A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144

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@Incorrect

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

hey

nice start i would say

both are doing a very good job

the ploy sounds interesting

looking forward to read further

do update soon

n all the best

😃

Edited by shiningshannu - 10 years ago

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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: shiningshannu
hey
nice start i would say
both are doing a very good job
the ploy sounds interesting
looking forward to read further
do update soon
n all the best
😃

awww...thanks a ton from both of us...

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Finally i read ur work been here after sucha long tym

Cong8 naba for ur efforts wit ani

The first chapter was really gud

The introduction in itself was very

Impactful

swayam the self established

Business tycoon n he got sharon

To compliment her

The interview portion was very well written

I got to read a very strong swayam

N the chap after tat just compliments

The prologue

Sharon on her first day

Her energy n enthusiasm

Was very well written

Rey the best frn cum bro

His intro was very welcuming

Poor swayam ne kya soch liya

Overall a very nice introduction

Naba n ani i m looking frwd to

Read ur stuff

Do update soon 🤗

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Hey nice start..great update...

Thanks fr d pm

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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: rosyrkohli
Finally i read ur work been here after sucha long tym
Cong8 naba for ur efforts wit ani
The first chapter was really gud
The introduction in itself was very
Impactful
swayam the self established
Business tycoon n he got sharon
To compliment her
The interview portion was very well written
I got to read a very strong swayam
N the chap after tat just compliments
The prologue
Sharon on her first day
Her energy n enthusiasm
Was very well written
Rey the best frn cum bro
His intro was very welcuming
Poor swayam ne kya soch liya
Overall a very nice introduction
Naba n ani i m looking frwd to
Read ur stuff
Do update soon 🤗

wow...thanks from both of us...will update soon dear...😳

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pinks2014

@pinks2014

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Nice one...looking forward to the next update with loads of swaron moments.

Edited by pinks2014 - 10 years ago

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

heya ani

a new FF from you

the title is good

sorrry am commenting late

coming to the first chapter

it was quite refreshing

aww sharey friendship!!

i love this casual sharon

waiting to read more

update soonish

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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: athi_vrushan
heya ani
a new FF from you
the title is good
sorrry am commenting late
coming to the first chapter
it was quite refreshing
aww sharey friendship!!
i love this casual sharon
waiting to read more
update soonish

will update asap...sorry for tge delay

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mayori
Amazing part... 😊
Will be waiting for the next update...keep writing more & more 😊

thanks a lot!!!

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Anindita Ghosh

@flyinghigh_ani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: --Keechu--
wow its nice...
awesome start...
loved the intro of both...
rey's entry was something not expected...

do continue soon
pm me ...

with love
keechu