!!! wink emoticon
Manik:yes...she is a vegan..remember???her one is different from yours..
Mukti scoffs...
Nandini:what is wrong with u people today?? And thanx manik smile emoticon
Manik replies her with a smile...
Suddenly someone came to their table and hugged nandini tightly!! Nandini immediately pushed her away .
Nandini:W*F!!! Who r u???
New girl:nandu!! Its me navya!!! Dont u remember?
Nandini:oh yeah..how are u?(with a confused face)
Navya: im great...
she hugs her again
Navya: I cant believe im meeting u after such a long time!!
Nandini:ya same here.. (with an awkward smile)
Fab4 breaks into laughter...navya notices them and says
Navya:yo!!! M navya..
Nandini introduced her to everyone..Then navya had to leave because her mom called..
Cabir:so nandu!! How r u related to madhubala??
Nandini:honestly even I dont know...somehow she is my cousin sister.
Mukti:she is going to be a great source of fun in space tongue emoticon
Nandini laughs nd leaves as navya calls her..
Dhruv:vaise manik ki to lottery lag gai!!
Manik:what??why?
Mukti:r a teri adhi gharwali agai!!
Manik:what??
Cabir:act to aise kar raha jaise tujhe kuch pata nehi hai...
SAALI ADHI GHARWAALI HOTI HAI!!
Manik: ha ha..very funny squint emoticon anyways I have to go and meet nyonica..I see u guys soon
Manik leaves..
Fab3 enjoys the sandwiches...
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Nandini was showing navya around..she even took her shopping for some things..now they were at the hostel helping navya settle down...
Navya:to nandini tumhari mumbai ki zindagi k bare ma hum a bataw..
Nandini:there isnt much to tell..I was new to this town and college...I had no friends..one day I entered a music competition where I had to sing a duet with manik..we won..manik introduced me to the rest of them.and Fab5 was formed..
Navya:fab5!! What a name yaar...
Nandini:I know right!they r the best..they are always there for me..I love them more than anything...manik os the glue that holds us together..
Navya:manik tumhara bf hai kya?
Nandini:no no no!! We r just good friends..
Navya:oh mujhe laga k wo hai.kyuki jab bhi tum uska naam leti ho to tumhare chehre mai ek ajeeb si chamak ajati hai...
Nandini:kuch bhi ha navya!!I think we r done here..
Navya:nehi baba aj nehi..mai aj bohat zaida thak gayi hoon..
Nandini:chachi will kill me if I dnt take u with me!!! U hav to come..
Navya:tum plz chachi keh dena k may thak chuki hoon...par main kal pakka ayungi!!
Nandini:but...thik hai par kal main koi bahana nehi sunongi!! Kal ana hi parega!!
Navya:ok baba!!
Nandini n navya laugh and nandini leaves the hostel..
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Its 7pm..nandini showed navya the entire college and helped her settle in the hostel.now she was leaving.she was quite surprised tht navya isnt as stupid as she thought she was.rather she is a lovely girl.nandini was lost in her thoughts n suddenly bumped into harshad.
Nandini:sorry!
Harshad:its ok.incidents like this make my day wonderful
Nandini:lol.what r u doing here?
Harshad:I was going to my frnds place.what r u doing here?
Nandini:I was just abt to go home.
Manik was leaving college at that time.he saw them together n got pissed.he went there pulled nandinis arm and askd what r u doing here?
Harshad:hey u cant do that!
Manik:jst shut the hell up!!nandini come with me.
Manik n nandini left the place..Harshad was annoyed but he had nothing to do..manik took nandini to his car and started driving.nandini understood that he was pissed..she didn't say anything. Suddenly she asked manik to stop the car infrnt of a small tea-stall..manik stopped it.nandini went and brought two cups of tea..manik said that he is not in the mood.nandini said bt im in the mood..she sat on top of his car and startd drinking her tea..a moment later manik also joined him..nandini smiled.
Manik:y do u hangout with tht loser?
Nandini:manik he is a nice guy..why shouldn't I?
Manik:cause I dnt like it.(he realises what he just said and to cover it up he says) u know u can do better..
Nandini:lol ya.mayb bt u knw whats the real reason behind me hanging out with him?I dnt want fab5 to tease u even more thn they do now.
Manik:u knw abt that?
Nandini:how dumb so u thnk I'm?
Both of them laugh n stare at the stars for a while...
Manik tells nandini that its getting late and he should drop her home..then they get back into the car..manik drops nandini...before leaving nandini kisses his cheek and says:manik m really lucky to hav a frnd like u..a smile crept upon maniks face..nandini left and manik just watched her walk away..nandini ran to her window quickly and bade bye again...manik smiled n drove back home
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Manik is in his bed..he is thinking about his entire day..
To himself:I wonder how this girls always manages me to come down..I know that she cant see me angry but then why does she talk to that loser at all??but there's no such rule that she cant have any friends outside fab5!!but y harshad??
But why am I so concerned?mukti is right that he is a nice guy!!why cant I stand them together??
Is fab5 correct?do I have feelings for nandini??
Manik stops himself right there and thinks:what the hell am I thinking about??? Manik go to sleep u had a long day...
Then manik forcefully puts himself to sleep..
Meanwhile..
Nandini just washed up and stood infront of I his aiyyappa..
Nandini:aiyyappa thank u for the wonderful life I have..keep showering me with your blessings and give all the happiness to cacha chachi and rishav..and always keep fab5 together and happy like they are now..and ha! Manik ka gussa thora kam kardo!!varna pata nehi wo ekdin kya kar bethega!!!!pagal hai yeh larka..
Nandini finishes her prayer and goes to bed..she thinks how lucky is fab5 to have manik...she smiles and goes to sleep... smile emoticon
precap:two entries :P
guys please comment and tell me if i should continue or not

