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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Param_love

Hiii..Purnima di

lovely,lovely, lovely update😳
Lovely, nicely n beautifully written👏👏
Love it to the core❤️
Very well you've describe the scenario
Omg SanDhir conv was awesome😃
Moi just love their chemistry😳
What's cooking in Sanyu's mind???😉
Update ASAP
Thx 4 pm🤗


I WILL SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

TOO GOOD TO SHARE

PART 2 :

sanyu forcefully took rd to her room nd locked the door..

R:what iz wrong with u

S: m very nervous

R: yaa so y m i here i dont even get lyk i dont know u ur bf iz coming to ur house nd just btw how did u get my no.

S:i took it from ur brother...see dont over react its ok see u r my frnd otherwise u wudnt have come at such a short notice think about it nd i wudnt have called u...rd thought for a moment she was right ..

the bell rang..

S:acha u wait here ill sort out stuff nd cum nd ill call u if needed..

he sat in her room nd was thinking..

R im yeh ladki toh pagal hai nd yeh koi meri frnd nahi hai i toh just came bcause...wait a min y did i cum..god he was roaming around in her room..

he saw her diary nd saw sum pics of her wid her frnds nd den with parth...re yaar kya hai kya karun yahan...he was seeing her pics nd smiling..

he opened her drawer..nd saw chocolate wrappers nd movie tickets...on the wrappers it was written wen she had it nd with whom..rd smiled at her cuteness..bacchi hai bilkul...on the other hand sanyus meeting was totally ruined her parents did not like parth nd moreover dey found him fishy...

parth left her hous nd sanyu was angry with her parents...

rd heard some voices nd opened the door slightly

S:mom how cud u aap dono ki vajah se voh hurt hokar chala gayaSD tum pagal hogayi ho sanyu jab sach samne ayega tab pata chalega sanyu was crying nd came to the room she luked at rd who was too shocked to react he didnt know whether he shud say something or console her or what

Rd was not able 2 undetstand wat 2 do..


Rd's pov

W*F rd tu yahan kar kya raha hai haan...rk pagal ladki me tujhe phone kiya aur tu idiot ki tarah uske ghar aagaya aur uske roon mein time pass kar raha hai aur voh ab apne bf ke liye roo rahi hai...

Rd put his hand on her shoulder...

R:ummm...suno sanyukta. ...listn... She luked at him ... S:tum...tum abhi bhi yahan ho gaye nahi...she wiped her tears. ..

R:tum sachme pagal ho ya mujhe psyche karna chahti ho She got up nfd said

S: m sorry meine aisehi tumhe bula liya m really sorry we hardly know each other. ...tum jao plz...

Rd gave her a wierd luk nd left. ..

Later in his office...

Vidushi had joined as his pa nd was very efficient. ...after dat day he had not spoken to sanyu or met her...he had almost forgotten her...

3 months later...

At night he got a call...

R:hello(in a sleepy tone) he heard nd switched on the light. ..ok humm..abhi aa rahe hain He nd priya reached thw the hospital...karan had met with an accident. ..

Priya was crying...

R:doctor karan shekhawat. ..

D:vo vo ab better hain nd unko under observation rakha hai...kal admit hue the..

R:how dare u doctor voh kal se aapne hume aaj inform... D:mr she shekhawat plz dont worry raat mein inke saath rahi thi nd she jas taken gud care of him aur abhi yahon thi yeh lijiye aa gayin...

Rd turned nd it was none other than sanyukta...

Rd was surprised to see her dere...

S: hi randhir... voh actually kal highway pe unka accident hua tha mujhe dikha toh i got him here pur i came to know today that he iz ur brother sorry...rd luked at her face it had lost its charm...she seemed to b tired

R:pur tum raat bhar yahan kyun ruki i mean doctors nurses sabthe..

D: mr shekhawat yeh aqsar raat ko yahan rukkar patients ko luk after karti hain..rd luked at her she gave a faded smiler: coffee???

s: suredey were having coffee..

R: so miss aggarwal yeh kaam bhi karti hain ...god u r unbelievables:kashyapr: hunh kya

S: its mrs sanyukta kashyap now

r: u got married??

he didnt know but he felt sumwhat bad about dat

S:hmm... m getting late dusre patient ke paas jane ka tym ho gaya hai...rd gave her a wierd luk...

R: what iz up with her god knows chodo mujhe kya..

karan was discharged after 2 days nd rd went back to officev: sir may i cum in

R: surev: sir voh aaj meine aur mere husband ne ek chota get together rakha hai mujhe bohot acha lage ga agar aap bhi ayenge...plz sir mana mat karna

r: ok sure..

