ArHi FF: Yeh Saali Zindagi #5 link to next thread @ pg.1 - Page 73

Hi Aditi, I am first of all so sorry for commenting so late..

Oh My god dear u have really the great art to write a story in a natural way which makes it a real story.

Before I proceed I just want ask you one think , if you ok then you may answer.. ARE U A LAWYER or HAVE STUDIED LAW?

U must be wondering why I asked this question then let me tell you because the way you have penned the smallest to smallest detail about the case .. you have made me curious to know this..

Aditi, you have looked all the aspects of this case and I will say that I really enjoyed reading the inside of a courtroom part.

Gal how u manage to write it so well.. Aditi yaar I hat off you for bringing all things so well and in sync.

O ma I never thought about this that Khushi may be questioned regarding her membership of her father's party and I ma grateful to Aman indirectly you who have noted the smallest to smallest detail and have penned them in such a wonderful way.

Vikrant, who considered himself as the smarter one is now going to see the real smartness of the raizada's ..

The whole Species of Raizada's are bloody geniuses who knew all tact and tricks to make their enemy pay. They may have been on a point to lose the game but .. they still owned the queen and now are on the winning point.

U have really created a marvelous setup of everything from the courtroom to Vikrnat's house.

I for a moment was scared reading that the Judge has ordered to seal all his property and how would be this possible for them to place nia.. but I forgot it is raizada's who are dealing here ..so not to worry wen they are in action.

Aman, who is a grt lawyer always proved that he was no less in terms of afrd..

He even was suffering so much and was in pain ..still managed to get to Khushi's place and have helped her .. he is really a grt man and the beginning part wer he remembers his professor's words.. that was something giving insight of a human nature and of how they fall in prey of money and get lost in the web of lust and money.. but still some are there who get above all this materialistic things and fight for ppl to give them justice.

Aditi .. you are so much sensible and intelligent to think so wise and give a insight of the things going on with people related to their profession.

And its very true that nowadays many lawyers just to earn more and more money drag cases of their own client from hearing to hearing , just to get paid for long .. but that doesn't mean there are not ppl who dnt fight for justice there are lawyers who are an example of goodliness and truthfulness towards their profession.

Aman, too is shown as a grt example of human who have fought till his every breathe to provide justice to the needed.

Khushi. O ma she did it.. it was a different thing and so nice to read that a women whom we always read as a bold and straight forward plus confident was feeling nervous .. why not ..it was her first time she was presenting a case and everything will be dependent on how she carries it and I am happy plus proud that she did it extremely well.

And if I am not wrong .. their can also be a case filed against vikrant for using abusive words against Khushi in the courtroom that under the IPC tact 499 and act 500 for defaming her publically.

Haye I guess I have read so much amazing courtroom hearing in this update that I ma running my mind more than needed..lol

Vikrant.. now its his turn to pay for all wat he did and for all what he didn't ..heheheheh

This was a double dhamaka.. along with Nia, anuj Raizada was also found in his basement.. this is called icing on the cake..

Now who can save him.. lol

There are nearly 50 acts in IPC for kidnapping someone and I am sure he will be charged atleast for 10-20 .. I cant wait for the day when he will be behind the bars for lifetym.

The little glimpse of understanding shown btwn Arshi was so lovely ..like it showed how muh they have groomed themselves in this relation and how just a small soothing hug or touch is enough for the other to get a heaven in that instant..

Aditi, you have really captured all corners of a square... hats off gal .. brilliant.

Oh wow it was amazing to read that finally Anjali could breathe out of the room and ask for help and I hope now she too get out of the trap of the one who had been putting her on sedatives since long..

But ..i still doubt can it be Shyam.. coz. I think why would Vikrant keep her alive when he can kill her in any instant or because of the upcoming election he was quiet and kept her on sedatives.

Now a special mention about the man whom I never hated but just time pitied and was angry.. its none other than the elder of Raizada clan..none other than Anuj Raizada..

When Vikrant's lawyer Sahil put an argument that Anuj's men cannot ditch him.. my mind ran with the highest speed and added the last hint u put in extra scenes plus the thought together and deduced that yes this is the plan..

