ArShi TS: It Was You All Along (Last Part - Pg 54) *COMPLETED* - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago
First part was great👏
The last part where they shared everything with each other and now are true husband wife was awesome😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally
He confesses too
And he made a move too
Though he waited to be comfortable with her
It wasn't easy for him but for her he did
Awww so cute
He is cutest hubby ever
And daddy too
Hmmm should have known its due to this he didn't want the bay
Didn't wanna lose khushi did he
Thinking he wouldn't be able to live without her
And he wouldn't
But same wasn't case with khushi as it was with la
She is meant to be with him
And she did
It was just meant to be for them
What an ending just what they needed
Arhi and their cuties man
Loved how they were so worried for one another
And how arnav concentration level dropped with her being there
Loved the dress he gave her
Wow she looked smoking hot
That was their first intimate contact
And the kiss uff
But the real thing was when he made their first time special
So sweet of him
Muski is so cute
She loves her mommy don't she
And how he fed them in the party haiyye
He was worried of past repeating itself
Which is why he kept saying no for a baby
But he needn't have worried
Though how can he not
Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome Arooma! This is the BEST TS ever! Thank u 4 giving us such a nyc story. U r the best! And am a big fan of ur stories! Love! Hugs!
Edited by jpjinadari21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved the way the progressed with slow steps taking care of other's comfort
confession was beautiful
consummation on right time with comfort n khushi got the love of her life in whole
his insecurities were justified but khushi was the strength n his weakness as well
they got beautiful family .
I have a request to make
in both of your stories Arnav was second hand(lol kill me using this for him) but yes he was father please write something where his status unattached or no past relationships don't have issue with both stories those are superb just want only khushi's Arnav no baggage of old relationship
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome ending
to an awesome story
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved this story. Very well written. I liked that you added Arnav's fear of Khushi getting pregnant. Will forever hate Lavanya for taking Khushi's place, but then where would the story be.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww... Its a long and awesome update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful...awesome
Khushi and arnav have a perfect family with two loving kids
Wonderful story. Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was a very beautiful last update... especially Arnav was bound to get insecure about Khushi getting pregnant and risk losing her... Khushi was so right for him...
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was the long update ever.
love it.

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