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Posted: 10 years ago

Rajeev Khandelwal as Rajveer Singh Shekawat

Priyanka Bassi as Naina Singh Ahluwalia

In India..

Naina, Pooja, Huda and Ali are studying in the same college. Being classmates from past one year they have been good friends also.

"2 more days to go ..", Naina said happily to her friends who are studying seriously after their classes as they have an exam to take up the next day.

"Naina.. padaayi mein dhyaan do pehle, kal hamara exam hai.. aur tum kya kar rahi ho..", Ali said to Naina being very disappointed with her as she was not concentrating on studies at all and doing some random designs in her book.

"Arey rehne dey osool bhai, Naina bahut kush lag rahi hai, aur kamse kam aaj hum dono ka jagda bhi nahi hua", Huda said.

"Guys.. Main ab aur nahi pad sakti.. kal ka exam mein jaroor fail ho jaoungi.. there is no doubt in that.. but I am not going to get disappointed with that because you know the reason", Naina said again feeling happier than ever.

Naina is poor in studies infact her concentration is less on studies. Ali usually explains her the subject so that she can atleast pass the exams.

"Kal exam attend tho kiya karo Naina", Ali said angrily.

"Dekhti hoon..", Naina said while dragging pooja out from the group, "Come pooja.. I need a help from you".

"Pooja ko kaha le jaa rahi ho.. isko tho study karne do", Ali shouted back.

"Tumhari girlfriend ko main kidnap nahi kar rahi hoon. Will come back to you..", Naina winked at Ali. Ali being a shy guy, got embarassed easily and he did not say anything further.

After Naina and Pooja left from the group. "Naina jaroor exam nahi degi.. Main sharat lagata hoon", Huda said looking at Ali.

Ali looked lost seeing Pooja and Naina discussing something a little far away from where he was sitting. Huda put his hand on Ali's shoulder to bring him back of his thoughts.

"Kya hua.." Huda asked Ali. "Kuch nahi.. Naina kab samjhogi ki bas life mein enjoyment hi nahi.. bahut kuch hota hai.. uske liye har pal har cheez lite hai", said Ali being serious.

"Dont worry Ali, atleast she is happy with this.. waise ye Raj kaisa insaan hai?.. Serious? yaa naina ki tarah bindaas hai??", Huda asked Ali.

"Mujhe kya pata, maine Raj se kabhi mila hi nahi.. lekin har roj har ganta iske bhare mein sunta hun.. Naina ki muh se..", said Ali.

"Kya Naina pyaar karti hai Raj se?? ", Huda could not stop asking this question as he could see it in Naina's eyes that she loves Raj a lot eventhough Naina says that Raj is her best friend.

But Ali did not answer Huda's question.

In London..

"Raj.. I cant tell you how much I am gonna miss you..", Abhi said to Raj who was packing his things.

Raj looked up at Abhi and said, "Ek kaam karo.. tum bhi aajao India".

"Raj you know I cant come", said Abhi. "Waise aaj ka party mein correct time mein aaya karo.. I know you dont like wasting your valuable time on parties. But I invited all our friends. So please..", continued Abhi.

"Ok sure..", said Raj closing the bag as he finished his packing.

In India..

"Ok Naina.. ye batao tum Raj ko kya gift de rahi ho..", asked Pooja.

"Gift??..", Naina said as she was confused. "Gift tho Raj layega mere liye.. main kyon doon gift?", said Naina

"Acha tho tum kuch nahi dooge Raj ko.. ", asked Pooja.

"mmm..??" Naina started thinking, "Ok done.. gift dungi.. par kya dun??", asked Naina.

"Watch??", Pooja suggested.."No.. mere paas itna money nahi hain.. watch karidne ka", replied Naina.

"mere paas hain.. chalo gift kareedte hain.." Pooja said to Naina.

"No.." Naina replied instantly, "nahi pooja.. I can ask my brother also if I want money.. par mein apni money se gift kareedna chahti hoon. Theek hai.. main ek kaam karti hoon.. ab ke liye bas flower bouquet dungi as a welcome gift.. ek mahine mein Raj ka birthday hai.. tab mein use watch gift dungi", Naina said happily.

"Excellent..", pooja said and they left college.

In London..

In the evening, there was a party with few of Raj's friends. Abhi and Raj came early and were not at all enjoying their party as they were waiting for their close friends to join who were not yet turned up.

"Ye Alekh.. kaha reh gaya.." Raj said irritatingly vexed of waiting.

"Main tumhara piche..", alekh arrived just and was smiling seeing Raj's irritation.

"Kya Alekh.. itna late kyun hua.. waise Nandini kahaa hain??.. I told you to pick her up..", said Raj looking behind Alekh for Nandini.

"Yeah she came with me only.. par andar aathe hi gayab hogayi.. ladies you know.. make up check karne gayi hogi.. Thoda sabar rakhna.. aajayegi.. ", Alekh chuckled.

Alekh continued, "Meanwhile there is one more fan of you here I guess.. who is watching you from long time..", pointing to an unknown girl who is very much impressed with Raj.

While Raj turned to see where Alekh was pointing, he saw a girl waving at him. Raj smiled at her. She came near Raj and said, "Hi.. I am Lucy.. May I know you name.."

"Hi.. I am Rajveer singh..", said Raj with the same smile. "He is Alekh and he is Abhimanyu.." introduced both of his friends to her.

But she is less interested with others who are standing beside Raj, she said "I am here with my colleagues.. so boring you know.."

"Oh.. you can join us.. we are not that boring..", replied Abhi in a flirtious way. "Actually we are having a meet up before we depart.. we are going back to India", Raj replied immediately to stop Abhi's flirting.

"ohh is it??.. so sad..", she said sadly, "shall we dance??", she offered her hand to Raj and he accepted.

While Raj and that girl were dancing, Nandini came there.. and saw them.. "Who is she?", Nandindi asked Alekh who was busy drinking alcohol.

"Raj ki hone wali girlfriend", replied Alekh, "Huh??", Nandini got cunfused.."jee haan.. ek na ek din ye hona hi hai..", Abhi said to Nandini.

"Kya keh rahe ho Abhi..", she asked Abhi.

Abhi replied, "Haan Nandini.. tum ek dusre ko itna jaante ho.. itna samaj sakte ho.. and you have been dating for 3 years.. tho next kya hai?? ye tumne socha hai kya kabhi??", asked Abhi.

"Patha nahi Abhi, sochna padega iss bare mein, India jaate iske barein mein sochungi..", said Nandini.

"Main tum dono ka wedding invitation ke liye wait karunga.. aur tu alekh, in donon ka help karna iss barein mein aur haan tum wahaan bhi itna piya na karo Alekh its not good", Abhi said.

Meanwhile Raj came back to them, "Nandini.. you are looking fabulous", Raj commented looking at Nandini.

"Thanks", she said and all got busy in enjoying the party.

After the party is over, Raj, Alekh, Nandindi and Abhi came to Raj's quarters as it is the last day they will be staying together. Alekh decided to accompany Raj at work in India, so he decided to go to India along with Raj.

While Nandini never wanted to stay long in London, and for also Raj, she decided to go back to India.

Raj, Alekh and Nandini will be leaving to India, made Abhi very sad. They discussed some old stuff they did when they were studying.

They all laughed memorizing all the things they did. When Alekh went to drop Nandindi at her quarters as it was late night, Raj and Abhi were having a conversation when suddenly Abhi found a childhood photo of Raj with some kids.

