Fiction - Kaisi Teri Khudgarzi..?? [Part 2 - Pg 6 And 7.] - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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He reached the counter. "A Cocktail Please!" He spoke to the bartender who nodded. The smoke machine emitted smoke on the dance floor and Shane lukd at the Maddening Crowd before him. There waere Nick-Emma doing... What?! Shane rubbed his eyes to believe himself. Kissing? There were Nick-Emma kissing in a Cozy Corner. "Woah! The Rumors were indeed true." He thought aloud. Then he spotted Kevin who seemed to be having a good time with that girl who atleast seemed sensible to him from the distance. Both his brothers were having a good time while he was all alone on the verge of nearly being molested by that Skimpy Brunette. Great! Shane lukd at her direction and she was still there dancing away wildly giving him seductive looks. Shane quickly looked away to prevent himself from vomitting in his mouth.. He then scanned the Bar-Counter which seemed empty except for the Cornermost Bar Stool which was occupied. The inhabitant was female maybe?! Shane walked towards her just to start a Conversation. Nothing Foul!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Hello." He spoke, smiling. The Person turned as the back was turned to him. As she turned, Shane was caught off-guard wid her.. She was Beautiful. Ebony Hair descended down her shoulders till her waist in soft glossy curls, Beautiful Cinnamon Brown Eyes which had a twinkle in them and Milky Skin. She was perhaps the most modestly and decently dressed female in the whole crowd of Half Naked Women. She was gracing a Peach Coloured Chiffon Floral Printed Maxi Dress with Quarter Sleeves. Her face free from any cakey makup except her Eyeliner and Light Pink Lip Gloss. Her Jewellery consisted of Studs as Earrings and a Delicate Silver Bracelet in her Creamy Wrist. The girl too seemed to be in a state of shock after seeing who adressed her. Surely it wasnt a Dream! But she recovered herself. "Hello." She spoke softly. "May I Buy you a drink?" Shane questioned sheepishly, recovering but still dazed. "Umm I dont drink." She replied wid a small smile. Shane looked down at the glass of Orange Juice kept on the counter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Of Course She Didnt! What was he thinking.?! "But thank you anyways." She added. "No Its all my fault! I shud have seen you dont drink." Shane spoke as he sat down on the bar stool in front of her. "Im Shane Btw." He introduced himself. "I know." She nodded. "Shane Jonas right? The most famous of the Jonas Trio?" She addded. "Yeah! You can put it that way. And you are?" He asked, smiling. She hesitated for a moment before telling him her name. He maybe famous, Sure! But he was a stranger to her. But Dang! What good wud he do by just knowing her first name? "Nayra." The words slipped out of her mouth before she even knew. "You have a lovely name. So Nayra, Here with ur Boyfriend?" Shane asked nodding. "Uhm.. I dont actually have a boyfriend." She added quietly. "Oh My Bad! But how come a girl as bful as you doesnt have a Boyfriend?" Shane laughed a little. "Perhaps thats my choice." Nayra spoke as a matter of fact. "Agree." Shane again nodded. "So with whom are you here?" He asked again. "No One." She replied.
Edited by .Enchantress. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"If Uncle Nick was with Emma, then what abt Neha Maasi?" Aaron questioned unable to comprehend with the fact that his Darling Neha Maasi wasnt in the picture. "Neha came in later in Nick's Life." Joe explained his son. "And after her Uncle Nick didnt have to look back at all." He added. Aaron nodded happily. Aashi had till now being writing down in her notepad. Guess she didnt want to miss out even with a minute detail to tell her frnds. "So Daddy? U liked Mumma in the first meet itself?" Aashi spoke up after a long time. "I dont know, She was Beautiful Yes! But I still didnt know her that well to like her." Joe answered. Aashi nodded in consent and jot that down too.
Back To Past..
"How come no one?" Shane asked. Nayra took a sip of her juice. "Your Cocktail Sir." The bartender came and gave Shane's order to him. "Actually Emma, the organiser of this party is a good friend of mine. We attend our Weekly Yoga Classes Together. Just yesterday, She invited me for this party. I told her I
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dont do parties but she insisted such." Nayra answered. "And you being the polite one cudnt refuse her." Shane completed the sentence for her taking a sip of his cocktail. "Exactly! Plus, I thought it wud be a normal affair. Didnt know it was gonna be this big! With Celebrities and All!" Nayra spoke up. "Hey! Its Emma's Party that you are attending. You might find it intresting that she is Jonas Brothers's Official Tour Organiser!" Joe added. Nayra was stunned for a second. She didnt even knew her Yoga Friend wud be a Stud. "Wow!" She spoke still dazed. "Thats a piece of news." Shane nodded with a smile. "So You dont do Parties?" Shane asked her taking a sip of his drink. "I Dont! I feel sick at such parties. I mean I can attend parties and socialize but I cant bring myself to rip off clothes and dance seductively for Men, Engage In Casual Flings and Drink like a Maniac." Nayra replied firmly. Precap- They Meet Again! But Date?!
Edited by .Enchantress. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Wow! It was so cute! Loved Shane and Nayra's first meeting!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Ah finally Shane and Nayra meet and it is amazingly well written.
U r one talented female Shanaya!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Awesome update di
loved it
Purity ring.. interesting! so all the three bros wear it n have vowed of purity!
Neha-Nayra's convo was sweet!
Kids are cherry on top! n Joe is so patient! Good!
the description of their life was superb!
party time, Joe-Nayra's first meet was nice.. their convo was simply too good!
Emma-Nick.. oh.. to kebab me haddi koun bana?? Emma ya Neha??
Aaron wan't able to comprehend the fact that his darling Neha masi wasn't in picture.. how sweet of Aaron..he cares so much for his masi! :D :P
the blend of past n present is beautifully written.. loved it!
precap is interesting
do continu soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Loved it Shanu
Awesome update love you lots 🤗
I just loved the first meet of the couple
Ab baat aage kaise badti hai ye dekhna hai
Joe is really a sweet father
Kids are no less too
They are too adorable
Their love story seems interesting
Liked the couple convo too in the end
Let's see what happens next
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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