Originally posted by: awsome_avi24
I dont know why but I was not able to post this comment due some IF
error. Anyways, this comment is for smiiten by the neighbour arshi version. I really dont know if I have ever read such artistic peice of work. first of all, the way you write is fabulous and some times little sentences you write have more than one meaning. We can relate to them. What I like about you the most is that you write in very simple and heart touching language. After reading the same romance stories on arshi this story is sonething very fresh and mature. I dont know why butI can imagine you feeling all the emotions of all the characters when you write. Now, having someone else as khushis love was never acceptable to me but the way you potrayed rishi. I dont know abt others but I am in love with that character. I was crying when I read khushis pain and suddenly my mother came and looked at me incredulously and I was like 'Nothing just something wennt into my eyes' * You know I possibly can telk her I am crying reading a ff when my Sem are going on ;) *Okay now. I liked arnav too much. Hotie having sexy butt. And the father in him stole my heart. The way you kept the essence of their old spouses alive was marvelous. I mean it always cant be like arshi meet eachother and Tada all other forgotten. It takes time. And samrat I just want a baby boy
like him in future * Which is like 10 years away. Me still 19. shies away * I like ratna, garima, arvind , gauri , god forid pam and sim too and did I mention I hate Swathi bas .
everything goes smooth and then Samrat have an accident. I got digestion problems now. I mean I just want to beat that watchman who could not stop Sam. He let my baby go. Bad bad man and weak to. cant even handle a baby. And now coming back. i am very glad the way story is turning out.
avi.
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
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