To get himself kidnapped by Vikrant and show him that he is abducted and killed by him so that Vikrant will not plan anything against him and till then Anuj Raizada can plan his master plan.

Damn.. now again I will say ..no one can beat this man.. he has a brain more sharper than anyone and I am happy that its be inherited by his kids .. but the golden star is none other than Anuj Raizada..

Aditi.. you are a genius gal.. you have really put a great mind in this fiction which is shown in every part and with every update u prove urself as a best one in writing ..

Done with one chapter ..soon will read the other ...

P.S. ignore typos..

Comment for chapter 37-B

Oops I thought I will read the next part tomorrow.. but I guess once I started reading ur updates ..i can't resist till I reach the last line..

damn u making me addict to ur writing sply this story.

Aditi. U made my tai tai phiss.. it was Shashi Uncle ..who did it all damn I never thought about it.. but I guess (sorry here I cant be sure coz. things I am getting sure are turning wrong lol) he too did it with a good reason for something better.

May be he had been said to do so..

O my god..Anuj Raizada's condition ...is so worse ..you made me think for a moment that it might not be his plans to get placed in Vikrant's house ..but no I am sure its planned by him and Shashi uncle had been helping him since long ..

I also doubt Shashi had put Anjali on sedatives on Anuj's order..maybe or maybe not..

This time my mind is totally shaken up.. I really wonder how much u must be thinking to create such suspense nd thrills in this FF..Aditi yaar do try to get it published ..it will be a massive hit.

How much I can think,Shashi and Anuj are best frds and I am sure they must be together in this plan ..

But one think that still didn't fit in my brain is ..how can Anuj be this hurt wer his life is in serious danger.. that is still making me doubt some way...

Oh Gosh my Arnav been slapped that too not once but more than that.. oh god.. the reality that you have penned in this update changed many things..

The image of Anuj was totally of changed man .. I am sure all present there were in shock..

The Anjali's part was still known to us to an extent but he visiting her in newyork and safeguarding part was still new..

It was really so emotional to read the outburst of Divya raizada, a lady who had never spoken or shown any emotion.. whom her kids considered just a pativarta nari always obeying husband ..today showed the real power of a women and of a wife who not simply supported her husband but she do had good reasons to support him and to stand by his side.

I am sure now all hearts must be on verge to break thinking how wrong they had thought of their father..

I wonder they all thought of acting smart since days and have worked so much but today it looked all like they were the pawn who thought of themselves as kings... but here the real player is Anuj raizada..

Anuj loved Akash ..reading this I feel so good..

I always feel bad to read that he had been abandoned by him and his love but I ma glad that he love him .. oh now I ma more than happy to say that even though we may have thought wrong of him but Anuj Raizada is really not what we or his kids concluded of him..

His ways were different .. he may not have showed his love but today things gt crystal clear ..

Hearing Divya's past made me feel for that lady and hug her.. you have shown it so well that always a skyscraper looking building too had a pat were it was just ground and broken house which today is standing and shining in between the sky. No one try to dig the reason for one's behavior..all are busy in their own assumptions and thoughts..

I am sure now the things are sorted to great extent but still a long way is due..

Anuj was behind every successful step Arnav took was the biggest shock of the evening for me.. it was really unexpected but it changed many equations..

Vikrant is planning something dangerous and I cant stop myself from worrying that what it might end into..

I just hope nothing go wrong now..as he is too cunning and can play any dirty game to win ...

Aditi yaar u are just mind blowing and this update has really washed my brain which had many unstable thoughts..

You are a rockstar and I just now wish you update the next part soon..

This was really an emotional roller coaster ride.. haye I cant stop myself from imagining the scene of breakdown of Arnav and Anjali .. who have considered their father so wrong since years..

Its time to get things corrected and I am happy that they are coming over all illusion they had and all misconceptions about their father.

Its time to fight together with no grudges in heart ..

Adiit.. a big thank you for penning this ff and that too so amazingly .. I just now wish you update the nest part soon..