"Raj.. ye photo", asked Abhi, Raj looked at Abhi and saw the photo which he was looking at.

"Hmm.. ye hamara bachpan ka photo hai..", said Raj and was about to take photo from his hand.

"Arey.. theek se dekhne do.. Oh.. wow.. hamara Raj.. bachpan se itna smart hai..aur ye kaun hai tumhe competition de raha hai..", he asked pointing to a kid who is a taller than all the kids in that photo.

"Naveen hai mera bachpan ka dost ab bhi mera best friend hai.. tumko bataya hai na main ne pehle.. wahi naveen hain..", said Raj smiling.

"Aur ye sab..", asked Abhi not knowing about other kids in that photo.

"ye Yudi.. Mera younger brother, Neelu.. Meri choti behen..", he said pointing to 2 kids.

"Aur ye??.. ", he pointed to a little girl who is younger than all the others in the photo.

"Ye Naina.. Naveen ki choti behen..", replied Raj. "Oh Naina.. beautiful name.. she is cute.. can you show me one of her recent pics", asked Abhi.

Raj asked, "why??", "Are yaar mujhe bhi ek ladki se setting karwa do.. main bhi India aa jaunga tere saath..", asked Abhi.

"Iske liye Naina kyun?.. Koyi aur Indian ladki ko dhundo..", Raj replied back taking the photo from Abhi's hand and keeping it inside his bag.

"Raj.. Please yaar ek baar.. ek baar dikhao naa..", Abhi started pleading. Meanwhile Alekh returned, Abhi went to Alekh and said, "Tumhe Naina patha hai??"

"Haan kyun??..Woh Raj ki friend hai ", Alekh said. "Main Naina ko dekhna chahti hoon.. uski bachpan ki pic ko dekha maine.. bahut cute hai.. kaisi hogi ab? Raj se uski ek tasveer maang rahaa hun tho nahi de raha hai mujhe", Abhi asked.

"Raj.. Naina se bahut kam baat karta hai.. Oh Naveen ki behen hai.. Naveen tho Raj ki best friend hai.. Naina ke barein mein Raj ne mujhe kabhi nahi bataya ki ohh kaise dikhti hai.. aur mujhe bhi ek photo bhi nahi dikhaya Raj ne uski.. mujhe ab doubt aa raha hai Raj par", Alekh said.

"Alekh.. stop it please.. Naina meri best friend ki sister hain.. aur tum dono mere hi samne Naina ke barein mein ye sab discussion kar rahe hai..", Raj tried to distract them.

"Main jaa ra hoon na India.. Mein Naina ki tasveer ko bej dunga tumhe", Alekh promised Abhi, making Raj more irritated. Raj looked at them irritatingly and left the place.

Abhi and Alekh laughed out loud looking at Raj's situation.

Edited by priyankazzz - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago

At Night,

Raj was in deep thoughts, when Alekh came and sat beside him.

Alekh - "Kya soch rahe ho Raj.."

Raj - "Kuch nahi.. bus ye soch raha tha ki ghar jaane ke baad kya kya kaam karna hai.. "

Alekh - "Ohh No.. Stop making list now itself.. ghar jaane ke baad aaraam hi aaraam lena hai.. aur kuch mat sochna.."

Raj - "Nahi Alekh.. I have lot of work to do.. Maa itne dinon se akele sare business ko sambhal rahi hai.. Ab main maa ko takleef mein nahi dekh sakta.. sara business main hi sambhalunga.."

Alekh - "Theek hai Raj.. par jyaada mat soch.. Aaj se main bhi tumhara saath hun.. jo kuch bhi tumhare maa ne sahaa hai aaj tak.. Ohh Man.. She is great yaar.. Tum sab ko bina kisike help leke bada kiya aur business bhi sambhalte hai.. She is very great yaar.. ab se oh akeli nahi hai.. "

Raj smiled and thanked Alekh for his support.

Alekh - "vaise Nandini ke barein mein kuch socha hai" Raj looked at him confused,

Raj - "Matlab"

Alekh - "Matlab.. Tum dono teen saal se saat hain.. dont you want to take this relationship to next level"

Raj began thinking.

Raj - "Haa Alekh.. tum theek keh rahe ho.. par mujhe kuch waqt chahiye"

Alekh - "hmmm.. ok take your time.. okay chalo good night.. mujhe neend aa rahi hai" saying this Alekh slept leaving Raj to think over it.

Next day, Raj, Alekh and Nandini started their journey to India

In India,

Naveen - "Ye Naina subah subah kaha gayi..", he asked kaka who is a servant.

Kaka - "Pata nahi Naveen baba.. kuch bola nahi"

Naveen - "Naina bhi na.. Aaj Raj ko receive karne jaa rahe hai aur ye ab gayab",

Naveen went into the "Shekavat's" mansion which is exactly opposite to his house.

Naveen - "Good Morning my dear Madhuri Dixit.. " Naveen smiled looking at the middle aged lady who is reading newspaper. The lady looked up to see Naveen infront of her. The lady is Raj's mom.

"Good Morning DCP sir.. Kitne baar bola Naveen ki aisa mat bulao mujhe..", Raj's mom scolded Naveen eventhough she knows that Naveen likes to call her with that name only and also she likes to be called with that name.

"hahaha.. are madhuri dixit ki tarah hai aapki smile toh aur naam hi nahi sujta mujhe", Naveen laughed. "Waise yudi aur Neelu kahaan hai..", Naveen enquired

Raj's Mom - "Oh itni jaldi kaise uth jaate hai.. Abhi un donon ko aadhi raat hue hai.. patha nahi kab sudhrega ye dono.. late night parties, roj raat do ya theen baje ghar aana habit hogaye hai donon ki.."

"Relax aunty.. enjoy karne ka age hai.. enjoy karne do.. dheere dheere seekh jaayega..", Naveen assured her.

"hmm.. Naina kaha hai.. ", Raj's mom enquired as she is used to see Naina early in the morning.

"Maine socha yahaa hai.. Naina yahaa nahi tho kaha gayi hogi..", Naveen started worrying about Naina.

Raj's Mom - "arrey.. kahin nahi gayi hogi.. oh Raj aa raha hai na.. so kuch special plan kar rahi hogi", Raj's Mom smiled.

"Waise hum do ganton mein airport jaana hai.. main jaake neelu aur yudi ko utatha hoon", said Naveen and went to Yudi's room and next to Neelu's room to wake them up.

After an hour,

All are ready to receive Raj at airport, Naina has not yet come.

"Mom.. aur kitna time lagega Naina ko.. Naina kahaa hai..", Neelu got irritated waiting for Naina.

"Mom.. ek kaam karte hain hum airport chale jaate hain Raj bhayya ko receive karne.. Aur Naina ko inform karenge ki oh seedha airport aa jaaye..", Yudi suggested.

"Kaise inform karte hai.. madam ka phone bhi ghar mein hi hai..", Naveen said irritatingly and now worrying more about her.

"Theek hai.. hum chalte hai.. main kaka se kahunga ki agar Naina ghar aajayengi tho seedha airport aane ko ..", said Naveen and informed kaka and all left to airport to receive Raj.

In the airport,

Raj, Alekh and Nandini came out together. Raj saw the people waiting for him. He became so happy to see them and rushed towards them.

He hugged his mom and said, "Missed you so badly Mamma..",

"I missed you too beta.." She replied.

"yo Bro.. you did not miss me.." yudi asked Raj.

"I missed both of you a lot..", tightly hugging both Yudi and Neelu.

