|SwaRon Three Shots| My World, Your World |Completed|

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

nice update their equation is changing good n d last part was too good update soon

Quote

Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Silent Admirer of this Three Shots😳

I am loving this.. their equation is changing.. hope it will change in a better way!😃

So.. Tina is Swayum's co singer and his friend.. But she loves him.. and he doesn't.. but for me he wasn't rude.. I mean you do have the right to speak your will. and if doesn't loves Tina then it isn't his fault.. but that's my point of view😛

sharon held his hand...I'm sure she'll hold his hand forever and ever!😳

A very beautiful piece of writing.. plzz update soon.. this friday saturday.. wooho!

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Its so great to read works like this once in a while. . .I rely liked both the parts. . .Its has an easiness and it takes you to the world of characters. . .The way you hsve put forward the dhole story is its biggest strength. . .i feel bad for Swayam in the end. . .It must have hurt badly!Update soon. . .
It was a mesmerising read...Keep it Up :)

Quote

Mansi

@Mansi_PMs

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Nice part👏

loved it❤️

bt i feel bad fr him😭

the pain u described it was superb👏

u r seriously a polished writer😃

n in d end she holds his hand😃

hope its fr lifetime😃

update soon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

love

Mansi😊

Quote

--Ecstasy--

@--Ecstasy--

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Nicely penned down!! and in the end she held his hand,,, ^_^

Luvd it !!! 😊

Quote

Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

really nice update...

I loved their silent drive...
I think sharon is a little confused...
hope everything is gonna fine soon..
thanks 4 d pm

Quote

Diya

@diyaswaronholic

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Woahhh didu I just loved it!

Sooo amazingly penned down!

How can u do it, u write sooo well!

I really need classes from u, chalo Batao kab shuru kare

The starting was fab,

And Swayam's convo with girl was convincing

Both their feelings soo deep for eachother.

And the last part, Haye that was my favourite

Sharon's p.o.v. Story too good

Di am just too speechless to say anything

It's the effect of u, whenever u write something like this, am too speechless to describe it

But all I can say is ur d best writer in the world!

Thoroughly loved it! Really loved it!

Love u moreee

Ab jaldi updateee

Me waiting, *puupy face*

Aur ab after u read it , I want my reply fasttt

Hehe

Loved loved loved it loads!

-love

Your chutki

Quote

Mary/ Penname: Zoe

@KrazyRedMary

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan
nice update... 😊

Thanks for liking it. Will update soon.

Quote

Mary/ Penname: Zoe

@KrazyRedMary

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: HR-DMG4life
Nice update :)

Thanks for liking it. Will update soon.

Quote

Mary/ Penname: Zoe

@KrazyRedMary

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: SaNa_sTaR
Super update! 😃
Swayam's fans were in the sangeet 😆
Their equation kept changing...hope it changes again in a good way 😊
Continue asap!! 😛

Thanks for liking it. Will update soon.