ArShi FF: Tending The Scorched #3 : Thread 4 added on Pg 1 (28.10.15)

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Mayvs2013

@Mayvs2013

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

i never expected Kushi to be so bold n strong :) great going dear ...

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khushboo

@khushiarsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

hey
amazing update
loved it truly
arul is so much excited about winning match
then meeting his papa too
so rahul - anjali r on track😉
loved how akash treat riya
and arnav and khushi😳
their kiss😳😳
loved how khushi handle riya😉
hate that riya😡
did arnav hear them??

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suji5

@suji5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

awesome update
finally Riya and khushi came face to face
who heard their talk?
is that Rahul or Arnav or Akash? 😊

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rn94

@rn94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Brilliant update.
Arnav n arul bonding is amazing.
Loved the way akash shut riya. Hope she soon get out of their lives. What did he mean by one month?
The entire conversation between khushi and riya was superb. Loved the way khushi warned her. Was it akash who heard the conversation?
Continue soon.
Congrats for new thread.
Thanks for the pm.

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

brilliant update.
loved the whole update.
Khushi-Riya's show down was awesome.
thanks for the PM.

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Nilpori

@Nilpori

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

I am so sorry...i didn't comented earlier..my laptops been stolen..and i was been busy lately..i literally been out of network..so couldn't comment..and i really happy that u have send me Pms...thanx..and i caught up with d updates..i enjoyed soo much..theres been a huge progress in their relationships..and i hope Arnav don't misunderstand khushi...

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Hi Candy,

Thanks for the PM. I couldn't keep my self off your stories after I started with one shots.

You write so beautifully. Your characters, especially Arnav and Khushi are amazing and the love between them are so blissfull.

Also the way you portray emotions and love between relations ships are excellent.

Now I come to TTS. A very beautiful story. I cannot belive Arnav is scarred when he is sorounded with such beutiful loving and adoring people around him.

Yes he has lost his parents and everything along with it. He has to work hard to bring back everything in his life. But for him to worry that he is scarred and not worth to love Khushi.

I only can see him as an adorable, caring, loving human being the way you have written him.

Hope the bubbly Khushi put that Riah in her place.

Wondering What La and Akash and other are planning against Riah.

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

The update started beautifully. The way, the whole family reunited is really great to see. Afterall, the inhabitants of the mansion have enjoyed their fare share of pain till date, & now is the time for celebrating happiness.

Arshi romance is speechless, wordless, full of freshness & emotions.

I was just visioning the entire scenario & as a great writer, you left me no word to explain further. The way you portray everything, we could relieve in that moment & definitely found no words to describe what we are actually feeling.

Finally Aakash voiced his opinion. & finally got to see aakash talking. 😉

But, what is going to happen in a month. Are they heading for divorce finally ??????

Khushi's response to Riya is mind blowing. Seriously

But, I guess Arnav heard everything. So, now will he start questioning Khushi hat how come she knew all this? But plz don't let any misuderstanding happened between them please