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Posted: 10 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

I am writing a note, re!

kaisa note people will find it hard to find between my million comments lol so post on a new page

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Posted: 10 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: PinkPenguinxo
kaisa note people will find it hard to find between my million comments lol so post on a new page

I am also PMing about it! So my PMs have a note in it! Million comments truly!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: PinkPenguinxo
bas its your birthday so ja maaf kia my heart is too big ❤️

Galti hai kahaan!?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Galti hai kahaan!?

itna chota update :(

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: PinkPenguinxo
itna chota update :(

It is above 800 words! Aur kitna bada likhoon yaar?

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Posted: 10 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

It is above 800 words! Aur kitna bada likhoon yaar?

aur chahiye 😡

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ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#367

loved it ...i just hope arnav would take care of her

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Yagya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: PinkPenguinxo
aur chahiye 😡

Agli baar jyada hoga!

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nagina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#369

It was nice update

Thanks for pm me

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KAJAL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#370

oh well! I'm sorry for not reviewing your fictions earlier... Couldn't manage my time properly. Anyways, this fiction has a pretty intriguing plot just like your other fictions and is certainly a splendid one.
Arnav's characterization has been enthrallingly perfect and his emotions are very well portrayed. Khushi... You have a peculiar exquisite way of defining and describing her.
So, we have a drunk Khushi now? It'll be quite interesting to know how Arnav will handle her... Uhoh!
Eagerly waiting to read the next part.
Please update soonish!!

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Keya