KR SS: Blistering Flames (Chapter 10: page 51)

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: lovely7010

I'm working on it

Gud for u 😡
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Maneet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Hello folks! I know you guys are mad at me for not updating and I'm extremely sorry for that. I was just a little caught up with the college stuff. Moreover maintaining three works at once at once is not an easy task. I'm quite upset with the difference between the likes and comments on Chapter 2 and Chapter 3. Didn't you guys like the previous chapter? Please review and like guys, it means a lot to me. And one more thing, this story will have some part of SwaRon as well because that's how I've planned this story. Please enjoy the update.

Chapter 4:

It was around eight thirty in the night when Rey, Swayam and Vicky were returning to Rey's house after finishing their practices in boxing, basket ball and hockey respectively. They were traveling in Rey's car since the other two didn't bring their vehicles. They usually take the short route which is an isolated one. Hardly people pass through there. Vicky was driving the car with Rey seated on the passenger side and Swayam at the back. As Swayam was bobbing his head listening to music and sipping his drink he saw Sharon standing under a tree from afar. Initially he thought he was dreaming but as they proceeded her image became clear.

"Vicky stop the car instantly." Swayam hurriedly ordered Vicky who slammed the brakes abruptly on hearing Swayam's voice.

"What's wrong dude?" Rey asked.

"Ummm, I can see Sharon standing under that tree." He pointed in the direction where Sharon was standing.

"So? What do you expect us to do? Give her a lift?" Rey asked.

Swayam gave a sheepish smile which answered their question. "Dude this is so not us. We don't help the damsels in distress." Vicky replied annoyingly.

"I know but...I...I...I'll treat you guys in the new club tomorrow if you agree to give her a lift." Swayam replied in a haste, ready to leap out of the door to approach her.

"Fine, but make sure no mushy business happens in our presence." Rey replied with a chuckle. "And dude, don't act like a helpless lover in front of her. Be the same bad guy." Vicky mocked at him. Swayam glared at them before leaving.

On seeing Swayam approach her, Sharon's palms started sweating. She took a deep breath and calmed down herself. "Relax Sharon, you're doing this for Kriya." She reminded herself as he reached closer to her.

"Umm, hey." Swayam mentally slapped himself for starting such a weak greeting.

"Hi." She replied nonchalantly.

"So, what is such a beautiful girl like you doing on a stranded road?" Swayam asked in a flirty tone, acting the way he usually is. Sharon's temper raised but she con trolled it. Instead of apologizing to her about that morning he was flirting with her. The nerve of this guy! She thought.

"I'm not obliged to answer you." She replied in a flat tone, going past him pretending to look for a cab.

"I presume you're looking for a cab. But you won't find a single cab at this hour of the day."

"Thank you for the information but I don't need it." He stepped a little closer to her making her step backwards creating some distance between them.

"I know you're in need of a transportation and I can gladly help you with that," he whispered stepping towards her. Her nervousness returned making her fumble with her words.

"Umm...uh..." She couldn't think of a reply.

"Don't be scared, I don't bite." He chuckled on seeing her reaction towards his proximity. "If you allow me then I'd be glad to drop you home." After thinking for a moment Sharon replied a yes. Swayam caught hold of Sharon's hand as they were about to proceed towards the car.

"I'm sorry for what happened this morning." He apologized sincerely. She looked into his eyes with a puzzled expression. She couldn't believe that he was apologizing sincerely. They stared into each others eyes only to be disturbed by the honking of the car.

"Are your friends with you?"

"Yep."

"Oh god help me." She muttered under her breath and proceeded towards the car. Once they got seated in the back seat Swayam questioned her, "by the way what were you doing there at this time?"

"Uhh, I had some work." She replied or rather say she lied. For the rest of the drive Sharon minimized her answers to single words or replied when she was questioned about her address. Once they reached her house, Sharon was surprised to find Kriya standing near the gate beside her scooty.

"Kriya what are you doing here?" Sharon questioned as she got off the car. Rey became attentive on hearing Kriya's name.

"I thought something happened to you so I came here to check." Kriya whispered.

"Something will definitely happen once we get inside." Sharon replied in a menacing tone.

"Umm..hehe...sorry...I can see our plan back fired." Kriya tried to reduce Sharon's temper.

"Do you even know how embarrassed I felt sharing the same space with those guys?" Sharon whisper scolded Kria.

"I understand it was a bad plan...sowieee..." Kriya made a cute face.

"Ahem ahem" Swayam cleared his throat gaining the ladies' attention. "Umm, you guys have forgotten that even we're present here." He continued.

"Oh, sorry...and thanks for the ride." Sharon apologized and thanked them.

"You're welcome beautiful." Swayam winked at her and retreated to the car. Rey's concentration was entirely on Kriya. He was busy observing her that he didn't hear Vicky calling.