Then he turned to Naveen and hugged him, "Naveen kaise ho yaar.. Bahut handsome dikh rahe ho kya baat hai.. police wala aur itna handsome kaise hai yaar ", Raj asked.

"Main theek hoon.. aur police wala handsome nahi dikhte hai kya .. tu aur tumhare stupid logics ", Naveen laughed out loud.

"hmmm.." Raj became silent and suddenly he remembered that he forgot to introduce ALekh and Nandini to them. He turned back and called them to come forward.

Alekh who was looking at Neelu, he dont believe in love at first sight, but somehow seeing Neelu he forgot everything.

"Maa ye Alekh hai.. Aur ye Nandini..my friends..", Raj said.

Alekh came forward and touched her feet. "Jeete raho beta.. ", Raj's mom blessed him. Meanwhile Nandini's father has come to receive Nandini at the airport.

Nandini ran towards his father and hugged him. Nandini's father looked at Raj's family and came near to talk to them.

"Nice to meet you Madhuri ji.. Aapke barein bahut kuch suna hai.. Aapki success ke barein mein aur aapki company growth ke barein mein bahut achi talk hai..", Nandini's father said to Raj's mom.

"Nice to meet you too Amit Singh ji.. Maine bhi aapke barein bahut kuch suna hai apke business ke barein mein..", said Raj's mom.

Raj's mom being a business woman knows all the big shots in the city and Amit Singh father of NAndini is also one of them. After having a brief chat they left airport.

When Raj and family with Naveen were about to get into the car, Naina came running, flower bouquet in her hands and stood infront of Rajveer. She looked at Rajveer, who was looking dashing, in simple white t-shirt and jeans, with sun glasses.

She was also wearing a simple t-shirt and jeans and was sweating badly.

Naina was looking at Rajveer without taking her eyes off him. "Naina you are late.." yudi shouted. This brought her back to senses and said "Raj..".

"Naina..", Raj replied. "kya hua.. aise hi khadi rahogi kya.. oh phool mujhe dogi ya kisi aur ke liye laaye ho..", Raj enquired smiling at her.

Naina gave the flowers to him. "hmm.. Impressed.. bahut ache hai..", he said smelling the flowers. Naina gave a smile.

"Are Naina tum itni chup chap kyn hai.. Raj se baat nahi karogi kya..", Raj's mom asked.

"Nahi.. main nahi baat karungi..", Naina said.

Raj - "kyun"

Naina - "kyunki tumne mujhe inform nahi kiya ki tum aane wale ho.."

Raj - "What?? maine tho maa ko inform kiya na"

Naina - "Aunty ko inform kiya.. mujhe nahi.."

Raj - "Bachi jaisi baatein mat karo.. chalo dhoop bahut hai.. car mein baitke baatein karte hain..", Naina got into the car with others.

They headed back to Shekavat's mansion. In the house, all started chit chatting. Raj brought many gifts for his mother Yudi and Neelu.

"Mera gift kaha hai..", Naina asked searching in the bag. Raj looked at Naina and said, "arey main toh bhool hi gaya.. tumhe gift laane.. there is gift left here.. if you want you can take it..", he smiled.

"What is that..", she opened. Its a monkey soft toy. she made a face at Raj. Raj started laughing.

"Mujhe nahi chahiye.. tumhi rakhlo.." saying this she got up and went to help Kaka who was shifting the suit cases to Raj's room.

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Raj's mom - "Chalo Raj.. tum dono thak gaye honge.. upar jao tumhara room ready hai.. aur Alekh.. tumhara bhi ready hai.. Chalo main dikahti hoon"

Alekh - "Nahi Aunty aap baitiye na.. Raj hai na oh dikhayega.. Chalo Raj.. "

While going Raj turned back "haan Naveen.. see in you sometime.. we have lot to catch up" he winked at Naveen. Naveen smiled.

Raj and Alekh first went to Raj's room where Naina was busy in collecting few things of hers in that room.

"Ye sab kya hai??", Raj asked Naina.

Naina - "Oh mera kuch samaan yahaan reh gaya.. bhool gayi yahin par.."

Raj - "Kitni baar bola ki mera room use mat karo.. you make it messy.. Ab mera samaan doondna padega is mess mein.." looked at her irritatingly.

"Nahi Raj baba.. sab samaan pehle jaisa hi rakha hai Naina ne.. bas ye samaan leke jaana bhool gayi..", Kaka said.

Naina - "rehene de kaka.. Raj ko mujhe dhantna bahut pasand hai.. main kuch bhi karoo kuch bhi kahun oh galat hain inke liye..".

Raj - "Tum jo kaam hi aise karte ho.."

Naina - "Rehne de.. tum yahaa aao..", Naina caught Raj's hand and dragged him towards the window which opened to the garden of Naveen's and Naina's house, beautiful with all kinds flowers.

The view is so beautiful that any one gets mesmerized.

"Kaisi hain.. ", Naina asked Raj who was still looking out.

"Woww..", exclaimed Alekh, who was standing behind both of them.

Naina turned back to see Alekh and smiled. "Aap Alekh hai na..", Naina asked.

Alekh - "haan aapko kaise patha.. Raj ne tho humara introduction nahi karvaya aapse.."

Naina - "Aunty ne mujhe bola ki aap Raj ke saat aa rahe hain yahaan..", she smiled

Alekh - "oh theek hai.. Raj tho aapke barein mein kabhi hume bataya nahi..par ab hum mile hain tho aapke barein mein boliye..", Alekh asked.

Naina - "Oh..ok.. Mein Naina.. Naveen ki behen.. opposite house yahaan se jo dikh rahe hain na.. hum wahi par rahte haina".

Alekh - "toh ohh garden bhi aap hi ka hain??",

Naina - "Ha.."

Alekh - "Beautiful.."

Naina - "Thank you.. Mujhe gardening ka bahut shauk hai.."

Alekh - "Fantastic..app bahut interesting hai"

Naina - "Mujhe aap keh kar mat bulayiye.. mein tho aapse bahut choti hoon age mein..",

Alekh - "Theek hai.. Ok Naina.. tum kya karti ho.."

Naina - "mein 2nd year graduation kar rahi hoon.."

Alekh - "Good.."

Raj interfered and said to Alekh, "aap dono baad mein bhi baat kar sakte hain.. chalo tumhara room dikhata hoon main"

Alekh - "Raj u take rest.. Naina hai na.. mujhe room dikhayegi.. kyun Naina.."

Naina - "haan chalo.."

Raj - "Naina.. ye tumhara samaan kaun nikhalege yahaan se.."

Alekh - "Main hoon na Raj.. main Naina ka help karungi.."

Naina - "Thanks Alekh.. Raj se help maangu tho bhi woh mujhe help nahi karega.. par tum bina maange tum mera help kare rahe ho.. you are so sweet"

Alekh - "Waise ek baat puchu.." taking Naina's things in his hand, Raj was having hard time to listen to Alekh's flirting

Naina - "Haan pucho.."

Alekh - "Tum.. love at first sight mein believe karti hoo?"

Raj and Naina both shouted at once - "What..",

Alekh - "haan kuch nahin.. Chalo chalo jaate jaate baat karte hain.." he said to Naina.

Naina - "Haan chalo..", Naina left Raj's room. Alekh turned back to see Raj glaring at him. Alekh winked at Raj and followed Naina.

Alekh came back after sometime and said to Raj, "wow what an interesting character.. tumne toh kabhi bataya nahi Naina ke barein mein..she is so cool man"

Raj - "Naina ki bhayya Naveen aur bhi interesting hain.."

