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Posted: 10 years ago
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You know what I found in this chapter Mirabell? I found my way back into IPK. It was a small tunnel somewhere in the middle of the chapter which took me back into the world of Iss Pyaar Ko that I've so come to love. A world where Arnav Singh Raizada decides to be stubborn and stupid. Where Khushi finds in NK, a friend, one of her closest. And most importantly, where NK finds Khushi. More than a friend, little less than a lover, somewhere in between, hoping to cross that bridge.

I've wondered would it ever be possible for Khushi to have loved NK, like she loved Arnav?

Convention tells me, no. Why? Because Arnav and Khushi fell in love first. We're all pretty much fascinated with the idea of first love. At least, I am. But in reality, it is completely flawed. In a real world, NK and Khushi would have ended up together. Because in the real world, someone as flawed as Arnav, would make choices, consequences of which would be too hard for Khushi to bear. THIS is your Arnav. The real Arnav. And your NK, who lived up to be the friend he always was.

You've always made me look at things with a different perspective. And I love it. I love this.

In the world of fan fictions, it's nice to see something a little unconventional, something edging more towards 'what usually happens' instead of 'what should happen'.
It's like a fresh breeze.

You make my weekends so much better,M!

Love,
Isha


Oh oh wait. Is the next chapter going to be Arnav's perspective? I may have come to love NK but I miss my Arnav too, you know.

And umm, I hope this made sense. I loved this chapter, like hamesha, that's all you need to know. :)
Edited by xshilohx - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
IT WAS A BEAUtiful update! nk and kushi...!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update
Loved it
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the mail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chotidesi

Chutki's here.

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Goddamn it.

Goddamn you.

I hate you.


For making me crave NK's presence so damn badly. I never ever ever thought I would say that. But thanks to YOU, here I am, with an aching heart that just refuses to untwist.

Your words are magic, YOU are magic. Not just because of who you are as a person, but because of the way your words touch people, the way they make people feel, inspire people- because you sure as hell inspire me. Every, single, day. You make me so proud. It takes a lot of courage to go against the tide, love. But you do, you push yourself, you challenge yourself- you're my river.

I can't do justice to the heartbreaking melancholy of this update. The image of that person disappearing in a cloud of dust, his eyes red rimmed from her rejection- will stay with me for hours, days. I've always told you that you fill in the color to black and white pictures- here is one moment you truly did.

Never has such a lyrical, poetic love scene made my skin tingle, my hands feel the curls on NK's neck, shiver in anticipation. The feeling of discovery is so palpable, and you let the reader feel the change in how she sees him through her eyes, feel the way her heart now pounds for him. NK's acceptance of her without any conditions, the way he just wants her as she is, loves her for WHO she is... man, M, you make it really hard on us. Really, really hard. Forget filling in color- you turned these scenes into GIFs, the moving pictures in Harry Potter. You brought him to life in our minds, a character that has passed, that isn't even present in real time! How the hell do you do it? Just- how?

You turned us into traitors, Mirabell. We've broken the code. For the first time, we don't just want Arnav and Khushi together, but long for NK and Khushi as well.

You're a hell of a writer, a hell of a woman.

Love you,
Chutki.


I "stole" your text because you managed to express exactly what I am feeling
No words could do more justice to this story and its writer !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Each word and line speaks itself, ie how you write. An amazing update.
How can any one not love NK when you write such poetically...Hes an amazing guy
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved the flashback of kushi and nk nk loved kushi from the bottomof his heart waiting tosee how the story moves forward with arnav and kushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update...

Love NK...
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Please Pm me when you update

Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nice update...

Love NK...
👏

Please Pm me when you update

Thanks 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful written.
The journey of khushi n nk from best friends to husband wife n parents

I however want to know the person referred to as HIM who khushi refused coz she dint believe in relationships was Arnav the one who went away without fighting for them.

If it was Arnav then why did khushi refuse him she had no problem being with nk when he insisted.

Did she think Arnav wasn't the one or she wanted Arnav to pursue her like nk did when she refused.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Very nicely written. NK did not leave Khushi even after she resisted him so much. He was patient and persistent. You have beautifully written their friendship and love. Waiting for next chapter

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