Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk - THREAD III - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Payal is so bad.. And another twist...
Loved that Arnav told about his not so sure crush on Khushi..
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Could the rishta be from Aman Sabharwal? I remember Arnav asking him if he had come to India to get married.!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kclovearshi

Could the rishta be from Aman Sabharwal? I remember Arnav asking him if he had come to India to get married.!



But he said he isn't Kushi's type to Arnav...but Arnav still has doubts he likes Kushi..I wish the rishta is from one of the known guys..easy to dodge them..
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Awesome update Radhika!!! Totally loved the update!!!!
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Originally posted by: YellowBoots

Have posted the chapter, folks. It is a bit long though. Hope you feel patient enough to wade through it.


I have not read it yet...waiting till I have some quality time but nothing you write is ever too long...problem for me is...it's never long enough and I always feel like I want more...lol
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Awesome👏 You're amazing writer🤗
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Thanks for the long update...things are getting interesting..shaadi talks for kushi..hmm what will be her reaction and Arnav's
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Posted: 10 years ago
Dear Radhika,

Today I'm going to write a lot.firstly,the BEST CHAPTER of tewari and sons ever👏,more entertaining than any drama/show that's on-air now,but why,oh,why dear you had to end it with khushi's rishtha,now that's something more worse than arnav-payal,i tell you.going by the pace of this ff,it would take forever for arshi to admit their feelings[and seriously i dont want this ff to end😉],but after reading this update,i'm longing to read the chapter where arnav marries khushi,and do tell me can i read it in the near future?and dont make it the last chapter too,plsss.

now,coming to the chapter:

"That is your problem, Arnav. You never take a stand. You only watch, that is all you do."

One line describes the basic trait of arnav in ur ff.kaash,he could take a stand on his platonic relationship with payal,his mom and most importantly on khushi.though sweet,he cant take a strong stand,but he's getting better at it.


"I don't know if this was a crush.. but if there was someone I found interesting in school, it was.. Khushi," he finally said.

And that right there was the truth.

such a genuine line from a person of few words,but its pretty clear that its much,much more than a crush.i think arnav will be the first to realise and admit it,or will he?

"Shhh," she said putting her finger on her lips. He seemed amused by this and shook his head."

Such a cute line from khushi bitiya☺️


"Oh. I will take the metro. Delhi Metro is the best."

"What a lovely endorsement for Delhi Metro that loyal customers love it even when they are completely high."

and i can go on and on,but this is the best dialogue in the chapter for me,👏👏


OTHER POINTS.

the arshi interaction after khushi was 'high' was too short😕

mihir gupta,khushi's brother?

akash is'bunty baba' for payal's family??????so there's more to akash-payal story,interesting.btw,i thought payal's crush would be akash.Why on earth are arnav-payal are fiancees?

aman's behaviour is weird actually.radhika,dont tell me the rishtha is from him.

anjali di,no reaction on knowing khushi was[or is?] arnav's crush ?or she knew it all the way.


apologising for ranting so much,but I LOOK FORWARD TO READING YOUR REPLY SOON,and tell me if my guesses are right😉.

love,

ratna.

ps:sorry for being naggy,but i'm yearning to see/read this moment in ur ff[dont take me wrong,but i guess its the effect of watching arshi contract marriage track in ipk malayalam version,mounam sammatham.

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Will be waiting. 😆

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