Alekh - "Dhamki de rahe ho.."

Raj - "kuch bhi samajlo"

Alekh - "Raj ek baat batao.. tumne kahaa ki Naveen ki parents aur tumhara parents family friends hai.. hai na.."

Raj - "haan.. Naveen aur Naina ke parents ek car accident mein mar gaye hain ",

Alekh - "Aur business mein bhi partners the na?.."

Raj - "hmm.."

Alekh - "Par Naveen ka ghar itna old fashioned kyun hai.. tumhari family ki tarah oh sophisticated life kyun nahi jee rahe hai.."

Raj - "Oh isiliye kyunki.. Naveen ko uss ghar mein bahut saare memories hain unki.. aur uss ghar ko re-model nahi karna chahta hai.."

Alekh - "Yaar Raj.. Main Naveen aur Naina ka bahut bada fan ban gaya hun.." smiled Alekh.

Raj - "Accha.."

Alekh - "Naina kitni sweet hai.. aur look at that house.. kitni acchi tarah se sajaa hai ghar ko.."

Raj - "Oh sab Naina ki maa ne arrange kiya tha.. that's why they dont want any changes in that house"

Alekh - "Theek hai.. chalo mein fresh up hoke aatha hoon.." and Alekh left.

In the evening, Raj went to Naveen's house, Naveen was seriously studying a case sitting in the hall.

When Raj came he looked up and said, "Welcome Raj..", and Raj seated beside Naveen in the couch.

"toh kya chal raha hai.. kaisa hai police wala job", Raj asked

Naveen - "Theek nahi hai yaar.. ek mystery solve hi nahi ho rahi hai.. 2 mahino se iss case par work kar rahaa hoon.. abhi tak kuch clues hi nahi mila".

Raj - "hmm dont worry Naveen..tum kar paoge .. waise Naina hai ander"

Naveen - "Nahi.. oh apne doston ke saat bahar gayi hai.."

Raj - "oh theek hai" and they had a brief conversation about their past life.

Naveen - "haan oh Raghav chacha ko maine bata diya ki tum India wapas aagaye hai.. aur ab tum sab sambhalega.. he said he will come in sometime to meet you" Raj's face became hardened hearing this.

Raj - "acha theek hai main chalta hoon. aaj Dinner saat mein khaathe hain.. be there by 8 pm" , he said and left.

Dinner time,

Raj's mom looked at the people sitting on the table chit chatting laughing and her eyes has tears looking at the happiness in her children.

Raj said - "Maa.. ab sab kuch theek hoga..", he promised

Raj saw Alekh and Naina were having a conversation where Naina is continuously laughing to Alekh's jokes 'Crap' is what Raj thought.

Not only Raj, someone else is also enraged with Alekh and Naina's closeness and the person is none other than Neelu.

Neelu got very much impressed with Alekh when her brother introduced him. She dont know what is happening to her every time she saw him.

She wanted to talk to Alekh, but just one day, she could not get attracted to him in one day, she has to find out what this feelings for him.

Meanwhile Alekh took his mobile out and took 2 snaps of Naina where Naina posed happily, smiling.

Neelu got very angry seeing this and she left without completing her food.

"Neelu.." Rajs mom called out for which she did not get any response from neelu. "Arey.. isse kya hua..", Raj's mom asked.

"pet bhar gaya hoga..", Alekh said, knowing what it is that the reason for Neelu's abrupt exit and smiled.

Alekh turned to Naina and said - " mujhe tumhari help chahiye",

Naina - 'Kya??'

Alekh whispered something in Naina's ears, Naina's eyes widened at the mischeivous thought and they both gave a high five for their plan.

Raj was glaring at Alekh.

After Dinner, in Raj's room

Raj - "What was that Alekh?",

Alekh - "What was.. what??"

Raj - "you know exactly what I am talking about"

Alekh - "No.. you dont know exactly what I am planning.." saying this he took out his mobile and dialled a number. It was abhi. Alekh put the speaker on.

Alekh - "abhi mai ne uski pics send kiya hai.. dekha hai kya.."

Abhi - "ha dekha hai.. kitni beautiful hai yaar.."

Alekh - "I know you will like her.."

Raj snatching the phone from ALekh and switching off it, "what the hell is going on..Alekh just get out of here..agar tum dubara aisa harkat kiya tho mujhse bura aur koyi nahi hoga.. you get it..", Raj shouted.

Alekh came out of Raj's room and laughed at Raj's behaviour.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Next Morning,

"Raj phone baj rahaa hai uthao tho sahi..", Raj woke up to see Naina infront of him and jerked out.

"What the hell are you doing here..", Raj covered himself with a sheet as he was only in shorts while he was sleeping.

"haha.. Aunty ne tumko uthane ko bola issiliye aayi hoon..aur haan Raj mera ek stole yahi par reh gaya..", she started searching while Raj sitting on the bed caught his head in frustration.

Naina searched every where but did not find it. But she found something like her stole on bed. So she pulled the blanket of Raj's to look at that thing.

"Aahh.. God dammit.. what the hell are you doing.. get out of here.. " Raj again shouted.

"See".. Naina pulled her stole which was under his blanket and showing it to him she said, "Maine kahaa na.. yahi per hogi..chalo bye..", she turned to leave.

Raj heaved in relief. She again turned back to Raj.

"Now what..??", Raj exclaimed.

She had a smile on her face and said "Good Morning.."

"Get lost..", Raj shouted.

Outside,

Alekh - "Kya hua Raj itna chilla kyun raha hai.."

Naina - "Pata nahi Alekh.. Maine just good morning bola.."

Alekh - "Good morning bolne se itna chid raha hai kya.. chalo dekhte hain kya baat hain.."

Naina - "Nahi nahi mujhe nahi ander jana hai.. he will kill me this time.."

Alekh - "hmmm.. theek hai.."

Naina - "Breakfast at 8 am.. aur breakfast yahaan nahi mere ghar mein.. haa Raj ko batana bhool hi gaya.. tum use leke aana"

Alekh - "Sure"

Naina left from there. Alekh went to Raj's room who was speaking on phone.

Raj - "Good morning Nandini.. oh main bahut thak gaya tha.. I was having a good sleep.. isiliye phone ka ring bhi nahi sunayi diya.."

Nandini - "Its ok Raj.. tho kal ka day kaisa tha"

Raj - "hmm very good.. aur aaj mein maa ke saat office ja rahaa hoon.. Alekh bhi join karega"

Nandini - "awesome", Alekh stood infront of Raj.

Raj - "Chalo bye.. Mujhe ready hoke jaana hai.. Baad mein baat karta hoon"

Nandini - "theek hai bye"

Raj got out of bed. "Naina par itna kyun chilla raha tha.. Naina chillana chahiye tha na tumhe aisa dekhkar", Alekh winked at Raj

Raj - "...Are privacy naam ki koyi cheez hi nahi rahi hai.. "

Alekh - "Hahaha..Tum aisa baat kar rahe ho ki.. tum ladki ho.. aur Naina ladka.. haha.. Imagine Raj.. agar tumahri jagah.. Naina hoti..aur naina ki jagah tum.. haha"

Raj became serious immediately and "Shut up Alekh.. Bahut bakwass joke tha", and left from there

"Naina ne bataya ki breakfast uske ghar mein karna hai aaj.. Shayad breakfast wahi banayi hogi" Alekh informed Raj and he also left to get ready.

