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Posted: 10 years ago

#671

Hi Sandhya , a wonderful story full of mystery, emotion and waiting for the emotional ride through kushi's turmoil. Loved that you picked a topic of social relevance , fight against social evil, dirty politics etc. Hope that Anjali will be safe. Mix of south and North , excited for the journey.

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Sweety012345

@Sweety012345

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Posted: 10 years ago

#672

Great start to the ff

Loved the first chapter

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siamesecat

@siamesecat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#673

great start! Expect nothing less from you!

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opsyellow

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Posted: 10 years ago

#674

Lovely Update S👏

Who was the guy? Was is it Arnav or some other guy who we will meet again soon?

We don't know if Anjali is alive or dead and if she is a life what kind of life she is having. Maybe is out there somewhere living a normal happy life (we can hope, can't we?) but losing Anjali have done lots of damage to Khushi and her life and its perfectly understandable. But just hoping that she can get some peace soon.

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thechaigirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#675

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

Panic attacks are a symptom of PTSD. But not all PTSD sufferers have panic attacks.

As to what Khushi is suffering, you'll know in due course 😉

Thanks for clarifying that sandhya...I don't know much about it, I know someone with PTSD with similar panic attacks isliye laga ...thanks I learnt something new today 😊

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J P

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Posted: 10 years ago

#676

Hey sandy ka! Glad to have you back and with such an amazing entry it's just double treat!

Honestly I thought it was lavanya and Khushi and Arnav being Highness's elder brother! The thought that it has to be Anjali never striked me! The excerpt gave me the feel of a lavanya!

Reading further was pure joy and what more could I have asked for coz it's my ooru Bengaluru and my language Tamizh! So I was hooked head first!

And then when the story progressed and the characters were revealed and the plot to an extent was given out there was no stepping back!

Simply loved it!

Though I wonder how did Anjali's family take the whole situation as? Was khushi blamed, did she have to leave the city because of that?

Or she couldn't forgive herself and so ran just like what happened here! Her father is right! And now for the closure she's heading back to where it all started from?

I can't wait to see what happens from here on! Also was that Arnav who was at the other end of the coach?

Cheers

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-Saumya-

@-Saumya-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#677

Wonderful chapter, Sandhya. 😳 I'm so glad to see you are back to writing. Unfortunately I am really pressed on time at the moment but let's hope I am able to leave better comments the next time around.

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Anupama Jinethri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#678

Loved it

So anjali is missing sunce that day huh? I hope she is alive.

Khushi holds herself responsible for whatever happened that. she gets panic attacks too

garima and shashi are successful entreprenuers now. And khushi a journalist. And right now she is travelling to where it all started.

Who was that admirer? Arnav?

Will be waiting for the next update

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luvbug

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Posted: 10 years ago

#679

wow very interesting update...khushi is badly affected by Anjali's disappearance..her panic attacks explain how much... Did they never find Anjali??? what happened... how did khushi make it back?? what happened after???

Loved the Rao family...but shashi knows what's troubling his daughter... he feels he has failed as a parent... oh i feel so bad for them... loved all the description about their home... and felt so warm... Garima did good too ... but it seems it just khushi that is stuck..do they knw abt her panic attacks?

Oh who is that mystery man?? Arnav?? Akash??

beautifully written chap...

eagerly waiting for read further!!

Edited by luvbug - 10 years ago