The Mystery Of The Dancing Feet(Unsolved)- A sandhir ff

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Mera Hola 2 u ppl once again!!!
I know most of u just wanna murder me right now coz i have left holiday n benaam ff aur dusra shuru kar diya...buri aadat hain😛
Anywayz, jaldi hi update kar dungi.
Philhaal toh stop glaring at me n yeh wala enjoy karo!
Happy reading!!!!
CHARACTER SKETCH--------
SANYUKTA-Same as in the show, randhir's girlfriend.
RANDHIR-A mischevious, fun loving, couldnt care less type of boy, handsome n hot. Sanyu's boyfriend.
PARTH-Same as show, sandhirs common frnd,randhir's bestie
KAUSTUKI-Sanyu's bestie. These 4 form the most popular grp of besties in college.
VARDHAAN SIR- Same as show, except he is a little bit more easygoing here.
REST OF THE CHARACTERS AS STORY PROGRESSES...
liked it??? No prologue as such, but will post the first parrt soon.
WARNING-Updates may not b regular though i will try for once a week, ie every friday.
COMMENTS PLEASE!!! :D

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Glitz-

intrstng update soon :)

thnx!
Sure😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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IMPORTANT NOTE:

This ff is not entirely my story. It is based(inspired) upon the book 'THE MYSTERY OF THE DANCING FEET' By ROHINI SINGH. But it is a childrens book, and I had to put a LOT of effort converting it into a college student story. The basic plot is hers, but I have made many many changes to it, and the dialogues. The characters, as u can c, are also mine(or rather, durjoy sir's). So now sit back n enjoy d story. scroll down for the first part. HAPPY READING!
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PLEASE READ THE ABOVE POSTED VERY IMPORTANT NOTICE B4 READING THE CHAPPY.

HOLA!!!!!!!!!!

yes, I m back with an update. SHOLLY M LATEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and something I wanna tell u

1)updates will NOTb frequent but they will be long so I don't want dhamaki waala scraps n pms cluttering up my inbox

2)when I had posted the CS, some1 had pm-ed me saying tht she wud b happy if I wrote more of the post in English as she doesn't know much hindi. and she had also requested 2 remain anonymous.So I will call her choti(she's younger thn me). choti,If u r reading this now, see I have written mostly in English, only sum plcs I hv used hindi. hope that's fine.

happy reading, guyz!!!!!!!!

CHAPTER-ONE

"Parth!"

"yes sir!"

"Sanyukta!"

"yes sir!"

"Kaustuki!"

"yes sir!"

"Randhir!"

Vardhaan sir looked up from his list and repeated. No response. "Sanyukta, will u plz go n look fr him?"he said, sounding exasperated."Rest of u, into the bus! QUICK!" he shouted. Yes, they were going on a picnic

FLASHBACK

Dean maya: What is this, vardhaan??

Vardhaan: what is what, Maya??

DM: Vardhaan, college ke rules ke mutabik college ke students ko once a year trip pe le jaaya jaata hain. And as usual, tumne yeh baat overlook ki hain. Baaki students toh jaate hain lekin tumhaari DT ko tum leke ni jaate n doosre college toppers jaate nahi. I order u, tum apni DT aur 1st se 4th yr ke saare toppers ko leke jaao trip pe

END OF FLASHBACK

Even though he had objected 2 the idea thn, he felt tht this shud b a very welcome break for the students and they wud work even harder on coming back. This put him in a great holiday mood(even he is a human being, guyz)

He was shaken out of his reverie a few mins later as Sanyukta arrived, a breathless Randhir in tow

"and where did u catch up with him??" he asked

"oh..he was in the gym,sir!" she replied, looking visibly horrified thather boyfriend could have even felt like doing push-ups at 5:30 in the morning! She looked up 2 see vardhan sir counting them as the bus set off. The bus jolted fwd and the chatter and excitement reached such a level tht vardhan sir was sur tht the din cud get no louder!

"btw, whats the name of the place we r gonna visit?" asked kaustuki "i can neva seem 2 remember it!"

"Its samgarh, bimbo"said randhir."its not far frm Jaipur"

"itsa palace, btw. A real one, in which kings n queens once lived. Its got hundreds of rooms n durbaars. I can hardly wait 2 explore. It seems so nice to explore something other tht machines! Not that I mind machines, infact they r my passion, but still..."

