Love Story Of Years *Chapter 17* (26/APRIL/2017) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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read all parts ws awesome...
do pm me next updates whenever u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Karkit

read all parts ws awesome... Thank You Dear. 😊... I'm Really Happy That I Got One More Reader To Read My Story... 😊
do pm me next updates whenever u update Sure Dear... Thank You... 😊



Thank You Dear... 😊... Will PM U.. 😊... Thank You For Reading It... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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read all the prts they r very good
waiting for ur next update desperately
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

read all the prts they r very good Thank You.. 😊... I'm Glad U Like This Story Of Mine Alsoo.. 😊... Thank You.. 😊
waiting for ur next update desperately Yupp Will Post It Soon.. 😊



Thank You... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW!! beautiful part dear...loved it...sorry for late commenting...My pc having internet problem or may be it needs formatting...
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Thank You...😊
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! beautiful part dear...loved it... Thank You.. 😊 sorry for late commenting...My pc having internet problem or may be it needs formatting...Its Okayy Dear... 😊



Thank You Dear... 😊 And Will Post Character Sketches Soon... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey di, how you? 😊
I promised to read and comment soon so here it is
Chapter 1
Couldn't believe that Giri is so mean to Uday but then I found out why but still, the child didn't do anything to him, he shouldn't have done what he did. He was hurt after finding out that Uday is not his son but he didn't have to hurt the child.
Chapter 2
I was shocked to read about Giri wanting to kill Uday and his maid, thankfully that didn't happen and the manager did not have a heart of stone
Chapter 3
Felt bad for Manyata when Uday spoke rudely to her but loved the part where they became friends and the part where she made tea for him.
Chapter 4
Loved when Uday wanted to fight with the kid who dropped Manyata, it showed that he cared. Loved the scene when they went to the park and their cute childish scenes and how Uday teased Manyata and Manyata ran after him.
Chapter 5
I was shocked when Manyata's father walked in injured and didn't want Uday to touch him.
Felt really bad for Manyata and can understand how she must be feeling.
I can't believe that Msnyata is dead, I hope she survived.
Chapter 6
Love the fact that Uday is successful but I don't like how he uses girls and his attitude. Armaan should have tried and helped Uday.
Feel bad for Vassu, Uday's mother, she lives Uday so much and the way Uday treats her.
Uday's sister is so sweet and how concerned she was for her brother.
Harris is a bit mean but I agree with him, Uday chose the wrong path, he could have lived it in another way but he didn't.
Really hoping Manyata is alive
Thanks for all the pms 😊
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey di, how you? 😊 I'm Fine Sis... 😊... And How R U... 😊
I promised to read and comment soon so here it is Yuppp... 😊 I'm Glad To See Ur Comment.. 😊
Chapter 1
Couldn't believe that Giri is so mean to Uday but then I found out why but still, Yuppp.. He Was Betrayed... 😔 the child didn't do anything to him, Yuppp... Uday Didn't Do Anything To Him.. Infact Uday Loved Him.. 😊 But Griraj Is Griraj... 😡 😆 he shouldn't have done what he did. He was hurt after finding out that Uday is not his son but he didn't have to hurt the child. Yuppp True... He Thought Killing The Innocent Angel Everything Will Be Perfect.. 😡... Or Beating Him Or Killing Him The Feeling Of Betrayed Would Be Finished.. Here He Was Wrong...

Chapter 2
I was shocked to read about Giri wanting to kill Uday and his maid, Yuppp Wanted To Kill So He Could Clean Up The Mess.. 😡 thankfully that didn't happen and the manager did not have a heart of stone Yupp Griraj Planned Fail... 😊 😃 Manager Was Finding The Right Time To Save The Uday And His Maid.😃... And Thus Succeeded In It. 😊 😃

Chapter 3
Felt bad for Manyata when Uday spoke rudely to her Yuppp Uday Had To Do Becox What He Suffered Manyata Can't Feel The Pain... 😔 😭 but loved the part where they became friends Thank You ... 😊 and the part where she made tea for him. Really 😃... Seriously I Was Thinking How Can A Young Girl Would Make A Tea... But Afterall Its A Story So Thought Of It... Hihihihihihi...😆

Chapter 4
Loved when Uday wanted to fight with the kid who dropped Manyata, Fight.
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it showed that he cared. Yuppp... 😊 😃 Loved the scene when they went to the park 😊 I Love Going To Amusement Parks.. So Thought Let ManVeer Do Enjoy Before The Goons Action.. 😡 and their cute childish scenes Yuppp.. 😊 and how Uday teased Manyata and Manyata ran after him. Hihihihihihihihi 😆 ManVeer Tom And Jerry Game... 😆

Chapter 5
I was shocked when Manyata's father walked in injured Yuppp... Poor Girl's Father Condition.. 😔 and didn't want Uday to touch him. Yuppp... 😔
Felt really bad for Manyata and can understand how she must be feeling. Yuppp.. She Was In Shock After Seeing Her Father... 😔
I can't believe that Manyata is dead, Yeahhh She Had To Unfortunately... 😔 😭 ...I hope she survived. I Really Hope She Survived... 😃 😭

Chapter 6
Love the fact that Uday is successful Yeahhh.. 😊 He Have To... 😊 To Take Revenge... 😔 but I don't like how he uses girls and his attitude. I Also Hate That Part... 😡 Even I Had Bit Difficulty To Show This Side Of Uday... 😔 He Was All Doing This To Take Revenge From Himself And From His Dear Ones And From EveryOne.. Armaan should have tried and helped Uday. He Did... But U Will Know It ... 😊
Feel bad for Vassu, Uday's mother, Yuppp...😔 she lives Uday so much and the way Uday treats her. Yuppp... Its Just Becox Of Griraj ... 😡
Uday's sister is so sweet and how concerned she was for her brother. [COLOR=lime green]Yuppp.. 😊 😃

Harris is a bit mean but I agree with him, Yeahhh.. 😕 Uday chose the wrong path, He Chose This Path So That Griraj Who Wanted The Popularity...😡 And Also This Becox Uday Thought Its A Right Path To Take Revenge From EveryOne... 😡 he could have lived it in another way but he didn't. He Could... But Griraj's Words Were Echoing In His Mind ''Popularity'' So He Did It..
Really hoping Manyata is alive I'm Also Really Hoping That Manyata Is Alive.. 😊.. But She Didn't.. 😭

Thanks for all the pms Your Welcome Dear... 😊 😊
Please update soon Yeahhh.. Sure.. Soon.. 😊



Thanks Dear... 😊... Really Glad To See Ur Comment... 😊... And Will Update Soon Next Part.. 😊 But Before The Next Update I Will Give Character Sketches So That EveryOne Knows About The Upcoming Characters.. 😊... Thank You Dear For Ur Beautiful Comment... 😊
Edited by alisha_ashiyal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Great story from a great writer 😊
It's my first post on if and m glad i have done it on your story :).
Edited by Ana.. - 10 years ago

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