"Oye, Romeo number 2, if you have finished checking out your Juliet then can we please leave?" Vicky asked smacking Rey's head.

"What? And I'm neither I'm a romeo nor she's a Juliet." He snapped at Vicky.

"Oh really then what you guys are?" Swayam popped in the conversation.

"You can call me a...umm...yep...a predator and she's my prey." He replied staring intensely at Kriya.

"Okay mister predator, if you permit me then I'll start accelerating the car so that we can go and crash your place."

"Sure"

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"This is the last time I'm getting involved in your stupid plans. Don't you dare you try to make another plan again. Meine tujhe already warn kiya hai to stay away from them. And you have no choice but to comply with it. Do you understand?" Sharon lectured her and like an obedient student Kriya listened to her.

"Yes ma'am I've understood everything. Can we go to sleep please?"

"Hmmm okay."

Kriya had already changed into her night clothes and was waiting for Sharon. Her thoughts drifted back to the conversation that they had in the evening.

"Kriya I am not going get involved in any of your plans." Sharon said sternly.

"Pweesh Shar, do it for me. i want to get back at that bloody Rey for troubling us in the morning. Don't you want to take revenge from Swayam who pushed you in the water?" She asked in a child like tone. Few more minutes of persuasion made Sharon agree.

"What do I have to do?" She asked in a defeated tone.

"I've got to know from a guy that every Friday they stay in the college till eight and practice for their respective sports. And usually crash at Rey's place. All the three especially Swayam likes to take the short abandoned route while returning home. All you have to do is pretend that you're in need of a lift when you see Swayam's car approaching. And.."

Sharon cut her in between. "How will I know that which one is Swayam's car and why will he gift me a lift."

"His car number is 5225 and the way he was looking at you in the morning I can say that you've garnered his attention. And so he will definitely give you a ride back home. You need to act angrily plus sweetly with him. Try to get him apologize to you and gain some information about Rey and his friendship. There might be something useful for us in that information."

"I'm telling you it's a bad idea."

"Like the say don't judge a book by its cover, in the same way don't judge my plan without implementing it.

"You're impossible Kriya."

"I know. So are you doing this?"

"Do I have a choice?"

"I guess you don't"

"Fine, I'll do it."

"Yayy...you're the best Shar."

"I know and you owe me a treat tomorrow."

"Sure babes. We'll go to the club that opened recently."

"Okay, I'm cool with it."

When Sharon came out of the washroom she shifted aside to make some place for Sharon and grinned widely at her.

"By the way I forgot to ask, did he apologize to you?" Kriya questioned Sharon who was arranging her clothes for the morning.

"Yep, he did."

"I knew it. See, he's interested in you."

"Shut up and get to sleep." Sharon ordered her.

"Yes ma'am."

"Try not to crush my bones." Saying this Sharon slid under the duvet and in an instant Kriya draped her right arm and leg around her, hugging her like a teddy bear. So childish yet so Kriya! Sharon smiled at her thought and drifted to sleep.

I hope you guys liked it. Please hit the like tab and leave your reviews. Criticisms and suggestions are also welcomed.

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

res
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Unresss Yipeee i m first I m
first m first
🥳 🥳

So happy today
🥳 😆 ❤️

ok Coming to the update Mannu Its meaning full one Needed part

👏
Bt Short 😔
why so ???

Anyway Kria nd rey toh ek
dushre ke peeche pad gaye 😆

pata nhi aagey kya hoga 😛

Mannu i want read agression

jealousy to pls give that ok

Nd Awesome chappy thank u

for updating Continue soon Pls

isbaar thoda
jaldi update karna
_/\_ 😉 ❤️

Edited by Sanchita_ArSha - 10 years ago

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alisha

@alisha_arsha

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

res

unres

awesome update

bechari sharon rey or kriya ki ladai ke bech me phas gyi hai

rey... romeo no. 2 😆

loved krisha bond

kriya sharon ko treat degi new club mein n swayam rey n vicky ko

rey n kriya phirse face to face

phir toh dhmaka hoga

waiting for next part

update soon

thanks for the pm

Edited by alisha_arsha - 10 years ago

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don girls

@don girls

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Cute update
Kriya plan was so odd
Update soon

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trisha

@lunia

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

lovely update...
short but cute...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
do continue soon

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Meghna

@meghzzzz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

res
unres...
Superb update maanu... 👏
swayam going full latto over shar... 😆
atleast one thing happened as per the plan i.e. Swayam's apology...
Rey also getting attracted towards kria...
But trying to hide it... Vry bad rey... cum on confess it rey...
Okay now one complaint there were no kr... 😡
n yes I want the nxt update to be smoky hot... As both of them are going to meet in a club... 😉

Edited by --megs_arsha-- - 10 years ago