"yeah parth...I can understand...even though machines r the only thing which made me leave my own home...maa, papa..." sanyu becameemotional. A tear rolled down her cheek. Randhir who was sitting beside her, noticed this. He wiped away the tear and hugged her tight, moving his fingers through her hair to calm her down. She composed herself in a few minutes and looked at parth and kaustuki, still clutching randhir's hand tightly. He rubbed his thumb over the back of her palm, assuring her it will be alright. Kaustki, who was sitting beside parth in the seat directly opposite n facing them,cupped herface with one hand and kissed her cheek lightly. Parth smiled at this'PDA' of the two besties.

"hey kaustuki, did u bring ur sketch book??" asked parth, just 2 change the topic. "I remember the lovely sketches u had done when we had gone behind vardhan sir in the village!"

Kaustuki nodded. "And did U bring ur music book and guitar? Oh! How stupid! I can see ur guitar there.*points to the overhead luggage compartment*. Well, what about the book? With all those songs?"

"Yes, i have...iss baar maza aa jaaega, coz not only the dream team, but sum more ppl frm FITE are there!"

"How i wish jiggy was here with us..." Mourned a love lost kaustuki. Parth gently squeezed her shoulders and said"Dont worry, kaustu. U know na he has gone 2 samgarh with his family n will be joining us there?" "haan...lekin bus mein bhi hamaare saath hota toh kitna mazaa aata!" She said.

"guyzz!!! Look outside!!!" Exclaimed Sanyu and Randhir.

As they had left the city behind now, they could see the fields and villages flash by. Restfull green fields seemed to stretch as ar as the eye could see. So much sky all around! It truly seemed to be a really romantic atmosphere. Even as the villages with their strange sounding names flashed by, parth thought 2 himself how slow slow life seemed seemed here." Hey there! Come back to earth!"sanyu poked him, jolting him out of his reverie.Just then, the bus stopped at a restaurant. Sanyu quickly whipped out her travellogue and wrote down 'arrived at midway-behror restaurant-8:30am' "what a funny name! Midway!" said kaustuki. "yeah kaustu, its situated excactly between Delhi and jaipur,thats why" explained Sanyu."and here is where v r gonna have breakfst and pick up jiggy, kaustuki" teased VARDHAAN SIR. every1 was shocked at first- vardhaan sir was teasing kaustuki!!!! "dont gimme those looks guyzz...even i m a human being...n i m in a holiday mood right now. So u can expect me 2 b like this for d rest of the trip!" he said. Soon, they got down frm the bus and sat themselves down on the grassy lawns.Very soon,, a waiter arrived carrying plates of cheese burgers, cutlets and frooties. Looking at the burger and frootie,Sandhir remembered their drunk confession and blushed&smiled like idiots b4 feeding a bite of sandwich to each other. Randhir looked towards sanyu who was busy teasing kaustuki about jiggy. She looked at him and they both shared an eyelock. It was broken by kaustuki coughing meaningfully and sayin "hmm...toh mujhe chidhaegi tu haan?? oho!!! dekho toh!!! so sum1 can blush!!!!" she said coz sanyu was starting to become tamaatar. Soon they were done and and they boarded the bus to continue with the journey. They were all in and seated and were just waiting for jiggy 2 come so that they could start the bus. And then suddenly, when they were all busy with their talks n chatters, there came a loud sound

THUDD!!!!!!

stay tuned in for more!!!
PRECAP: Antakshari, Jaipur & bangles
Guyzz...I did my work. Now if & when I get 25+ likes n atleast 20+ comments, only then I will continue
Edited by saddahqrocks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res
Unres..
Are u from Jaipur noopur??
Gosh!! Its my city.. I live in Jaipur..
The update was awesome..
Loved it.. Cute..
Update next soon..
M waiting..
Edited by samridhigoodiez - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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resss
unress kr hi deti hun..
Arey mera chhota sa Paggu khush hoja finally The Vamp ne unress kr hi diya..
glares at rabri di😡
mera first position!!!!
koi ni 2nd bhi achcha h..but desire high🤣

Awesome update..
Abhi hold pr h ff bt resume karo jld se jld
speed mein

Love
Dixu*
Edited by roshinicool - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ress

Unress

hehe .. so finally m unreserving my comment
charactersketch sounds intresting ...
jaldi se update karna chotu
aur pm karna mat bhoolna
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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bulbul nice update love it a lot 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plzz lemme remind u guyzz res is not counted as comment...
samy di
Tamannah di
Sanu di
N any1 else who ressed
Unress kro jaldi warna i will sue u...
And sanu di ruko aap aapki complaint toh mai bhai se hi karti hu...
"res
Ja ni krungi unress"
Arrey kaise ni karegi re unress
Karna hi padega unress
Warna...

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