ArHi Intense SS:Kaash mai tumse...*Thread 2 pg-1*[Completed]

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#201

nice update..khushi is fully broken...and now Arnav's intene kiss is gonna confuse her more...update soon pls..😊

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mutermuter

@mutermuter

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

whoaaa great

another flawless piece by you ,u rocks.this is going to be intense,very very intense n am lloving it!!

PART1:

u really scared me ,i mean i was horrified by the display of arnav's anger,it has created a monster in him n he is so blind hurting himself everyone rather.

ur work with the characters were outstanding .

PART 2:

felt bad for khushi ,poor soul tolreating so much .

glad that akash will now try to find out the truth

and these two arnav n khushi ,they will never grow up hina ,right

but just loved ur work .

it was totally out of the box.

continuee soon n keep me posted dear.

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

it was so emotional

feeling sad for khushi

arnav has become so blind in his hatred that he can't see that khushi is suffering & is losing her essence "happiness".

hope akash finds out the truth & tells that to arnav in chapter 3 as i can't bear khushi suffering

waiting for next part

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Nisha

@nisha1984

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

such a sad ff

khushi is in so much pain and arnav is ass

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

So much of insecurity in Arnav!

Threatening Khushi, and spouting nonsense to keep her by his side!

What is the fact linking their past really not the one that is doctored!???

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rakenduvadana

@rakenduvadana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

thanks for the pm

once again a heart touching update...loved it Hina

eager for the next part

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shambhavi23

@shambhavi23

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Superb I live 😊

Why is arnav behaving weird...hope u clear garima's past

Update soon

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harman12

@harman12

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

really hating arnav as he is behaving like a jerk

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daljeet

@daljeet

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

WHAT THE 😲

What is with this Raizada? He is going mad. He doesn't mind hurting her at all and still claims to love her. Why does he need her not to leave him when he is only intending to hurt her?!

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musa khan

@musax007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: pritha072angel
Res ssswaaa
Not unressswaaa😉
Ufff commmenting is such an hectic task u see
Ek chutki comment ki kimat tum kya jaano hina di
Writer ke barso ka wait hota h ek chutki comment
writer ki khun pasine ki kamaayi hoti h ek chutki comment
Reader k dimaag ka discharger hota h ek chutki comment
And aage add urself😆
Ab chappy k baare mein kya bolun ufff bolti band karing chappy it was
Chalo ab pata chal gaya ki arnav ji ne apna dimaag khoya nhi h bas unka dimaag aajkal talli ho gaya jo kabhi kabhi hosh me aa jata h😲
See moi ne inbhestigatewa kar liya😆
Hainnn khushi park me thi n yeh kya kiya suicide karne ki jldi thi kya use phone kyu uthaaya ab uthaaya to bhugto
Ufff sab cheej mujhe hi bataana padta h🥱
N thank god arnav aaj bhi arnav hi h warna moiko to laga tha ki wo wo arnav nhi koi aur h but who
😲 😲
And here goes arnav ka khushi ko torture karo aandolan
Poor khushi phone uthaaya tha na ab jhelo waise nhi bhi uthaati to jhelna hi tha😕
Hainnn ab ye he gonna kiss her kya i think k he is sacchi pakka omg omg omg ab aage kya hoing moi excitement ke maare dance karing yaaay
But agar mere dreams pe paani phera tooo
To kya karungi
Tissue shop ko highjack karungi😆
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH
N YEAH IS LINE KO SSLY LENA
I M SERIOUS