At night at vidushi's house

v: oh sir hello plz cum in ...

baby dekho kaun aaye hainnd her husband came to greet rd...

rd's eyes widened nd he froze

RD was surprised lyk really he cud not understand wat to do ...

Rd's pov :

Wth iz happening ..sanyukta was married I mean iz married to parth but here he iz with vidushi as her husband wat iz happening??He went inside nd parth greeted him ..he was uncomfortable...he quickly finished with the dinner nd left...he got down nd called up his secretary. ..

R:pata karo sanyukta aggarwal ka no chahiye mujhe haan vahi aggarwal grup of comp. ki owner haan u hv 10 mins or ill fire u..

After 5 mins

he got her no.After say 4 rings

she picked up the phone...

S:hello(came a dull voice)

R:hello ...sanyukta ...aa... I want to meet u its rd here...

S:r..rd umm..kya hua nething urgent..

R:where r u m coming to ur house...

S:n..no no she panicked meet me in ccd...in say 15 mins

R:ok(he cut the call) ccd ?? But voh toh yahan pur hi hai 2 mins mein dat means ...god!!

RD had been waiting for 1 hr but she still didnt turn up he was angry as he hated waiting...

He was about to leave but she came in nd he felt as if he cud hardly recognise her...

she was wearing a salwar kameez nd her face was haggered nd her eyes gloomy..

She went nd sat on the chair next to hisR:umm...hi sanyukta

S:hi(she forced a smile)kyun bulaya tha nething urgent iz karan f9

R:yaa bhai theek hai...sanyukta tumhari shaadi ko kitna time hua hai?

s:teen mahine ...acha rd if nothing imp I shud leave...

She got up nd was leaving nd rd held her wrist while she flinched. ..

He left her wrist

R:plz mujhe baat karni hai

S:theek hqi but plz iske bare mein koi baat nahi plz...

He got up with a jerk nd held her hand nd took her to his car nd started driving...

S:rd wth kya kar rahe ho kahan jaa rahe hain hum...plz I said stop the car...(she shouted)

R:listn shut up nd now listn to me ab suno...dekho I dont know our equation r we frnds or just...but forget dat listn jo bhi hai dekho I hv to tell y sumthing pir pehle tum mujhe batao ki tum yeh teen mahine mein matlab kya hua hai...

She was numb nd didnt know how to react...

she hugged him nd started crying very very badly...

Rd hugged her back he didnt know wat was happening but was sure dat she needed comfort...he was trying to soothe her but she winced in pain...

Rd pulled back from the hug nd luked at her...

he held her wrist nd folded her sleeveshe saw blue marks on it...he luked into her eyes nd she was luking down...

he removed the dupatta from her neck slightly nd saw sum bruises...

He cupped her face...

R:parth ...usi ka kaam hai na yeh...


To be continue...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Parth itna cheap kaise ho sakta. Hope rd use chode nahi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
itna bada ****** h parth hw cn he do so to sanyu n rd is so gud
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
both are part just superb awesome fab lovely]
lovely lovely lovely lovely lovely
sandhir meeting was really fab
they became friends, their bonding with each other very nice
sanyu is really cute,
sarth married, very interesting
bloody parth i wanna kill him😡
he is so bad...😡. poor sanyu.😭
i hope Rd sab kuch thik karda
its really awesome amazing fab
very very nice lovely.
very well writing.
keep it up.
love it. update asap.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Yr the update was so amzng
Luved it to the core


Sanyu parents rejected parth she was so angry on them
Three month leap

What hppnd in these months
Sanyu totally changed
She's hiding sum thing

Parth married to vids n rd came to know abut it
.he was confronting sanyu

Sanyu had bruises
I m so eager to know what hppnd in these month

Update soon
Eagerly wtng

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Omg...really fantastic,lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely, lovely,
lovely, lovely, lovely update dear😳😳
Lovely, nicely n beautifully written👏👏
Love it to the core
Beautifully you've describe the scenario⭐️⭐️
SanDhir bonding is awesome😳
Sarth married...!!
Bloody Parth...disgusting n cheap argh😡😡
Randhir confronting sanyu😳
Sanyu had bruises😲
For sure Rd will not leave Parth...!!
Update ASAP
Eagerly waiting
Thx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Amazing update
continue soon🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awsm story sanyu seriously marry parth and parth is already married oh god ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40


pls Rd se kaho uss cheater fraud parth ke face pe aise 100 punch de... eagerly waiting for next part yaara...pls update soon...

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