Tormenting Mr. Gangster #2||CHap 44 Pg104 [SanDhir] - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago
The wait was worth it ...it was mindblowing
So hot and cute ...each and every part of the update was fabulous
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yipeee the much awaited part is here
Bt a big wala thanks for updating a little quick

This tym update was not that late


The update was so sexy
I so loved it


Hatts off to u guys
The way this story is turning is mind blowing

Rd expression when he saw sanyu in that nighty
He was dead
He never expected anything like that not even in his wildest dreams
N the way he was gawking at her made her so shy


Bt this tym she was determined



The way she asked him to open his shirt n lie down
Poor guy kya haal hua hoga uska


360 degree k angle par dimaag ghum gya hoga


Then start their never ending teasing session

They both r so sexily cute

Talking all dirty

Their kiss was superb



N then the massage scene was so hot yaha toh ac b fan Jesa lag rha h
Rd was enjoying his surprise

He was genuinely wanted to clear the air them
Bt sanyu k toh kuch r hi plan h


Awww she was making him jealous with some random guy name
He's so cute he was jealous
He almost blurt out his feeling bt damn



Lgta h confession k lie kafi tym h


Sanyu crying
There's this one thing which rd cnt tolerate
Sanyu so cutely admit that she was taking all this to make him realise what she must have felt bcz of that shaina


Rd consoling sanyu
U know di whole updatei was like awww nhi toh I was like so hot

All in all update was hot n cute


Rd b mauke par chauka
Kuch zyada hi demanding ho gya h



Moi cnt wait for next update
Super excited

Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
i REad the ff again from chappy 1..

u knw mujhe ye ff yaad h gya h🤣
still i cant get enough of this ...😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: thundercute

i REad the ff again from chappy 1..


u knw mujhe ye ff yaad h gya h🤣
still i cant get enough of this ...😛


Lol jabse first chapter post ki hai, i never read from the beginning... there must be lots of inconsistency, no ? lolzzz will read it only at the end ^^

If i starts now i know ill see LOTS of mistakes and i will want to correct them on the spot lol

So how was it ? when you read it in one flow ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awwesum updt ... Waitingg fo nxt updt ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
I Really love this ff...admire the way u write.!!:))
The way u portrait d feeling of sanyu and randhir is simply amazing !!:)
Plz update d nxt part soon..!! 😊
Edited by dharanisethuram - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😳 ohhh that was tooo hot, too awesome
😳 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was a really amazing work.. And yes they have come miles from where they both started..
Continue zoon
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey...i luv reading stories...bt wen i came across ur story...i was lyk...omg what was i missing...!! i cant tell u how much i waited my exams to over..so that i can read both threads ...okhay...now abt story...yr i m in luv with dis story...both of u r amazing writer...the intersting self talks n wierd plans of sanyukta makes the story unique...hot gangster randhir n drama queen sanyukta ...luved both characters...actualy i dont even remember things i want to mention...there are sooo many things...n i hav read the story in one go...waiting for next update..pm me if possible...
Edited by kyara7 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
👏 I read it second time I am loving it 😛 😳

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