ARSHI FF: Strings of Illusion (T8)CH47 - ON HOLD - NOTE: PG 35***

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Good to see this story moving forward. Looking forward to the next update 😊

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amaypranay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Fabulous writing!👏

Looking forward to the next one..and to What's Cooking!😊

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.ButterCup.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Awesome update...poor payal...her plight is undetectable... Now Akash give her some time to think about what she wanted and I think Payal should give him a second chance to explain himself and apologize for his lies...Akash last line just cracked me up... Overall it was a nice update...loved it

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madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

nice update

the way khushi spoken to payal then garima also helped payal...

wow!! they took her with them

seems like garima's sis is behind garima is she also behind all the things happening to her

love the way Arnav told Akash

looking forward

pl update it soon

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pravallika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Firstly loved the way kushi nd later garima tried to comfort payal.. and even though payal didn't accept kushi
immediately but she felt comfortable with garima... 👏 I think it will not be very difficult for Payal to accept garima
as her mother in future. .
As kushi said what akash did is rotten.. so its a long way for akash to mend things.. nd payal will not forget nd forgive
that easily...
I'm confused with tripti. Is she positive or a negative character???? 😕
Arnav asking akash to sleep in his room but asking him to take the couch is hilarious 😆
I think only arshi will bring payash together..
Waiting for the next smoking update..

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redpetals123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Nice update dear, i hope payal gives a chance to aakash.

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Amina Mahmood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

It was a nice update...
Missing Arshi in it...
But i think it was also a must part in the story...
We cannot leave Payal and Akash just like that Right?
The update was brief but complete...
Eagerly waiting for the next "steaming" part of Arshi...