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Posted: 10 years ago

Such a lovely and realistic story. I love it for not being too mushy, but plain and simple life story. I am so into this story that I re-read all the chapters again. Really looking forward to see how the holi party shapes up. What's Payal upto inviting Khushi? Does Akash have any hand in this invitation? Or is she trying to get Khushi's support for her party and may be through her the support of the shop owners who are against Anand Rams? Sure seems to have a hidden motive there. Another suspicious character now is Renu Bhabi, who is she meeting secretly and what does Akash has to say about her? Hope she's not plotting against Khushi here because I would like to see her as a support for Khushi. And what is with Shyam bhaiyya's mystery? Poonam Raizada noticed Khushi's name in the log book.. oh, what's cooking in that mind now? Don't want any more disasters to happen in Khushi's life. I am especially wary of Mrs. Raizada and what she's capable of doing. Oh and Arnav and Khushi's encounter in his office was hilarious towards the end. Romance in the air? But then he had to throw cold water on whatever it was. I mean, I too am wondering why did he say that about his marriage to Aman - to convince himself or send a message to Khushi after what happened. Anyhow, even without their romance this FF is my favourite.

Khushi - Wow, she's such a strong character and it's always unnerving the way fate has played her.. She gets to be blamed for every unfortunate incident happening around her without even making an effort. It's like she's the magnet that attracts misfortunes. But she has survived all of those bravely. Sad that she couldn't get the degree certificate she deserved and the way her career got ruined. She ended up being a halwai exactly what her dad didn't want her to be. I hope to see her Bauji calling her his champion soon. Everyone she seemed not keen on keeping contacts are back in her contact list and this time around hopefully they all mean good for her. Am not sure if it's mentioned in any chap, I still wonder who wrote the write-up on her in the yearbook -Though I am leaning towards Akash, it could be even Arnav, Aman or Lavanya?

Arnav - Not sure about my feelings for his character though it's getting interesting. Lot of changes from the 14 yr old to 28 yr old. So the snobbish kid has grown up to be matured one even while being 8 yr old at times. And a not so angry Arnav..hmmn... And finally, he admits he "was" attracted to Khushi.. poor him, doesn't realise he's still attracted to her.. 😉

Payal - Honest and unchanging like Arnav says, deep down sweet like Akash says and tad bit insensitive to people she's not friends with. I really like this character at least for the fact that she isn't a pretentious person. Guess the accident has made her think about her relations and priorities. Always thought they had soft corner for each other from the time it was mentioned that Payal was not unfriendly to him in school and may be when she came to check on Khushi in college, probably she was assessing the relation between Khushi and Akash?

Then there is Preeto - Absolute darling and a very supportive friend. She is able to read Khushi well and is always by her side. And her teasing Khushi is fun. Life would be great if you have one friend like her.

Anjali - Ever sweet, funny, dramatic, practical and refreshingly not a pooja wali Anjali..But still meddling-is-my-favorite-past-time Anjali. Her conversations with Arnav and musings has me in splits most of the time. This has to be my most favourite Anjali among all of the fan-fic Anjalis.. 😊 Jun Jeeju seems to be the apt life partner for this Jhalli.

Akash - Seems to be the most level headed guy in this fiction.

Aman is interesting and funny despite having had depression. The name he gave Khushi is my fav nick name for her - Dhanno.. And surprise, he's not interested in Khushi.. I didn't see that coming. So, he was looking for Khushi only to apologize?

Lavanya - Though she has been Khushi's first friend in New-Ons I don't like her much and the grudge she had against Khushi was a little too much for a friend to have. I mean, she really though Khushi was the reason that Preeto fell in love with the person who happened to be her bf? And about the nationals qualifications.. a bit immature she is. Also, not really a friend in need.

Poonam Raizada - My least favourite character so far in this story and I dread to read about her and her thoughts... and her chamcha HP. Funny when I consider it's just a story 😃

Oops, it's such a long comment. Sorry for taking up so much space here, but cudn't keep it shorter.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chapter...Arnav still hopes that his mother will come around...he is so hopeful unlike other members of his family...but what Anjali said is true...he is too good sometimes...looks like everybody understood that Payal and Arnav are not going to marry but they are waiting for them to realize and announce officially...now khushi knows that it is Arnav who was helping her...it is such a coincidence that Aarti Raizada had to visit Arnav on the same day and she knows that khushi visited Arnav...hope she does not create any problem in khushi's life this time...renu bhabhi is a mystery now...but will wait for the reason to come out...everybody is looking to be of some help to khushi...Payal has invited khushi for holi...this is going to be interesting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved this update with some presence from all the characters.
My favorite was the rabba vey of course and loved the sofa scene where Khushi on her high horse declines Arnav's offer of help and instead elects to support herself with the potted plant...ROFL...that is so quintessential KKG !!!! And I can so imagine the ASR smirk and laughter...

I too think Shyam is back and he and Renu Bhabhi may be meeting.

Now why did Arnav have to stress to Khushi that he is very much engaged and looking dorward to getting married...

Also scared for Khushi that Poonam knows she went to see Arnav😲.

Now who does Aman like...Payal?
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Posted: 10 years ago
You create new mysteries and surprises with every update.. That's why it is so tough to wait for the next one..;)

Here we were all waiting for the Arnav Khushi encounter at the baig sir prayer meeting and you instead gave us a rabbe ve (somewhat ;-)) in Arnav's office.. And now I can't wait for Holi.. Will it involve some bhang drinking as well ?? :-D

And then Aman..he's not interested in Khushi? Really? Then who can it be?

What is Payal really trying to do? I thought she had changed after the accident.. And what is she arguing with aakash about?

Who is renu Bhabhi meeting? Is it Shyam or someone else?

And this Poonam raizada! Can anything ever escape her !! She even has luck on her side inspite of being nasty..

Loved Anjali, Jun, NK.. Arnav finally admitted his attraction.. Here's to a fresh start ! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update loved ArShi scene ASR laughed twice :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
Akash is secretly in love with Payal. Payal and Arnav together are so boring, how come they never realized it? What new catastrophe is Poonam going to initiate now?
Jitna bhi lamba chappy ho yellowji, humain kam he lagta hai :) in love with your writing :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zainza

Akash is secretly in love with Payal. Payal and Arnav together are so boring, how come they never realized it? What new catastrophe is Poonam going to initiate now?

Jitna bhi lamba chappy ho yellowji, humain kam he lagta hai :) in love with your writing :)


I feel the same way!! I want to read it like I used to read HP books.. Never ending..until you force yourself to stop..

*sigh* waiting is punishment🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
so everything is now coming in khushi's favour good...
who is aman's girl..??
hope arnav khushi will have a good future...or will his mother turn villian again..
loved the update waiting for the next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome. ...loved it...hope arnavs mom doesn't create more problem in khushis life...
curious about aman's girl. ...don't know why I feel it would be love triangle between aman- payal- akash...
continue sooon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I have enjoyed how this story has developed and the writing style - juxtaposing past and present, and the ease that wealth affords versus the struggles of the middle class, and the bridge that Khushi negotiates between these 2 worlds.
You have created characters that have depth and complexity - an admirable feat, as it makes them more real, and less predictable. Particularly enjoy the social class contrasts that emerge, mixed with national and family politics.

Appreciate your writing style and the story.

Looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

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