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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
I will upload as soon as I can, tomorrow morning if possible.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: anjs

this ending is perfect...i think so many years of punishment is good...and he earned his way to the forgiveness...firstly he gave priority to khushi over Anjali...secondly he kept caring for her without expecting her forgiveness...

so i liked that she accepted him...also Aryan can see now...so even that guilt is reduced...

btw, its illegal to know the foetus's gender in India...the parents can be jailed if they try to find it out...also the doctor revealing the gender to the parents is also jailed...so Sunaina can use that against her husband ...


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
There is one more chapter left. He has learnt a lot in his life and just want to give happiness to Khushi and Aryan.
You are right. Actually I would be not showing the cases in details since this a Mini FF and the next one will be the last chapter. <3
I will upload as soon as I can, tomorrow morning if possible.

Loads of love,
Kashish
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Linsie

congrats on your new therad


Thanks a loads sweetheart, it was all possible because of you all. <3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: mu12

i would love to see a happy ending
nice update


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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi

perfect...loved it...
finally they are together...
continue soon...


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
Yes they are :D
I will upload as soon as I can, tomorrow morning if possible.

Loads of love,
Kashish
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: renee.bee

Thanks for the pm

Awesome update

Hey sweetheart, thanks a lot the comment, it means a lot to me.
Most welcome for the PM :).

Oh Arnav got slapped for tht.
His heart was in right place bt not rationale
Khushi is really going ok n deserves to take time to forgive him but acceptance is not easy.
Everytime something that reminded of the past the wounds are again fresh.

Yes, I agree, he had no bad intention but first it was not rational and second he was not seeing this at large phase.
Khushi needs all her time and she is doing that only. Let's see if she can forget everything?

Its easy to forgive but no forget.
As much as Lav is a friend khushi remembered how Arnav humiliated her by announcing his engagement m not to mention how Lav got hurt in the process.

True, I completely admit. One can't forget unless they love the person a lot and that person really repents.
He had done far too many things in the past and he had got to suffer a good part of his life for that, when he could enjoyed.

Arnav has done something to make up for his deeds.
He can't undo his deeds but he can help others n somehow make other's lives a bit easy.
This may not reduce his guilt bt give a little peace seeing someone smile coz of him.

He has understood, he can't undo what happened in his life but he can help other. An it did give him peace whenever he saw them.
What you do to other reflect back to you only.

Glad khushi became aware of his change n how he's doing things to help others.

It was needed for Arnav to become a good human, to know what other goes through and he learned his lesson.

Aryan luckily got cured.
He was so amused to see how what he did was reflected in the mirror.

I tried to portray, how one could behave seeing for the first time, I hope it was convincing. This little Aryan means a lot to me, I have never written such about a kid before. I had to research quite a lot, and pester my friend about it :p. Amongst all the kids that I weaved Aryan remains at the first position.

Arnav more than khushi must have felt relieved coz tho khushi was in pain it was Arnav who had to live with the guilt of being responsible for Aryan N his state.

Exacly, they both had so felt so relieved and Arnav's guilty definitely lessened.

Arnav khushi making love after so long.
You started by khushi kissing on the cheek n now accepting him completely.

To be honest, I was afraid while writing down, I had this question if this would be accepted and I am glad it was taken well.

But what was amiss since you mentioned it I bet uou have something written abt it too otherwise why would you write tht.

Is it that this was more of physical than love making coz Khushi has not yet completely accepted him n said I love you to Arnav.

Yes, I mentioned it because I have something planned and almost written too. I am so damn excited and nervous about it 😳.


Though this update had a leap I hope you have something planned for Arnav khushi's romance as in falling in love again.

I will let you read the next chapter. It will be up tomorrow, hopefully.

Loads of love<333
Kashish



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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: princessm16

Superb ❤️
ending ws perfect


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me.
There is on chapter left :)
I will upload as soon as I can, tomorrow morning if possible.

Loads of love,
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: sspoorthy

congo new thread

loved the update


Thanks a loads dear, your comment means a lot to me, all of it was possible coz of u all. Thanks.
I will upload as soon as I can, tomorrow morning if possible.

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Kashish

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