Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II) - Page 55

Perfect characters with all their imperfections

It is amazing how you intertwine so many diff facets of social and economic thinking in India at diff strata's of life in a realistic manner and still have a cohesive story going on... Kudos

LOL, how do you come up with this stuff "Dhannovantri Devi Mata"... I bet you have a great sense of humor yourself to think this stuff

Also it is crazy how Aman and Arnav remember every little detail of their interactions with Khushi - be it her ring missing, her not coming in his house, her favorite ice cream flavor... Some competition there is going to be...

Very powerful though, feel like the story depends on this - "But this time he knew that he was not going to walk away. He would not"... Wonder who the anonymous person to help her w the legal issue would be

Another one by Preeto "And Khushi, Dilli utna bhi door nahi hain"... Khushi will realize her life partner too

Would really love to have the conversation between Aman and Arnav at Khushi's place... Also why did he come there in the first place... Payal is already seeing all the red flags... However practical you maybe a relationship has to feel right... Women's instincts are always right; hopefully she will change her mind soon and call off the wedding... Really curious the Akash Payal conversation on the way back home too

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Nice update i had written a big comment For u and 2 times f**king 2times iT tot lost on my iPad

wow! I absolutely loved today's update. Aman came back and it seems like he's changed although somethings have stayed the same. It seems like he and Khushi are on each other's good sides. While Arnav seems to be cut out from that world. I love how you balanced the tragic death with the unmistakable light that comes with a new life. Can't wait to see what happens!

U r simply a great writer, I just got so much attached with this story and i am waiting for your updates...Simply superb chapter and loved it.

The story flows in front of your eyes...very interesting..

Loved the update...the conversation between anjali and arnav was my favorite part

I love your updates. The best thing about them is that I never know what to expect and every time I am so wonderfully surprised. 😳 You are a really interesting writer. I like all the twists and turns in your writing. So happy that aman has finally made a move towards getting to know khushi better. Arnav seems to be feeling left out. Wonder if his opinion of khushi ignoring him will change once he realizes her phone number has changed. Really looking forward to the next update.

I love everything about this story - details, pace and not so dramatic ups n downs of Khushi's life...this story is like bowl of too-soupy/mushy Maggie noodles that you eat at midnight after the fasting!!! So ordinary yet so gratifying!!!! Keep it up

aman + phone = bad moments to come for khushi. hope she makes it this time.

Firstly, thank you for the really looong chapter. Loved it... Both the length and the update. 😊

Congratulations Preeto and Ginny. These two are adorable and Preeto is super fun even when she is hundred weeks pregnant. 😆 Leher is a beautiful name.

It was actually aman who suggested that Khushi is the reason for his suicide?! 😲 That was unexpected.

Aww.. Aman did buy her a phone. Aur voh bhi sasta aur tikau... Preeto will be happy and probably will add another option for the role of her jeeju. 😃

Would have loved to know the actual conversion between Arnav, Aman, and Khushi.
That reminds me... Why did Arnav come to Khushi anyway? Did he totally forget why he came after seeing Khushi smiling and accepting gifts from Aman?

Why does Payal think it's the right thing to marry Arnav? Because he just lets her be the way she is? What is she expecting from this marriage?

I'm glad Anjali and Jun are planning to adopt.
Children are a necessity for civilization... 😆 Arnav is surely a different person when he is with his di.

Now with the 'who are you' message from Khushi, I know Arnav is hurt but I hope he is not so hurt that he keeps sulking without replying.

This update had all NK, Anjali, Preeto.. who bring some relief into an otherwise tense story. I can see Aman soon joining this list. 😊