Nice update..
Loved manik's possessive behaviour 😛
Precap seems interesting..
Waiting for the new entries :)

awsm updates

interesting story and bit different plzz continue soon

The story is different!! Nandini is part of fab 5!! Looking forward to the story.
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3RD UPDTAE
1.00am
Navya is all set to go to bed.she was feeling a bit blue as she was missing her mom.at that time she hears a sound..she avoids it bt hears it again..she sees that the window is moving.she gets scared..she picks up the lamp next to her gets ready to attack..a girl enters the room through the window...they both look at each other and shout out loud!!they keep shouting for a minute or so..navya holds the lamp tightly and asks
Navya:who r u?
Girl:who r u?N what r u doing here?
Navya:this is my room..who r u?
Girl:oh!So u r my new roommate!Hi im Alya..alya alya saxena..ur roommate..
Navya:roommate ho to chor o ki tarha kyu ghus rahi ho?
Alya sits down and opens her shoes.
Alya:relax yaar...hostel main after8 no more entry or meri party hi shuru hui 9 baje..
Navya:oh..vaise hum navya!Navya naveli..Alya:u must be new in the town!
Navya:ya..how do u know?
Alya:honey!Its all written over ur cloths.i wonder may tumhare sath iss room may kaise rahungi..
Navya:hum a bhi koi shokh nehi hai..hum kal hi jag Borden ko bata denge ki hum kisi chor sath nehi rehenge..
Alya:nehi eisa mat karna..lets make a deal tum borden ko kuch nehi kahogi or in return I will give u the ALYA MAKEOVER..trust ur entire life change..
Navya:hum a yeh nehi chahiye.
Alya:plz dont rat me out na!!..iske badle me tum jo chaho mai wahi karungi!!
Navya:thik hai..abhi may sone ja rahi ho..tum bhi so jaw..mujhe kisi bhi tarhaki awaz nehi chahiye
Alya:ok..
Navya goes to sleep..alya thinks:oh god!! Yeh kiske sath fasa diya!!!!
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1.30am
Mukti is brushing her hair..her phone rings she rushes to the phone..she looks at the phone amd smiles..she answers the call
Mukti:so mr.thakkar u finally got time to call me
Abhi:sweetypie I always have time to call u..but tumhi to mujhe saradin ignore karti rehti hoon
Mukti:what!!maine kab tumhe ignore kiya!!
Abhi:saradin tum fab5 k sath rehti hoon tumhare pass mere liye time hai?
Mukti:listen abhi..
Abhi:mukti I don't want fight right now..my hands r hurting!!
Mukti:seriously!!milne to ate hi nehi hoon r ab tumhe mere sath phn main baat karne kar liye bhi problem hota hai..thik hai...ba-bye!!
Mukti cuts the phone and becomes upset..suddenly there's a knock at her door...she asks the person to go away..
The person knocks again.Mukti gets pissed she opens the door and shouts how dare u!!but she saw a big bouquet of red roses...Abhimanyu says HAPPY ANNIVERSARY baby doll!!
Mukti becomes speechless..Abhi pushes her and enters the room then goes out again and brings in a huge bag.mukti was still speechless..abhi kisses her and says:I wanted to come at12 bt do u know how hard it is to find 365 red roses!!tear drops roll down muktis cheeks...abhi gets worried.
Abhi:whats wrong basanti?
Mukti:I love u soo much veeru!Ur the best thing that happened to me..and hugs him..Abhi laughs and says I love u too!!and wipes away her tears and kisses her cheeks..then cut the cake that abhi brought..on the cake it was written "veranti forever"..abhi brought a lot of gifts..mukti becomes very happy!!
Mukti:abhi ur the best!
Abhi:wo to main hoon..but where is my gift??
Mukti opens her cupboard and brings out a gift box.she gives it to Abhi! Abhi opens it and its a diary!!
mukti:I started making this diary when we started dating..on every page there is a picture of us taken everyday for the last 365 days..n our best memories r written in it.abhi gets emotional.he says that it was the best gift ever..they both smile.After a while abhi leaves.mukti thanks god for the best boyfriend ever..abhi gets into his car and prays to god:god plz keep my mukti happy always... plz give her my share of happiness as well...

