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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Very nice and sweet ending
Looking forward for the new story

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#152

So they both finally realized that they complete each other.

The confession and proposal was adorable.

Oh this is the end? Too soon i'd say but can't wait for your next story so bring it on and thank you for this wonderful journey.

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#153

This came as a surprise...

Beautiful ending to hatke story...

Loved your take on IPK...

P.S:new story looks interesting...

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

the fuzzy socks seemed to have had babies. 😆

Poor Khushi her plan and theory backfired.

And Arnav, that was atypical 'Do Deewane' style confession and proposal...

"Could I wash dishes for you?"

This was one of the best story of yours with great humor, romance, khuda ve's, trashy music, fuzzy socks and 'geet ka phone aya'

Loved this story. It was unexpected but the rightful ending to it.

P.S. Waiting for the new story to begin.

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

you outdid yourself with this one.

fuzzy socks and all

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Never got bored while reading this story...loved it

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Thank you Choti for giving us this fun filled story all with fuzzy socks and

Khuda Vey's ... a journey with Arnav and Khushi has to be a good read

specially with your touch to it ... Your Arnav and Khushi were adorable and

made for each other ...

Waiting for you to start your new story ...

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Shalini

@tvmania

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

The journey through out this fiction was tremendous I am fortunate enough to come across your fiction and read it. I have never read a fiction with such story line,never expected to end in 11 chapters but it was right to end it.
The next fiction looks completely different and i dont know y but reminds me of veer zaara

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#159

oh no they both have feelings for each other but is denying it

crap she left and he didn't stop her

oh so funny him climbing into her room

no,no it's over?

will miss this hilarious Arnav and Khushi so much

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#160

You did warn the end was coming but this was such a treat to read that I did not believe you. So when I saw complete in the title,I felt like crying because I just did not want it to end. Will definitely read it again. I love the morning after scene funny but oh so romantic, especially the bathroom part. I am glad Geet was there because they needed someone to butt in and make them realize that this was no game. Boy, he sure made good use of the Time they were apart by creating such a romantic proposal. " can I do the dishes for you". Is now up there with Bridget Jones "I like you just the way you are" for me. He must have had a great relationship with his Buaji to talk about foreplay with her.

I agree this Arnav is a keeper! Thanks for a great story. Anxiously awaiting the next one!