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TAAREY SS : IT STILL CAN BE CHANGED.
CHAPTER -7
all came out from visheshs house.
Vishal : swayam aapke farm house ki keys hai mere pass so sab Wahi chalte hai.
Rey : but taani! !
Vishal : rahul tu ek kam kar girls and baaki sab ko lekar farm house ke liye nikal. Mein rey aur swayam taani ko dhondh kar lekar aate hai.
Sharon : nahi hum ghar kaise ja sakte hai Jab tak taani nahi mil jaati.
Swayam : sharon woh theek keh raha hai. Is waqt waise bhi taani ko lekar muje bahut tension ho rahi hai.
Pata nahi woh Kis haal mein hogi khud sambhal payegi bhi ya nahi.
Aise mein itne saare logo ka Itni raat ko ghumna is not right.
Vishal : aur girls ki safety is important.
You guys go hum pakka taani ko lekar aate hai.
Swayam : tab tak ritika shanaya tum log ek kam karo na Un sab logo ko call karo whom you think taani must be with.
Vishal rey (together):uski koi zarurat nahi.
Rey : right now woh akele rehna chahegi.
Vishal : woh kisi ke pass nahi jaane wali.
Rahul : chalo let's leave.
Tum log jao taani ko dhondhe.

With taani. (Her dress is the same she wears in sagai in the show do check the pic)
Taani was hurt angry too many emotions were going on in her. ..
She was driving the car too speed. At 150. . Her car got crashed with a big tree in front.
Taanis head bent down once.
She stood up.
Taani to herself.
Stop it just stop it. Kyu kar rahi hu mein ye sab. Bas muje khud ko sambhalna hoga. Yes I have to. Warna bhai aur baaki sab. Tauji khud ko blame karenge in sab ke liye ...
Bas wipes her tears.
She comes down from the car. And goes to a nearer pco.
She dials a number.

With gang
As decided all went only Reyam and vishal are left.
Swayams phone rangs
Swayam : hello.
Taani : bhai mein taani bol rahi hu.
Swayam : taani tum tum theek ho na kaha ho tum
Taani : ha bhai mein theek hu meri gaadi band pad gayi Hai aap vishal ko phone do mein samjhati hu usse ki mein kaha hu pls pick me from here.
Swayam : Haa ok one min
Vishal ye le taani se baat kar.
Taani tells him where she is then the trio went to pick taani.

With taani.
There was a garden in front so she went there.
Taani sat there on grass with her legs folded partially by which her head was touching her chin.
Taani was in deep thought.
Soon trio came there. They first pepper to see taani. Taani was blank there was no expression on her face.
Swayam heded forward.
Swayam : taani tumhari car ka accident kaise hua.
Tum theek toh ho. (it was hidden tone of asking her situation mentally too regarding vishesh matter)
Taani : bhai. mein theek hu woh bas break kharab tha toh gaadi ki thokar ho gayi.
Isliye toh meine aap logo ko bulaya.
Then she saw rey. Her eyes automatically searched for ground. She lowered her eyes.
Swayam : taani jo hua woh.
He was interrupted.
Taani : bhai ghar chalte hai na i am very tired.
Swayam understood that she don't want to talk about it.
Swayam : okk chalo gadi mein baitho.
Now rey was driving the car. Taani was seating just at her back side. Swayam was next to taani and vishal was seating at another frontier seat.
Rey could clearly get a view of taani through the mirror.

There was complete silence in the car. Rey was looking taani. Swayam was also looking at her through side eye (you know)
Taani pov
Plz don't look at me. Mein kuch nahi kehna chahti. Meri galti kya hai krishanaji kyu har baar mere saath aisa hota hai mein jitna aage badhne ki koshish karti hu dungi raftar se peche girti hu. Kyu jab mein thoda confident feel karti hu mere pairo tale zameen sarak jaati hai kyu? ...why me always.

Their house came.
Swayam : taani ghar aa gaya. (As she was lost so he said)
Taani : ha.
They get down of car.
They went inside the house.
All looked at taani to speak she was quite.
Sharon : taani tum theek ho na
Taani : ha I am okk.
Then shanays phone rang.
She received call it was vishesh.
Shanaya : guys vishesh ka phone hai usse taani se baat karni hai. Speaker pe dal ne bol raha hai dalu?
Swayam : usse toh mein baat karta hu. (Angry)
Taani : ek minute dal phone speaker pe looking at shanaya.
Shanaya did as she said.
All were like why the he'll is she listening him.
Vishesh : don't you dare cut my call. Muje pata hai abhi tum sab ke dimag mein plan chal raha hoga ki muje sabak kaise seekhaya jaye. But wait, kuch karne ka sochna bhi mat warna mein jo karunga na woh tumhe kahi ka nahi chodega taani.
Rey : teri himat kaise hui phone karne ki. Vishesh : apne aashiq ko samjha do limit mein rahe.
Swayam : zubaan sambhal ke baat kar warna tuje mein zinda nahi chodunga.
Vishal : i am proud ki mein hamesha tujse nafrat karta tha. Tuj jaisa ladka taani ke pyaar ke layak hi nahi.
Vishesh : koi bhi step lene se pehle consequences ke baare mein soch lena. Aur rahi baat taani ki toh uske jaisi character less ladki koi nahi hai. Pehle rey se pyaar kiya phir mujse shadi ki don't worry bahut jald ise new bf bhi mil jayega.
Swayam : how dare you teri aukaat yaad dilake rahunga mein tuje ukhad le jo ukhad sakta hai. And he cuts the phone.
After all this taani was totally shattered.
She ran out from the place to upstairs in her Reyam followed her to stop her but couldn't.
She ran upstairs crying and reached the room and closed the door.
Reyam are outside and taani is inside the room.
Swayam : taani plz darwaza kholo.
Rey : taani yaar plz listen.
Taani(shouted from inside) : leave me alone.
Vishal : guys let her cry out. Warna woh ghut ghut kar Mar jayegi yaar. Uske saath jo hua hai bahut bada hai woh.
Swayam : par woh khud ko.
Rey : woh sahi bol raha hai Swayam. Let her be alone kal subah usse baat karte hai.
Swayam : ok f9.
All went downstairs and we're sitting in the hall

With taani.
She was shattered. She just sat on her knees in shock.
Taani : kaise vishesh kaise gir sakte ho aap itna. I thought marring you was best kyuki mein aapko Bachpan se janti hu par nahi I don't. . I hate you i hate my self. She stood up and looked herself in mirror. She took their engagement ring and threw on the mirror then the mangalsutra she snatched it from her neck. . She tried to remove sindhoor but it wasn't removed perfectly. She was feeling disgust. .. She took the vass placed near her bed and threw it on her image in mirror.
Then she messed the whole room. She broke everything not a single piece was left to be broken. ...
She cried alot.

With gang
Sounds were coming from taanis room. Swayam and rey wanted to go but the gang stopped them.

Soon sounds stopped coming. All fall asleep except rey. .

Taani too fall asleep while crying.

It was 6 am rey thought to go and talk to taani.
He went to taanis room.
Rey : taani pls open the door.
Rey said thrice then taani heard it the third time and then opened the door.

She went back after opening it.

Rey looked at the condition of the room. He has never seen taani in this condition. However she was angry but she never did all this ever before.

Rey then moves forward and hold taani through shoulder and rotate her towards himself. He saw taani and was shocked.
Taani was totally red of crying. Her eyes had so much pain and her face said she had lots of feeling inside. ..to say. ..

Rey : taani ye kya haal bana liya hai tumne apna.
Taani was quite.
Rey : plz look at me. Plz galat woh ghatiya insaan hai usne tumhare saath galat kiya hai tum khud ko kyu sazaa de rahi ho.
Plz apne liye na sahi mere liye hum sabke liye khud ko aur takleef mat do aur chot mat pahuchao plz. ..
Taani still didn't looked in his eyes.
Rey holded her wrist to make her speak something.
Rey : tumhara haat itna garam kyu hai.
He touched her forehead .
Taani tumhe to fever hai.
Before he could say anything she fainted in his arms. ..
Rey shouted.
Rey : taani.
By this voice of his all woke up in hall. Swayam rushed towards her room.

Rey tried to wake up taani but she didn't responded. He holded her in his arms in bridal style.
Rey : swayam guys gadi nikalo taani behosh ho gayi Hai. ...
Soon all settled and took taani in car.
In the car vishal was driving. .
Rey was sitting with taani at back seat and swayam in front. ..
Swayam : rey kya hua isse.
Rey : pata nahi isse bahut tezz bukhar hai. Mein usse baat kar raha tha ki utni der mein year faint ho gayi. ...

Rey was rubbing taanis hands to provide her some heat. .
Swayam looked at her foot which was bleeding with blood. ...
They tried to wake her up but she didn't responded.

They reached the hospital. Doctor immediately admitted taani. ..

Reyam and vishal were standing outside.
Swayam : isliye mein kal se isse baat karna chahta tha i knew ki woh khud ko nuksaan pahuchaegi. ..
Vishal : ek baar taani theek ho jaye uske baad mein us vishesh ko Zinda gaad dunga. ...
Doctor came out. .
Rey : doctor taani kaisi hai.
Doctor: she is critical kafi khoon behind chuka hai pair se sure patient bahut weak bhi hai. .. hum abhi unhe glucose ki bottle chadha rahe hai.
Aap log plz baaki formalities ko pura kar dijye. ..

Precap :
Taani decides to make vishesh pay for his deeds. And then all gang in Mumbai.

NOTE
Sorry for late update
guys i know ki now all are waiting for taarey reunion lekin uske pehle kriyansh ko bhi toh end karna padega na... In show kria ne rey ko uske faiydee ke liye choda hai. But I have a twist in this story. ...

I know ki iss part ko padhne ke baad you will feel ki vishesh ko bina matlab drag kar rahi hu but trust me this will prove the best taani will give him the best answer for his deeds.

Plz tell me ki kaisa laga in more than one word comment.. mein khud is part ko lekar 100% sure nahi hu. ...
I hope it was upto your expectations. ..
Thanks a lot for your support. .. In the story...plz. do leave your views. ..
Thank you
enjoy.

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