Next day
8am
Nandinis house Chachi:nandu aj tere dost kiyu nehi ai? Nandini:chachu wo roz thore hi ayenge! Chacha:kiyu nehi? Bhai mujhe to tere dost bohat acche lagte hai.specially wo manik Chachi:murti ji yeh apne sach kahi!Manik bohat hi changa munda hai!Suddenly loud sound of car horns comes from outside.nandini understands that manik is here.nandu leaves the table and wishes everyone a good day.she takes her bag and leaves the house and meets manik outside Nandini:manik tum kabhi nehi sudhroge! Kitnibar kaha hai k itna awaz mat karo par tum to meri suntehi nehi. Manik:good morning miss Murthy!ab chale? Nandini:manik u dont hav to come n pick me up every morning. Manik:kiyu?Mai nehi ayunga to kon ayega? Nandini:mai khud bhi to ja sakti hu na? Manik:jab tak may hun tumhe koi bhi taklif utha neki koi zarorat nehi.ore tumhare jo taxi k paise bachte hai usse mujhe treat de de na Nandini smiles Manik:vaise valentines k liye kya plan hai tumhara? Nandini:nothing yet but.. Manik:but what? Nandini:harshad asked me out if nothing comes up then I might go Manik:well bad news for u!Remember that competition that we were trying to get into?We got in.but on 14th we hav to go to goa to complete the formalities Nandini:manik thats great news! Y wud u say its a bad news? Manik:well u were really looking forward to ur so called date with harshad Nandini:manik!Fab5 always comes first for me.u knw that right? Manik:I know.tum bas us loser k sath mat raha karo Nandini:kiyu? Manik:because I don't like it Nandini:why not? Manik:why do u ask so many questions? Nandini sees he is getting mad she shuts up Manik:ab chup kiyu ho gai? Nandini:tum hi to gussa kar rahe ho They reach college and manik stops the car.he looks at nandini;makes her smile by stretching her face Manik:ur words can never make me angry ms.murthy bt just dont talk about that loser Nandini smiles and says ok mr.malhotra They both hav an eyelock.suddenly a car honks.they move away from each other.after a moment of silence manik says that they should get out.They come out of the car and start walking towards college..

precap: guess guess...

hey everyone im back!!!! heres an update...as i know its a boring sunday with no manan so i decided to post early.. :) :) i hope u guys like it...please leave ur precious comments and let me know how im doing and if possible spread the word about this ff to ur other friends on the forum as that would mean a lot to me and would inspire me to write ahead :)
update-4

10.30 pm
Manik is at the murthy house Chachi:manik beta tum log plz savdhani se jana.nandu ka to koi ata pata nehi rehta tum iska dhyan rakhna Nandini:chachi!Yeh rakhega mera dhyan!Iska gusaa control karte karte mera din kat jata hai Manik:o plz ha!mai tumhara jitna kheyal rakhta hu na utna tum apne bare mei soch ti bhi nehi Chachi:accha baba yeh rakho!Yeh sara khana rakho!ore savdhani se jao Nandini hugs chacha chachi and rishav and manan leave for goa Manik:vaise nandini kya tumhe sach me lagta hai k main tumhara dhyan nehi rakh sakta? Nandini:manik I was just kidding.tum fab5 ka jitna kheyal rakhte ho vaisa koi nehi rakh sakta Manik:main fab5 ki nehi!sirf tumhari baat kar raha hu Nandini:sirf meri baat karu to tum mera bhi bohat dhyan rakhte ho..kabhi kabhi bohat zyada bhi Manik:so ur saying I should stop? Nandini:yeh kab kaha maine?mujhe to Accha hi lagta hai..I always wanted such a caring boy... Manik:a caring what? Nandini:a caring friend Manik leans towards nandini..nandini closes her eyes..manik smiles and fastens her seat belt and move away Nandini opens her eyes and blushes..she thinks:oh god!Main bhi na pagal hu! Manik:to chale miss murthy? Nandini yes mr.malhotra lets go Manik turns on loud music and starts the car POV Nandini:why am I so happy? I went to goa with fab5 quite a couple of times..shouldn't I be sad that fab4 isnt here? Or am I happy because of that?I wonder what Manik is thinking... Manik:manik brace urself!! Its going to be one hell of a trip!! I just hope nandini is feeling the same thing that im.. both of them have never been this happy in their lives
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precap: manan in goa..valentine parties... 😛😛😆😃😳 😉

Hey sorry. Was busy..Just read both the chapters.. Awesome!! So manan are yet to figure out their feelings.. Hope the next chapter brings them more close. Can't wait for the Goa trip!! Thanks for the PM. Continue soon 😊