Kaash... (NOTE: pg 26) - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: me_iq

Gr8 part...its gud 2 knoe u r continuing neha!!!keep it up

thank u...u dont mind that this ff is now mine rite??? coz if u want u can still continue it..

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Posted: 18 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: rachandeep

wow tht was good as it is....im sure u will b able 2carry it on just fine 😃 plz update soon! 👏

thank u so much for ur reply...i will be sure to continue it soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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~PART 6~

Angad is worried. He carries Kripa to his car and rushes her to the hospital. Angad calls Prithvi and tells him that Kripa is in the hospital. Prithvi comes immediately, and after the doctor finishes the checkup, he calls both of them inside his cabin.

Doctor: Dekhiye, kya aap mein se koi unka pati hai?

Angad & Prithvi: Kyun???

Doctor: Kyunki Ms Kripa Sharma maa banne vali hai.

Angad & Prithvi: What!!!

Doctor: Haan. Aur abortion ke baare mein sochna hi mat, uski haalat bohot nazuk hai. Agar usne abortion kiya, toh uski jaan chali jaa sakti hai ya toh voh phir kabhi maa nahin ban paayegi.

Prithvi: Kya yeh baat Kripa ko bata hai?

Doctor: Haan, yeh baat maine use bataaya hai. Tum dono use jaakar mil sakte ho.

Angad and Prithvi go in the room where Kripa is. She has her back turned away from them. When she hears them coming, she turns, and is shown wiping her tears.

Kripa: Aao. Baitho yahan.

Angad:-

Kripa: (interrupts) Angad, mujhe yeh kaho ki yeh khabar milne ke baad, kya tum abhi mere dost ho?

Angad: -

Kripa: (interrupts again) Mujhe pata hai ki tera jawaab kya hoga. Yahi na ki ab yeh dosti khatam. Bhala ek akeli kunwari ladki jo ki ek maa banne vali hai, usse kaun dosti karna chahega? Koi nahin. Mujhse shaadi bhi kaun karega? Mere bacche ko kaun naam dega, kaun apnaayega? Koi nahin..

Angad: Bas Kripa! Tumsee shaadi main karoonga. Shayad tujhe pata nahin, lekin main tumse hamesha se pyar karta aaya hoon. Yeh pyar kabhi nahin badlega. Main tumse hamesha pyar karta rahoonga. Mujhe tumhare ateet se, ya tumhare is bacche se koi fark nahin padhta. Jo tumhara hai, voh mera bhi hai. Yeh bacche mera hai. Main tumhe aur is bacche ko apnaoonga. Main is bacche ko apna naam doonga.

Kripa: Lekin jab main tumhe apne ateet ki poori kahani bataaoongi, toh shayad.

Angad: Lekin main tumhare ateet ke baare mein nahin jaanne chahta hoon.

Kripa: Please..

Prithvi: Please Angad..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i really want to know kripa's ateet
pls cont soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awwwwwwww that was an excellent part nehuuu sisi...gr8 job hun...i m sooo happy that finally u r bak!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

thank u...u dont mind that this ff is now mine rite??? coz if u want u can still continue it..

ur always welcum nehuu....y would i mind tum itni ahi ho that i cant sa no n infact there is no problem wid me now!!!!anyway do cont soooon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyotsna13

i really want to know kripa's ateet
pls cont soon 😃

thank u so much for ur commen

i will be sure to continue...and Kripa's ateet will be reveiled soon, and dont worry, angad will still marry her...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: me_iq

awwwwwwww that was an excellent part nehuuu sisi...gr8 job hun...i m sooo happy that finally u r bak!!

thanx...i am also glad that i am back..i had my final exams, was studying hard for them, and now i am glad that they ar over

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: candyprincess

great part can't wait for the next part

thanx..i am writing the next part rite now. it will be posted up in a few minutes...

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