At the table,

Naina - "Raj nahi aaya abhi tak.. Kya kar rahe hain.." she asked Alekh, who has already come to have breakfast.

Alekh - "Arey kal se dekh raha hoon.. pata nahi oh itna kyun uchal raha hai.. har choti si baat par.. He was not like int London"

Naina - "Ha oh tension mein hain shayad.. aaj uska pehla din hain na office mein isiliye..". Meanwhile kaka informed Naina that Raj left to office without having breakfast and Naina became sad.

In office,

Raj's mom introduced Raj to everyone and announced that he would be taking up the responsibilities.

Raj in his cabin,

Raj's mom - "Raj dont need to rush out and need to know all the things right now.. dheere dheere sab pata chal jayega.."

Raj - "ok maa"

Raj's mom left to her cabin leaving Raj. He got immersed in looking at the files his mom has given.

Alekh also joined work and he would be helping Raj. Raj got busy with work for few weeks. He did not get much time to spend with his family also.

In the evening,

Raj - "Alekh.. I am going out for a while.. If anything is important call me"

ALekh - "Kaha jaa rahe ho.."

Raj - "Oh Nandini bore feel kar rahi thi.. isiliye maine kaha ki bahar jayenge.."

Alekh - "Oh theek hai tu jaa"

Naina called Raj many number of times but he did not lift the call.

Naina called Alekh

Alekh - "Hello.."

Naina - "Hello Alekh main Naina.."

Alekh - "Haa Naina bol.. "

Naina - "Raj kahaa hai.. main kitni baar call kiya.. par response nahi hai.."

Alekh - "Ha oh bahar gaya hai.."

Naina - "Par call kyun nahi lift kar raha hain woh.. koyi problem mein hogi tho.."

Alekh - "Car drive kar rahaa hoga.."

Naina - "Main do gante se call kar rahi hoon.. and now his phone is switched off..ab mujhe bahut tension ho rahi hai"

ALekh - "dont worry Naina..Main abhi ek baar try karti hoon usko"

Alekh called Nandindi,

Nandini - "ALekh!!"

Alekh - "Nandindi Raj tumhare saat hai??"

Nandindi - "Haa hain"

Alekh - "usko phone do". Nandindi handled her phone to Raj.

Raj - "Ha Alekh.. bol kya hua.."

Alekh - "arey tumahara phone kyun off hai..kitni baar call karu main.."

Raj - "Kyun kuch important hai kya.."

Alekh - "ha oh Naina tumhe call kar rahi thi.. aur wo tense ho rahi thi tumhare liye.. isiliye call kiya.."

Raj - "Alekh.. tum bhi naa.. Naina ko serious mat le.. ohh aise hi call karte rahegi mujhe pareshan karne.."

Alekh felt sad about this, Alekh - "Raj..oh..",he was about to say something but did not, "rehne de.. bye.. ghar mein milta hun"

Raj - "Bye"

ALekh called Naina and informed that Raj was busy in something important thats why he did not lift her calls.

Naina - "ok Alekh..Alekh jaldi ghar aaja.. Main tumhare liye special khana bana rahi hoon.. aur Neelu ka favourite bhi" she chuckled

Alekh smiled at the other end hearing this and said, "Ha aa raha hoon darling..wait karna mera.. aaj hum dhamaal machate hai.. haha"

Alekh cut the phone and began thinking about Raj.

Dinner,

Naina - "Neelu.. oh kya hain na.. mujhe lagta hai mujhe pyar ho gaya hai"

Neelu who was sitting silently beside Naina looked up to see Naina, "pyaar??.. par kisse"

Naina - "guess who??"

Neelu - "koyi tumhara college mate hoga.."

Naina - "nahi"

Neelu - "toh kisi friend se??"

Naina - "nahi.. ok main ek clue deti hoon.. oh tumhara ghar mein hi rehta hai"

Now Neelu was holding back her tears and said, "Kya oh tumhe propose kiya"

Naina - "Abhi tak nahi.. But soon.."

Neelu got very disppointed and got up to leave from there where Alekh was just behind her.

She could not stop crying now and her tears came out and began crying.

Alekh - "Oh my God..Neelu.. I am sorry.. ye sab Naina ka plan tha..Tum bhi na agar tum mujhe pasand karti ho to keh deti.. chup chup kar mujhe dekhti ho.. par mujhse baat nahi karti.. tumhe kya laga main ye sab nahi dekh raha hoon.. Arey tumhe dekhti hi mujhe love at first sight hogaya hai.. Maine ye sab Naina ko bola aur ye mujhe help karne mein ye natak kari.."

Neelu - "Natak.." she exclaimed

Naina - "Ha toh aur kya.. kyun apni feelings se bhaag rahi ho tum.. maine kabhi tumhe chup chap nahi dekha.. jabse Alekh aayi hai.. tum bas usko dekti rah jaati ho.. Maine ye sab notice kiya.. issiliye maine special dinner plan kiya bas tum donon ke liye " she winked

turning to ALekh..

Naina - "Ab tum kuch bologi yaa main hi sab bolna padega Neelu ko"

Alekh - "Tum yahaa hamare beech khadi rahogi toh kaise bolu.."

Naina - "Arey waah.. balaayi ka jamaana hi nahi raha.." and she left from there.

Alekh turning to Neelu said, "Main tumse bahut pyar karta hun Neelu..dont think like if love can happen in this much short time.. If Love has to happen it will happen. you can never run away from it"

Neelu accepted his love and they hugged each other.

Naina came running inside screaming, "Bhayya aa raha hai.."

Alekh became tensed, "ab hum kya kare..", he caught Neelu's hand and running here and there.

Naina - "Alekh!! peeche ki darvaaje se bahar jao.. jaldi.."

Naina turned to see Naveen infront of door,

"oh bhayya.. oh dinner..", Naina fumbled.

"Maine tho tumse nahi kaha ki main aaj jaldi aane wala hoon", Naveen questioned.

"What..",Naina exclaimed and turned around to see Alekh and Neelu under the table hiding from Naveen.

Naina has to do something before Naveen could figure them out.

"Ohh bhayya.. mujhe tumhe kuch batani hai..", said Naina.

Alekh's and Neelu's eyes widened in shock thinking what was Naina about to say.

"Bhayya.. mera second term fee..abhi tak bhari nahi hai.. mujhe paisa chahiye..", said Naina.

"Oh no.. how can I forget.. main abhi tumhe de deti hoon.. kal jaroor pay karna",and Naveen left to other room.

Alekh came out and hugged Naina - "Thank god Naina..Thank you so much"

Alekh and Neelu escaped from there before Naveen came out.

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It was Raj's Birthday,

There was a party in Shekawat's mansion. It was very huge party organized inviting all the big business people of the city. Nandini's family was also present there.

Raj invited them warmly and has asked to have some drinks. He hugged Nandindi and told her that she is looking stunning.

Naina was very happy to see the party was a very big success. She was planning some dance show to make Raj happy. Meanwhile she saw Nandindi being very close to Raj.

Nandindi was wearing a red saree in which she looked sexy. Naina tried to distract herself from looking at them.

Raj hand-in-hand with Nandini, came near Raj's mom.

Raj's mom - "Nandindi beta.. kaisi ho tum"

Nandini - "jee achi hoon aunty..yudi aur neelu kahaa hai"

Raj's mom pointed to yudi and neelu who are enjoying with their friends

Raj's mom met Amit Singh and his wife.

Raj's mom - "bahut khoob surat hai aapki beti." she informed Nandini's parents.

