Arshi ROM-COM FF: LOVE IN BIGG BOSS Th3, Link of Thread 4 on page 1 - Page 28

Originally posted by: anjaliforarnav

Hi! I am posting a some-what same comment as I did the last time bcuz I really really want you to take it in notice!! 😲 🥱

I'd like to suggest (if you don't mind of course 😊) that it'd be more relatable if you'd keep things more realistic in the fiction. You know the entire realisation stuff, Sarun being so friendly and obedient (to the Raizadas), all the Raizadas (Arnav & Anjali) having control on the show's happenings (things gotta be a lil' more professional and strict like the real BB) and the thing between the 2 s' (cuz I see what you're doing there 😆). You know... you need not have a "perfect" ending with everyone getting paired up and realising their faults (cuz that's not how it goes really). 😒

One more thing I'd like to mention is that I acknowledge 😛 the way you gift us 'Maha Updates' when you delay posting and how you write extending your limits a lot of times but you know the difference between a 'long update where there is a big jump in the story' and a 'long update where the story moves JUST 1 block ahead' or even worse not even a "single" block ahead...???? 😔

For example: In this update though it was divided in to two parts, what exactly happened???

1. Started with Sarun doing masti which basically took more than 1/4 of the entire update!! 😕
2. A little bit of Arshi romance.
3. ONE question from Sarun to Shyam which was not really important since nothing really happened other than the same old public display of "friendship & unity" from the super 6's side... 🤢
4. And some task is given to super 6 which lemme predict is given by Di to them for fighting with each other and not staying united in the Bigg Boss house. 🥱

Are you getting it?? Your updates are becoming highly unsatisfactory (I am sorry to mention) and very unrealistic. Even if you write a 5000 words update it's not really enjoyable and satisfying as for example: a 1000 words update where things have actually MOVED ON and not just some random things going on. Do you get what I mean to imply??

😊 😊 😊

Anyways, these were just a couple of suggestions and you have all the rights to ignore them cuz of course you have your own take on the story and you're the freakin "writer". I mean you ought not to go according to your 1 reader's likes and dislikes. AND I do not mean to "order" you or something if that's how it just appeared. I know you want to make this a light hearted ROM-COM story but please don't make it some "princess fairy tale" where everything is so "perfect" and "predictable". I mean I could LITERALLY tell super 6 was going to react that way when GB said "Oh ya that's why you all fought like cats and dogs"...

So PLEASE do think upon my suggestions for once!!!!!

And of course there are things that I appreciate such as the way you balance comedy and passion. Nothing ever lacks. The way you're keeping up with the reader's interests and not making the story a complete bore (you know taking things JUST the way the writer wants it) You're not doing that . The moral background you're maintaining and NOT to forget the hot scenes (Wooohooo 🥳🤪 👏 ☺️) !

HHAHHHAHAHA

I completely get it if you wanna take it slow or maybe you have a writer's block and all those problems that come along with writing but yeah, those were just some suggestions from an ardent reader .

Byee

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Update soon!

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