Arshi FF/ Saffron Fields #11//Ch. 32 Pg. 115/ Thread 12 link Pg. 1

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Anu567

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Jenny, as usual so beautifully etched. The plot builds slowly and you do the seamless past and present thing so well. Disturbing disquietude is what I feel as you move into unveiling the Arnav and Lavanya equation. Yes, purely one sided as far as he is concerned, but can just imagine the ramifications and the possibilities on the overall relationship. Waiting to see how you take this forward. Love it!

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rvas

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

I don't know if I feel as bad for lavanya anymore but I do understand her at some level it's difficult to love and need someone and not have that sentiment returned with the same intensity..I was a little miffed with arnav for being harsh and then kind sometimes I feel that kindness does get misinterpreted and he should know that by now...loved the update

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Nice update Jenny, despite of everything my heart goes out to lavanya...poor girl, she is still in an illusion that they will be together someday, but little did she know that arnav had moved on in his life...And I think after their much awaited talk, I really hope she'll realized and accept the fact and move on in her life... Aww, Anta's part was cute...finally, their love story progressing. I'm glad that Aman changed her name in his contact list... And Arnav's text which he sent to Khushi reminded me Mr. Foster in ALS...It was a well balanced chapter...Thanks

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S.B.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Loved the update ..
Great part <3

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Parvathi Devi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

That was beautiful...

Looks like Lavanya really loves Arnav, the way she feels when ever Arnav near her and the way she felt hurt by his cold voice..

I dont know what went wrong between them may the base of their relationship is a lie so thats the reason for their seperation... but i really feel sad for Lavanya.

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Barunz4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Nice update

So Arnav at some point of time did desire lavanya... Though there was no love anywhere but more off compromise n fulfilling needs of the moment I assume...

Was just wondering if khushi would not have come into his life , would he give a second chance to lavanya by seeing her changed demeanour ..

Thnks for pm

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

The like button is not working for me!...anyways fab update as usual... The plot is really thickening and kind of getting me on the edge of my seat...

The way lavanya was trying to get him to 'Muse' where obviously they had shared some special moments...she was trying her best...but of course Arnav didn't respond... Really liked the msg he sent khushi... Can understand khushis tension too!!

Liked to know about their past too!!!...liked that particular line..abt all anger, jealousy... Arising out of misery and unhappiness... That line really was really profound... Ur writing really has lots of depth to it...

Did miss Arshi moments.!!!!... But am sure u will make up for it!!!

Thanks for the pm!!!!

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rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#148

So thats what Muse stood for...

His expression of desire...

No wonder Lavanya wanted to meet him there...

Khushi has her plateful with Arnav meeting Lavanya and her mother giving her the silent treatment...

Feel sorry for Khushi...

Where is the unconditional love that needs to be given to the child...

Moreover, showing that she is happy with Anita but not Khushi is not a nice way.

One cannot differentiate like that... It is like pitting one child against the other...

Luckily, Khushi is a mature person who is not bent on going jugular at Anita...

She understands...

It looks like the daughter is much more understanding than the mother...

These little bits have a tendency to trigger at odd times when under stress even if the parent-child relation mends...

Sujatha must realise that... Nobody is perfect... Nobody is correct... At the end Affection is always greater than Perfection... Life goes on... Whether you choose to move, take chance or stay locked up in your beliefs... Just because Khushi did not choose to do what her mother wanted, it does not mean, her future can't be better than what was envisaged...

At last Arnav has realized that what was uttered by one person could be construed in a different way by the other and Lavanya has been nourishing hopes of reconciliation and his words uttered out of politeness was seen in the light of being acquiesce...

His strength seems to be his love for Khushi and that has helped him to get a grip on his anger...

Lovely update Jenny...

Now waiting for the story of the past to unfold...

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

There is something about Lavanya that is scary. Her resolute behavior when it comes to Arnav would have been accepted in congruence with the love she harbored for him since a long time. But then her dishonesty with respect to Aarav's paternity puts a big question mark upon her. I'm sure some explanation about the past will help in a clearer understanding.

I'm glad the Aman-Anita story is progressing, if only gradually.