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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

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Posted: 10 years ago

#401

In previous chapter Khushi talked to Arnav about NK's memories and now Arnav shared the happenings of Mohan's birth, Maya's illness. One step at a time and they will surely come much closer at the end of their trip.

Khushi is struggling between her heart which is ready to beat for Arnav and mind which is full of insecurities, past and memories of last 10 years. On one hand, she finds the new family atmosphere consists of Mohan, Meera, Arnav and herself perfect and compatible. On the other hand, it scares her to move away from NK's safe environment. And that's why she creates excuses such as not finding herself worthy enough for Arnav. If only, her brain could accept what she saw and felt.

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sonal

@srain10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Fabulous update MB...

I really loved opening para somehow i look forward to read opening para than whole update...

Nani is amazing ...khushi might have idea what arnav wants but she is totally clueless about nani's intention...

Glad khushi wants to about arnav and arnav's life after they separated..

Parenthood frustration😆 i think every parent reading this story might have experienced this...

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kushikumari

@kushikumari

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Posted: 10 years ago

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 10 years ago

#404

interesting one.. near yet so far... far yet so near..

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kushikumari

@kushikumari

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Posted: 10 years ago

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#406

Originally posted by: kushikumari

i second that!

And to be drunk in a steel tumbler.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#407

Very Soothing ... And very calm just like the Sea..

This was amazing, conversations that are hard becoming easier when they their walking hand in hand... Just like Meera and Mohan..

Beautifully written.. Loving how your paving a new path for their journey!

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Arnav is talking about his married life , seems like he was yearning for a listener like khushi to pour his heart out . Arnav is very cordial with his ex wife & him answering Maya's endless questions is irking khushi . Finally this girl has started reacting , she was more or less emotionless after NK's death . Love the way Arnav - khushi's relationship is shaping up .

A very mature concept , penned so well 👏

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Kiran

@lovedrops

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Posted: 10 years ago

#409

after reading this update first thing that got into my mind was...

Aakarshan door jaane na de... Asuraksha paas aane na de...

Poor Khushi.. She is struggling hard to control her feelings fighting with her emotions. And being very close to Arnav .. Looking straight into his caramel orbs.. Peeking into his heart and mind is not at all helping her to be sane. Her heart is craving for his closeness.. Her mind is warning to keep herself away from him.

She should have realized by now that her heart won over her mind long time back .. When she kissed him. She should have believed by now that he is throwing away all her insecurities.. Sorrows.. To the corner with his sensitive touch of love.

When his heart flinched with pain.. Why she should feel bad for making him to feel pain. When his eyes spoke about the inner grapple.. Why she should have to feel to make him feel better doing anything. Why she wanted to know everything about him and Mohan.. Why she wanted to know what is the current relation between him and his ex wife... Isn't it called love or at least it is

called feelings for him if love is a big word at their current state.

One thing that one cannot control is their heart. It never listens to its owner.. It never stops beating for its loved one. It never stops craving for the love.

But I am happy that she is taking her steps forward to reach that treasure by keeping her thoughts about NK at bay.. I wish she takes the remaining steps with more courage and love and grasps her second chance before it gets too late.

Nice update Mira.

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#410

The elasticity of time - Mira, such a beautiful thought provoking phrase.

The more you pull the elastic, the wider one feels the time has lapsed, and let the elastic go and it shrinks making us feel that the time elapsed is not that wide afterall.

It is such beautiful phrases which makes me fall in love with your writing more and more.