#2 Arshi FF: Smitten By The Neighbour ~New thread link on Page 140~ - Page 6

great update..luvd it...very emotional..khushi spelling out her fears to rishi's pic..so sad...hope garima n ratna do somethng soon to bring them three together...😊

I dont know why but I was not able
to post this comment due some IF
error.
Anyways, this comment is for smiiten
by the neighbour arshi version.
I really dont know if I have ever read
such artistic peice of work.
first of all, the way you write is
fabulous and some times little
sentences you write have more than
one meaning. We can relate to
them. What I like about you the
most is that you write in very simple
and heart touching language.
After reading the same romance
stories on arshi this story is
sonething very fresh and mature.
I dont know why butI can imagine
you feeling all the emotions of all
the characters when you write.
Now, having someone else as khushis
love was never acceptable to me but
the way you potrayed rishi. I dont
know abt others but I am in love
with that character.
I was crying when I read khushis
pain and suddenly my mother came
and looked at me incredulously and
I was like 'Nothing just something
wennt into my eyes' * You know I
possibly can telk her I am crying
reading a ff when my Sem are going
on ;) *
Okay now.
I liked arnav too much. Hotie having
sexy butt. And the father in him
stole my heart.
The way you kept the essence of
their old spouses alive was
marvelous. I mean it always cant be
like arshi meet eachother and Tada
all other forgotten.
It takes time.
And samrat I just want a baby boy
like him in future * Which is like 10
years away. Me still 19. shies away *
I like ratna, garima, arvind , gauri ,
god forid pam and sim too and did I
mention I hate Swathi bas .
everything goes smooth and then
Samrat have an accident. I got
digestion problems now. I mean I
just want to beat that watchman
who could not stop Sam. He let my
baby go. Bad bad man and weak to.
cant even handle a baby.
And now coming back.

i am very glad the way story is turning out.

avi.

awesome episode... really very emotional one... u r too gud in emotional scenes... i think most of the reader would have cried while reading ur story like me... too gud...👏👏👏

my eyes are swollen with😭

Wonderful update...
Beautifully written...

P.S. congrats for new thread.. :)

Nice update,this story is so close to my heart the reason I wrote in previous comment,this story is so different n emotional.

wise decision Garima...Khushi needs Sam n Arnav in her life...

By seeing the title i assumed the story would be a rom-com.
And when i started i couldn't stop.
Brilliantly written

Yay Garima Ratna joined their forces. Feeling bad for Khushi, i hope she recovers soon.