ArHi TS: Tangled *Final part updated* 03/03/15 Pg20

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#121

This was funny
She is still disaster queen
And arnav dont. You know men are guinea pigs
And who else would she experiment on dude
Pati Jo hai
Still crazy huh
As if that will change
Its khushi man
She did what changed the jars
Kya ladki hai
She wasn't pregnant
Even I thought she was
Lord does she confuse or what
But he loves her as she is
And she too
Ahhh arnav was mad for missing his sister wedding
Not really mad at shyam for anything else
She is right you know
Saved arnav from having to explain about the groom change mate
So you should thank him
She sure knows him well

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Awww...such a sweeet ending ov a lovely story...

please do write stuff like that more often...

thanks 4 pm...

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Aww... Such a sweet ending...

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Wow so lvly story it was..
Loved reading it...
End was perfect...

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Such a cute end!

Loved it

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

just simply loved it loved kushis freaking plans to run away

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

That was a complete surprise and an awesome end.

The craziness of Khushi rubbing on her husband.🤣

I must thanks all those people to pestering you to right her after marriage craziness. 😃

Edited by rk2127 - 10 years ago

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

It did bring smiles and very sweet one indeed...

Thoda pagal hai par cute one...

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Thank you Aayat for writing this third part... because we were definitely waiting for some more madness... This story and its Arnav and Khushi are truly adorable. Loved the fact that they are now married and Khushi and her antics keep our very own Arnav, extremely entertained.

Loved their cute bickering about salt and sugar and I can completely empathize with a Khushi who cannot cook too well. I myself for one keep goofing up all the time and my bechara patidev has to bear the brunt of poor cooking!! I liked how you have given us Arnav's perspective as well... with their oh so hot... bedroom romance.

Loved how Arnav kept teasing her about food.. yet his love for her overpowers all the spices in food... Even their conversation about Anjali and Shyam was so adorable, with each one trying to put forth their perspective. The shocking moment of gifting him a small bat had created a tiny confusion and I could not stop laughing at his reaction,

Thank you Aayat for this totally fun and tangled story that has given me immense pleasure and happiness while reading!!