Nandini's mom - "Nandini ne mujhse kaha ki, Raj aur Nandini ek dusre se pasand karte hai. Ab hamara farz hota hai ki ye relationship ko aage badane ki"

Raj's mom - "Matlab.. main samjhi nahi"

Nandini's mom - "Matlab hum in dono ki shadi ke barein mein kyun nahi soch sakte.."

Raj's mom got surprised listening to that. "Haan hame ek baar Raj aur Nandini se bhi pochna chahiye..", Raj's said

Nandini's mom - "Nandini ki taraf se haan hai.. app Raj se bhi baat kar ke hume bata dijiye..koyi jaldi nahi..par hum iss saal Nandini ki shaadi karwane chahte hai.. issiliye keh rahe hain hum"

Raj's mom - "Haan main Raj se baat karlungi.."

Naina was standing apart from all of them watching all this.

Alekh came near Naina and said, "kya hua.. tum itni chup chap.. aur tumhare chehre par bharah kyun baje hain ",

Naina - "oh.. oh.. bhayya abhi tak aayi nahi.. isiliye thoda upset hoon ",

Alekh - "hmm.. jhoot bolne ki aadat honi chahiye.. chahe toh main kuch madat kar sakta hoon.. un dono ko barein mein batata hun", pointing to Raj and Nandini

Naina - "un dono ke barein mein.. kya.."

Alekh - "oh dono.. they are dating eachother since three years.."

Naina - "Kya.. aisa nahi ho sakta Raj ne mujhe kabhi bataya nahi.."

Alekh - "tum upset ho issiliye ki Raj ne tumhe nahi bataya.. ya.. un dono ko saat dekh kar.."

Naina did not reply anything and left from there. Alekh got the answer.

Alekh - "So miss Naina Singh Ahluwalia.. you are in love with Raj" he smiled but the smile wiped off immediately because he would have been very happy if the person Naina in love with is not Raj.

"Its gonna be a big mess..", Alekh looked up and said, "tu bhi ek number ki khiladi hai.. kaise khel kelta hai.. kab.. kiske saat.. kisiko bhi nahi malum.. please bhagavan.. Naina ko kush rehne do"

Naina firstly did not believe what Alekh said. She stood watching them standing a little far from them.

Nandini gave Raj a gift neatly wrapped. She asked him to open it. There was a watch inside. Raj looked at her happily as he liked it a lot.

Nandini - "I have ordered this from switzerland Raj. Especially for you.. how is it.."

Raj - "Thank you Nandini.. Its fabulous", replied Raj touching the watch lovingly.

Naina also brought him a watch as gift which was still in her hands, but she did not give it to him. She kept it aside.

She was on verge of crying now. She wanted someone to hold her. Alekh saw her dealing with her feelings.

"yes Naina.. you need to get clear about your feelings.." Alekh thought.

Someone kept a hand on her shoulder, she turned around to see Naveen. she was glad that he came. She was feeling lonely. Only her brother could help her to get out of this loneliness not even Raj.. not even Alekh..

She hugged him fiercely sighing in relief.

"What happened Naina..",Naveen never saw Naina like this. He could figure out that something was bothering her. He looked around to see where Raj was. He was having a cheerful conversation with his family.

"bhayya ghar chalte hai..", Naina said looking up into his eyes.

Her eyes, Naveen had never seen that much sadness in her eyes. "kisine tumse kuch kahaa kya..", Naveen asked.

She shook her head negatively. "ok Chalo ghar chalte hai..", Naveen left with Naina informing Alekh who was just coming from outside.

Alekh knew the reason for their leaving. "I am sorry Naina.. But you have to deal with it", Alekh thought.

Next Day,

Naina was again fresh and active as before. Alekh saw her in the garden and went upto her. She did not look sad or upset.

Naina - "Good morning Alekh", she smiled

Alekh - "Tumhe memory loss hai kya??" asked Alekh

Naina - "what??"

Alekh - "Kal jo kuch bhi maine kahaa tumhe yaad hai na??"

Naina - "Haa yaad hain.."

Alekh - "Toh tum itna kush kyun hai.."

Naina - "lagta hai Mujhe kush dekh kar tum kush nahi ho"

Alekh - "Nahin Naina aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta.. toh batao.. tum kal itna upset thi ki mujhe laga tum atleast dus din tak bahar nahi niklogi"

Naina - "Tum kya expect kar rahi ho.. Alekh"

Alekh - "Naina ye koyi game nahi hai.. Tumhare life ke barein mein socho.. Agar tum issi tarah.." before Alekh could finish his sentence

Naina stopped him and said, "Alekh main Raj ko jaanti hoon.. Oh jo kuch bhi karega soch samaj kar karega.. " and she was going into the house.

Alekh shouted back, "Tum aisahi sochte rehna.. ek din Raj ki shaadi hojayegi Nandini ke saat.. tab tumhe pata chalega main kya keh raha hoon.."

Naina smiled at Alekh and left from there.

"arey yaar ye Naina mujhe samaj mein hi nahi aati", alekh was talking to himself when Raj came behind him.

"Kya hua yaha khada rehke kisse baat kar rahe ho", asked Raj.

"Kuch nahi.. tum ander chalo.. ", Alekh said

Raj looked at Alekh as if he was gone mad and went into Naveen's house.

"Naveen tu kal raat aaya kyun nahi.. ", Raj enquired Naveen who was sitting on the couch and having coffee.

"Raj I came, but Naina was not feeling well.. so we came back early", Naveen said

Raj - "Kya hua Naina ko.. is she alright now" raj got worried hearing that

Naveen - "Kuch nahi.. jara sa darr gayi thi.."

Raj - "Kyun??"

Naveen - "Patha nahi.. but immediately after coming here she slept she did not talk to me also"

Raj - "ohh..theek hai"

Naina came from kitchen with 3 cups of coffee. She did not know that Raj has come.

Naina - "Raj..tum..arey office ka time tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho..", she started making fun of Raj as Raj really got very busy in past few days.

Raj - "hmm.. mujhe laga kal ke itni achi party ke baad aaj ek do gante break le ke jaun"

Naina - "Oh wow.. cool.. We will go out what say.."

Raj - "Naina maine kaha 1 or 2 hours.. not days.. okay.. so relax and chup chap college jao"

Naina saddened hearing that.

Naina - "Toh mujhe college tak drop karlo.."

Raj - "Hmm.." he thought, "Pick up karunga.. kyunki evening aaj mujhe itna kaam bhi nahi hai.." Raj said.

"Theek hai.. college ke baad.. main tumhe phone karti hun Raj.. bye everyone", said Naina and left for college.

In the evening,

Naina called Raj but he did not lift the call as the mobile was in silent mode and he totally forgot about Naina.

Nandini came to Raj's office as he informed her that he would free in the evening and they could spend some time.

"Raj tumhara mobile switch off hai", Nandini asked entering Raj's cabin.

"Woh Nandini main kuch kaam mein busy tha.. aur dekha hi nahi tha ki mobile battery down hai.. ok let be tum yahaan??", Raj asked

Nandini - "What?? tumhi ne tho kaha tum aaj shyam free honge aur hum kahin bahar jayenge.."

Raj - "Oh no.. I am sorry Nandini.. main kaise bhool gaya.. give me 15 minutes I will finish off this work and will go"

Nandini waited for him and they left out for dinner. Naina waited for Raj. It was heavily raining outside. She somehow managed to go to a busstop and stood there.

But to her bad luck, there was no transport because of rains. She stood there for an hour. She was all drenched in rain. A Man was watching her from long time.

She saw him staring at her and she got scared. She immediately started walking from there to escape from that person. She tried calling someone, but her mobile stopped working.

"Oh God ab main kya karun.. God please save me..", she started walking fastly. That person did not stop following her. She was so scared that without watching where she was going, she was actually crossing the road and was about to be hit by a police vehicle.

Naveen immediately got out of the jeep and saw the girl, he was shocked to see Naina.

"Naina tum yahaa..Abhi tak ghar kyun nahi gayi..", Naveen asked

Naina looked at the person who was following her was running to escape from police and again back to Naveen.

"Bhayya woh mujhe follow kar raha hai..", Naveen saw that person running. Naveen got sou much angry and he immediately informed his junior to get that person arrested.

Naveen asked her to get into the jeep and started the jeep, "Tum abhi tak yahaan kya kari ho Naina.. tumhara college toh kab ka katam hogaye honge na"

Naina - "Raj ne mujhe kaha ki oh muje pick up karega.. par Raj ki mobile tho off hai.. Main wait karte karte ye time hua.. main tumhara phone bhi try kiya.. lag hi nahi raha tha.. shayad bharish ki wajah se"

Naveen - "tum pagal hogaye ho.. itna samay tak koyi wait karega kya.."

Naina - "Mujhe laga bharish ki wajah se Raj kahin stuck hogaye honge"

Naveen was driving and he saw something in the mirror and stopped the jeep. He looked back to see Raj and Nandini going into a Restaurant. Naina was about to see where Naveen was looking at but Naveen stopped her from looking back and said,

"Kuch nahi.. mujhe laga mera ek dost hai..", he started the jeep again.

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When they are back to home, she again tried Raj's mobile.

Naveen - "Kisko call kar rahi ho..",

Naina - "Raj ko.. Abhi tak ghar nahi pahunche hai woh.. iska car nahi hai ghar ke samne..", Raj lifted the call at the other end.

Naina - "Kahaan ho tum.. maine tumhe phone karne ki koshish ki.. lag hi nahi rahi thi.."

Raj totally forgot about his promise to Naina that he would pick her up from college.

Raj - "Kyun?? why did you try calling me..". Now Naina understood that Raj forgot about her and sighing sadly she said,

"kuch nahi.. bas aise hi.. ye bolo tum kaha ho abhi..kya tum bahar ho..", Naina enquired.

Raj looked at Nandini and said, "mmm.. office mein hoon.. kuch kaam hai.."

Naina relaxing a bit said, "theek hai.. chalo bye.. baad mein baat karenge..". Raj also said by and cut the call.

"Who is that?" Nandini enquired as Raj lied that he was still in office to that person on call.

Raj - "Huh!.. oh Naina.. Maine tumhe bataya na.. Naveen ki sister.."

Nandini - "Oh that girl.. Yes.. I saw her in your birthday party.. tum usse jhoot kyun bola.."

Raj - "kuch nahi..aise hi.. warna mera dimag kha jaayegi..", Nandini laughed and they had a wonderful dinner.

After disconnecting the call,

Naveen asked Naina, "kya hua.."

Naina - "kuch nahi.. Raj is still in office.. main uske liye pareshan thi.. kyun ki bahut bharish ho rahi hai.."

Naveen looked at her in shock. He did not understand why Raj had lied to her. And also he started observing Naina's behaviour

He could see the care and concern in her eyes for Raj. He could see love in her eyes for Raj.

"But Raj..", pondered over what has just happened.

Next day in the morning,

Naveen went to Raj's house, Raj was talking to his mom and was about to go to office.

Naveen - "Good morning Raj.. office ja rahe ho kya.."

Raj - "Good morning Naveen.. haan kyun.."

Naveen - "Main wahin raaste mein ja rahaa hoon.. Lets go together.."

Raj - "Naveen.. Oh Nandini mera intezar kar rahi hogi.. maine kahaa usse ki main pick up karunga.. koyi baat nahi.. main tumhe drop karke nandini ke paas jaunga.."

Naveen agreed to that and Raj started the car and they talked asusual and Naveen wanted to know about Nandini and his relationship with her.

Naveen - "oh Nandini kya karti hai??"

Raj - "Nandini.. meri tarah apne pita ki business join ki hai.. she is just learning for now.." and he said about Nandini lot more things which he could proudly say about her.

Naveen - "Okay.. theek hai.. yahaan pe side karo.. I will get down here.."

Raj - "Okay.. bye Naveen.." and he left.

Naveen was now in a complete dilemma. He could clearly see that Raj did not care about Naina. He needs to stop Naina and make her realise about the situation before his little sister gets hurt deeply.

That was a sunday evening,

Naina invited her friends Ali, Huda and Pooja and introduced them to Alekh. All of them planned to have fun. Yudi and Neelu also joined them. All were playing rugby when Raj along with Nandini came there.

Naina to Raj - "Raj.. join us.." she called out as Raj and Nandini were watching them standing.

Raj - "No Naina.. its ok.. you people carry on.."

Neelu - "Bhayya..dont be a spoil sport.. Nandini.. app bhi join karo.."

Nandini - "Par mujhe rugby khelna nahi aata.."

Neelu - "Dont worry hum aapko sikhayege..kyun bhayya are you ready..", Neelu said dragging Nandini into her group.

Pooja was referee and she said, "Ok Raj.. aap Alekh ki group mein..Aur Nandini aap Neelu ki group mein".

Raj removed his coat and tie and was ready for the game.

Here goes the group list announced pooja.

Group 1 - Alekh(captain), Raj, Naina, Ali

Group 2 - Neelu(captain), Yudi, Huda, Nandini

They started playing. Suddenly it started raining but they did not stop the game. Neelu's team is leading by a point. Raj and Alekh never lost the game. They winked at eachother. Nandini was carrying the ball now. Neelu taught her how to play.

Before Nandini could realize, Raj took the ball away from her and passed to Alekh. Alekh carried the ball until Huda came in between. Alekh passed the ball to Ali immediately before his opponent team attacked him. Ali was targeted now and all were running towards him.

Ali passed the ball to Naina who was very nearer to the goal line. Raj realized now the target would be Naina. He ran towards Naina and before everyone surrounded her, he fell on top of her making her to fall down and rolled on ground along with her fastly.

Naina did not understand what was happening. But before she could realize what was happening, all of them are on top of Raj stopping him and her from rolling. Pooja blew the whistle as it is timed out and is the end of the game and she asked each of the member on top Raj and Naina to move away from them.

Meanwhile Raj was looking at Naina, she was drenched completely, breathing heavily, he was on top of her, not allowing other peoples weight fall on her. Naina also was looking at Raj, She could realize that Raj was holding her hands above her head. As one by one got up from them, they came to know that Naina and Raj has already grounded the ball behind the opponents' goal line and Alekh's team won.

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Raj got up from her and stood. He was applauded by everyone for the win. Naina sat there watching him. Alekh gave his hand to Naina to help her in getting up and she stoop up.

As the game was over, everyone decided to go inside and get them cleaned up. But Naina stood there watching Raj thinking about what just happened. Raj was walking along with others to go into the house.

But he looked back to see Naina still standing there and thinking hardly. Raj turned away from her and started walking inside.

Pooja came to Naina and said, "arey wah.. shahrukh ne kamaal hi kar diya.. kya game tha.."

Naina came back to her senses and said, "Pooja chalo andar.. bahut baarish ho rahi hai.." and she also went inside.

