~Arhi FF~#3~The Hands of Time~

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bellacoolio

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

That was beautiful! Two wounded souls finding solace in each other! Your descriptions of Arnav riding down the slope was fantastic!

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luvbug

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

very beautifully written... some incidents changes the whole dynamics of the family...n that is wat we see here... oh was so painful to read abt the temporary insanity that had come over arnav... and shashi reprimanding him... oh arshi talking at anjali was the best...and the farewell was touching...

so this scene clears one thing...arnav does not hold khushi responsible for anjali's disappearance...phew... i had thought otherwise 😊

eagerly waiting for next

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rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Unreserved Here

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koisk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Wow that was soo heart touching... Awesome update.

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spg1970

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Beautiful flashback and insight into two young kids minds and their own way of dealing with loss. Very well written.👏

SPG

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thechaigirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

To be honest, I am awed by the maturity a 13 year old Arnav showed during his conversation with Shashi as well as KHushi. It takes a very good heart and an equally wise head to understand the pain of another inspite of being in pain.

Often times grief can form a strong bond between strangers. Many a times emotions that people who are close to us do not understand complete strangers do. In all the guilt Khushi must have carried I am sure this act by Arnav was soothing.

One criminal not only robbed these kids a sibling but their innocence and childhood. 😭

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Armela

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

The pain and loss shared by Arnav and Khushi was beautiful

Edited by Armela - 10 years ago

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suji5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

beautifully written about the first meeting of Arnav and khushi..

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Russell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

such a beautiful chapter... lil Arnav not blaming khushi for the missing of Anjali shows how mature his thinking is ... wish he could keep his promise... :( ...
loved the update..

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pmpm1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

So Arnav and Khushi did have their moments (not necessarily romantic) as kids as well... Also nice to see Shashi's relation with the Raizada kids and how Arnav thought he or his family was not to blame for Anjali's disappearance as opposed to what his mother thought.

But I really wonder what made Arnav's mom so vindictive to Shashi and his family. Any sane person would not blame them. Was there something that happened that we are not aware of?

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