ArShi SS: Shine My Life ~ Ch 5 in Page 78 [6/Aug]

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

U left it at such a crucial stage... am so desperately waiting to read whats going on. Hope Khushi is fine.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: sheen.sk
that was really nice & full of emotion...

i really felt for Arnav,
his guilt of loosing his mother coz of him...
his pain of putting every on in miseries..
& his fear of he'll harm his loved once..
he going through a lot from that fatefull day..

& only Khushi can bring him out from that guilt..
but now she is not with him wondering for waht reason they not together...

& now she is in danger,hope he will save her...

pls update soon.
thanks for the pm

Thanks dear.. Your words mean a lot to me !! 😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: kushiarnav1
hope kushi is fine...is somebody kidnapped her???????or she is doing for arnav so that he doesn't blame himself for what ever happened to his mother, its not his mistake...

looking forward tot he next chapter...

What happened to her, to him, u'll have to wait a little more dear. Things start revealing from next chapter.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: BarunFan1212
Hi Naina,

Another beautiful story.

Thanks for the PM

It's nice to see the love struck Arnav though he had a bad past.

And Khushi is so sweet. Such a loving bubbly girl.

Waiting anxiously for all your story update.

You are an amazing writer please give us a long chapter and frequent updates please!

Thanks dear. Ur comments in my stories, bring me immense joy... 😊

I feel extremely sorry for the delay... And I assure there will be longer chapters. I thought last chapter was big enough.. Isn't it??

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: Aarohi...
U left it at such a crucial stage... am so desperately waiting to read whats going on. Hope Khushi is fine.

Coming soon, dear. Sorry kept u waiting... 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: 6thelement.

Naina.. The way you write is simple and cute..😉😉

Thanks dear. I saw ur response in my other story as well.. I am truly overwhelmed... 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: Chaverah_TFC
And, another wonderful update!!
Man, this arnav has SO much stocked up inside him. And yes, as stupid as his reasons might seem, its true what a few incidents bend you to believe, even when u want to b practical.

So, arnavji thinks he is a bad omen? Err..actually, scratch that. He believes he is a bad omen, a murderer n a pathetic loser. Great! The fate of ASR, u see.

D past is painful but d romance was amazing. Emotions are emoted really beautifully making it seem lively. I like d hesitance, d anger, d melting of ice n finally d revelation. I mean, d flow was beautifully planned. Bravo!

Why, d devil in you!!!

That's not a cliff hanger, its a mountain hanger!!!

Congo's&Cheers!!
Than you for d PM
Would love to read more.

Love&Hugs.

Candy, what do I say about ur words. It lifts my spirit, and what more do I want than to hear this from my favourite writer. Thank u so very much for the overwhelming words... 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Shine My Life

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He pressed call button, expecting to hear her answer again. The only voice he heard was a voice telling him that this number is not reachable.

"What do you mean?", Arnav yelled in the phone.

"Bhai, even I couldn't reach Payal. She was in office yesterday...", he heard Akash say, "... and, Khushi did not come to office from the day you...", his voice trailed off, "... And, based on the video footage, she was last seen talking to a woman.. whom we couldn't yet identify.. Security thinks she may not be an AR employee".