All had cleaned up themselves and were chit-chatting leisurely sitting in a round in Naveen's house.

Naina was preparing pakora for all of them along with pooja.

Raj and Nandini,

Nandini - "kitna din ho gaye the na raj hum iss tarah khelke.."

Raj - "haan",

Nandini - "Naina aur pooja hamare liye pakora bana rahe hain.. mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai.. chalo chalo.." she dragged Raj from there.

Raj and Nandini joined the group. Naina came out holding a plate of pakora and her steps slowed down seeing Raj there.

She did not know what was happening to her looking at Raj. She again thought of the game and She was not able to get the image out of her mind.

She served pakora to all of them and she left from there as soon as possible.

Raj's mom came there and saw all were enjoying, cracking jokes on others.

As they saw Raj's mom watching them with a smile, Raj got up and said, "Mom..Baito na..aap kab aaye"

Raj's mom - "Abhi aayi hun.. tum sab ko aisa dekh kar bahut kushi mili hai mujhe"

Raj smiled, Raj's mon continued, "waise Naveen kahaan hai..",

"Duty.. aunty.. aur kya..huh.. Na sunday hai na monday.. har roj kaam karta rahega..", Naina came out of kitchen saying this.

Raj's mom laughed and looked at Nandini. She looked again at Raj and said to him, "Baad me..Nandini ko leke ek baar mere room me aana.."

Raj looked confused and said , "okay". After sometime in Raj's mom room,

Raj's mom - "Raj.. pata hai kyun maine tum donon ko yahaan bulayaa.."

Raj - "nahi"

Raj's mom - "kya tum dono shaadi ke liye tayyar hai??"

Raj - "kya??" he got confused.

Raj's mom - "Raj.. Nandini ke parents chahte hai ki tum dono ki shaadi jald se jald karvane ka..tum donon decide kar ke mujhe batao kya karna hai.."

Raj - "par mom.. main toh abhi abhi business mein.."

Raj's mom - "main jaanti hoon Raj.. par shaadi ke baad bhi tum ye sab kar sakte ho.."

Raj - "But hum toh kabhi shadi ke barein mein socha hi nahi..", this made Nandini to speak up,

Nandini - "haan Aunty, main aur Raj kabhi shadi ke barein mein kabhi baat hi nahi kare hain.. par ma baba Raj ko dekh kar bahut impress hogaye hain.. oh chahte hai ki hum dono shadi kare.."

Raj's mom - "par tum dono 3 salon se saat hai.. ab tak kuch faisla karna hi chahiye tha na.. Theek hai Raj.. main tum donon ko iske barein mein sochne ke liye kuch samay deti hoon.."

Raj did not say anything to this and simply nodding his head he left from there with Nandini.

Nandini - "Raj.. koyi jald baaji nahi hai.. take your own time.. agar tumhe aisa lagta hai ki humare shaadi se business down ho sakta hai toh.. nahi.. abhi naki karenge shadi.."

Raj - "No Nandini..aisa nahi hai..", he tried to explain but sighed and said, "Theek hai main sochta hoon iske barein mein.. chalo main tumhare ghar tak drop karunga", smiling at her

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Arti Gupta

@RNforever

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Posted: 10 years ago

nice ff dear

hmmm ... bohat confusion h abhi
kya raj naina ke liye kuch bhi feel nhi karta h agar nhi karta h toh itna protective kyu h usse le kr
or usne neglect bhi karta rahta h baatein chupata h
how mean yr ye raj kr kya raha h mjhe toh kuch samjhe he nhi aa raha jaldi ye sare confusion dor karo frd plz
upadate soon
n plz send me pm when u update next part

Edited by meenuraj97 - 10 years ago

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priyanka...

@priyanka...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#10

At Night,

***

It was raining heavily, the wind was blowing on his face, the whooping sound was roaring in his ears from the passing wind. The trees were dancing, having an affair with the wind, flowers ripened and flirting with the bees.

He took a deep breath - so many beautiful things to see and enjoy. He saw a girl in white saree swirling around stretching her hands and enjoying the rain.

She stopped when she saw him looking at her. He walked towards her, she was beautiful. The virtue of her lively looks excels the precious stone.

Her face shining with happiness, her cheeks flushed a beautiful pink, her features soft and alluring. He cupped her face in his hands and made her meet his gaze.

"You are the only one for me, for as long as I live", he said looking into her eyes and gently kissed her forehead.

"If I can see pain in your eyes then share with me your tears", he kissed her left eye.

"If I can see joy in your eyes then share with me your smile", he said kissing her right eye and his thumb running along her cheek bone.

His eyes traced her face from her forehead to her chin. She was breathing a little faster and her cheeks were pink.

He reached up and cupped the back of her neck with one hand, gently tugging her closer.

"My heart is only beating for you.. looking at you takes my breath away", he said stroking his thumb along the side of her neck.

Her lips parted and her breathing sped up as she closed her eyes. He lowered his head and brushed his lips over the spot on her neck where his thumb had been resting.

She shuddered and her hands went to his shoulders. As his gaze shifted towards her lips, her lips quivered. He started caressing her lips with his thumb.

She closed her eyes tightly. He pressed his lips to hers gently.

"Raj..", she said, before he could deepen the kiss and someone called him from his behind.

***

Raj woke up in a jerk and saw the surroundings. It took him 2 minutes to realize that it was a dream.

"In My Dreams you are Mine but In My Life you are Just A Dream"

He went into the bathroom and stood under the shower, cold water piercing his body. He wanted to erase the dream from his mind.

It took him 1 hour to get ready. When he was coming down he noticed a person talking to his mother.

He is Raghav Singh, chacha of Naveen and Naina. Seeing Raj coming down the stairs, he stood and wished Raj.

"Welcome to India Raj.. Its been so long we met right?", Raghav said.

"Hi Uncle.. Yes.. it has been long.. kaise hai aap?", Raj asked.

Raghav - "Theek hun.. tum kaise ho.. "

Raj - "Haan mai bhi theek hun.. ",

"aap dono baat kariye.. mein abhi aati hoon", said Raj's mom excusing herself.

Raghav - "Madhuri ji ne ye bata rahi thi ki.. you are into looking after the business now.. good to hear that.. But be careful.. "

Raj - "careful? "

Raghav - "Tumhare liye sab kuch asaan se mile hai.. ", Raj looked up intently at him.

Raghav continued "aur ye business dekh bal karna kitna mushkil hain.. ye main aur Madhuri ji achi tarah jante hai.."

"Mujhe nahi lagta hai ki mujhe kuch asaan se mile hai..", Raj blurted out.

"Mujhe galat mat samajna.. Maine ye suna hai ki Amit ji apni beti ko tumse shaadi karwane ko tayaar hai.. bahut acha tareeka hai..", Raghav smiled.

"Kehna kya chahte hai aap..", Raj said angrily. Meanwhile his mother came and Raj became silent.

"Raj.. Raghav ji bhi humare saat office aa rahe hai.. hum raaste mein baat karte hai.. chalo..", Raj's mom said and they went to office.

Raj did not say anything in the way to his office. Raj's mom and Raghav discussed on happenings in the business. Raj remained silent.

In the office, Madhuri explained Raghav about the latest updates on their business as Raghav being one of the partner of their business.

"Kaun hai woh..", Alekh asked Raj pointing to Raghav.

"Naveen aur Naina ka chachu", replied Raj and he left from there.

Staying for a day and enjoying with his niece and nephew, Raghav went to his place as he has his own business to look after.