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barsana

@barsana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

interesting teaser...

this is the first time am reading your ff..looking

forward to it😊

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Prologue mazzedaar Hai.. Ok will have to wait for story no problem interesting story ka wait kat sakte hain. Best wishes & happy writing Khel Khel Mein 😊

Thanks for pm

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sankadevimaha

@sankadevimaha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Awesome prologue!!! Another arshi ff... wowww... m jumping here... nd u thought abt dese thngs n an examination hall!! I cnt believe t.. aise ideas toh sirf classroom mein aayegi.. nd dese ideas r coming during exam tyms ah!!!😆😉😳

Edited by sankadevimaha - 10 years ago

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Superb concept
Liked it
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

interesting concept
waiting for it start

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bluesky10

@bluesky10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Awesome prologue dear

Please continue soon

Waiting for the first chapter eagerly

Thanks for your pm dear

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Since there are a lot of differences in the characters, I thought of giving a character sketch to this!

Character Sketch:

Arnav Singh Raizada: Student of MBA First Year in Faculty of Management Studies(FMS). Smart, Handsome, Confident and Naughty guy like every other boy of his age. Very good in Football. Close Friends: Ricky, Paarth and Madhav.

Khushi Gupta: Student of Last Year of BBA in FMS. Gorgeous, headstrong, confident and kind-hearted. Protective about her sister, Payal. Very good in Acting and Dancing. Close Friends: Lavanya.

Arunima Singh Raizada: Caring and Protective Mom of Arnav.

Arun Singh Raizada: Strict yet loving father of Arnav.

Akash Singh Raizada: Elder brother of Arnav. Very serene and silence loving person.

Manohar Singh Raizada: Brother of Arun. Manages Family business along with him.

Manorama Singh Raizada: Wife of Manohar. Make-up Freak and English Khooni.

Anjali Singh Raizada: Daughter of Manohar and Manorama. Younger than Arnav and Akash in age. Loves all her brothers a lot. Doing her 12th.

Nand Kishore/NK: Brother of Anjali. Can't pronounce Hindi words very well, because he stayed with his grandparents in Bangalore. So couldn't learn any other language other than English, very well.

Devyani Singh Raizada: A very very orthodox and strict Grandmom who is the head of the family.

Shashi Gupta: Father of Khushi. Very attached to Khushi and treats her like his son. Very proud of her.

Garima Gupta: Loving and sweet Mom of Khushi and Payal. Wanted to be an actor.

Payal Gupta: Very protective sister of Khushi, who is almost like a second mother to her.

Lavanya Kashyap: Khushi's best friend who is obsessed with make-up and fashion.

Other characters will be introduced with the flow of the story!

I am overwhelmed at the response for this story! Like really 10 pages for the prologue! I guess this is the best response I got for any of my FFs till date! Love you guys! Thanks a lot for the support!

Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago