A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 64

Loved the update

"maine bola tha na tumhe ... Mai aisi hi hoon... kabhi bhi garbar kar deti hoon... tum handle nahi kar paoge..." She sobbed and hiccupped and then continued... "mai kuch galat bol dungi... Kharab behave karungi... aaj wohi hua... and see tum chale gaye..." awww she is soo cute..i like this Sharon..

Nd Sharon ka password- "Winnie the pooh..." hehehe

Nd der date

I liked this - both of us will work hard... we will work on our relationship... we will both pay bills... and spoil each other..."

Beach scene..It was sooo soothing..loved it..

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

I still hate you -_-

You made me wait so much

Now for update :3

I Love long updates ^_^

Sharon again thought shw messed it up all :( but all it needed were his soothing works to calm her down

How they handle each other :') just love it!

I love this Sharon :'( she is kiddo only in front of him and not to forget also want to look special only for him :p

Possessive too my god _/\_ Browser history :v like seriously she act so cute around him :v and he can't help but adore ^_^

Ooopsie :p date or dinner ?

Well that was good too she paid cash and they shared the bill :') I liked that

Sharing handling each other and spoiling too :')

That jerk came again -_- Again love this Sharon :( she both handled the situation calmly and that by herself make him love her all the more *-*

Thd best part was how she was struck on one thing :v knock karne kyun bola :3 _/\_

Update soon next time :|

Thanks ^_^

Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity

Res.

Unreserve.

This chapter was so so so damm cute..

Sharon behaving all childish and Swayam consoling her..

Sooo cute...😳

both of us will work hard... we will work on our relationship... we will both pay bills... and spoil each other..." She hugged his arms... swayam couldn't hold back his smile with the last line...

This was the best part for me..

And yaa.. I'm really glad after where you had left it last time, that is, hanging in the mid air, this part was not that emotional.. (Which of course I'm happy about..😉)

Infact it was really adoreable...

Loved it..⭐️

Thank you for the pm and please do update soon..😊

Originally posted by: __nidhi__

Res...

Originally posted by: SHA_85

Unpredictable

bcz after reading 1st passage i thgt ab pura upd uss par hi hoga bt no der wer so many thg

RUTNA MANANA was good
"dekho...its very simple... Ekbar tumne mujhe apni
life mein jagah de diya to mai to bhai kahi nahi
jane wala... Agar tum mujhe force bhi karo na to
leave you and go tab bhi nahi jaunga... I'll stay
here.. with you always..." He kept his head on her
head." loved dis one a lot

Sharon's POV for herself was written amazing bcz v thk vl v nt chng bt sumtym v start loving dt chng

DATE was wow
" aise mat dekho... koi farak nahi parne wala unko
even if you make faces... ignore...and just relax
okay????" he blinked his eyes in assurance..." at dis point i remember bandstand couples

N obvious highlight of d chp SLAP was bested scene u hv written

do upd jaldi jaldi waiting for it

Originally posted by: aneesha93

This was such a cute update😛. Loved the kiddish Sharon, how Sharon dressed up especially for Swayam, their first date, Sharon's view on equal responsibility and understanding Swayam. And wow, Ioved how she slapped that guy and stood up for herself. Kudos to you guys for writing it so well with no exaggeration.

Thanks for the pm. Update soon.

Originally posted by: gsk4

AWESOME UPDATE GUYS!!! 👏👏👏 You went above my expectations. She was sitting under the shower!! Oh Boy.. I thought she would have tried to commit suicide or she would have tried to seduce swayam but dono galat nikali. Ha Ha Ha. I liked the way she fought with Swayam after that. I loved the way she dealt with the creep. But i am little old fashioned in certain things. When a guy takes a girl out for dinner i want him to pay for it even if i am independant. You have given an excellent update. 🥳 congrats both of you guys this was worth the wait. Ani hats off to you, how are you managing all these ffs together and not mixing it. 😃😃

Originally posted by: vrushanlove

It ws a cute update...sharon,i love her,crazy girl...she scared me ...but after their compromising scene ws beautiful...i loved her dialog about spoil eachother...nd that slap...grt...
I m feeling soo good after reading this update...thankyou...