[COMPLETED]ArShi SS: Humsafar/ Last Part PG 127 (22/08)

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-Zesty-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shruti46
I M NOT GOING TO READ IT ..

Shivi this o.s?!!!!that too on sanaya 's bday...
bad bad bad...

😆 Dont read it ... you will not like it

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@EchTee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Got tears in my eyes while reading this os.

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shruti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shona_arhilover

😆 Dont read it ... you will not like it

You bet
M th title dkh k hi samajh gyi thi kuch gadbad.thats why i scroll down for any note..there waa ur note that confirmed my suspicion..

Yh umeed nai thi..
sad hi likhna tha th atleast aisa th likhte jisme rekindle hone k chances ho skte nd i cud have demand its sequel..

But you th ..

Nevermind ...u cn write sequel...In AFter Life may be...

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Sindhu Ramakrishnan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

when there is no way u can take anymore pain especially from a loved one, u cant do anything other than going away. here kushi did it literally , going far from everyone's reach to never return. though its a punishment for arnav from now, still a young girl's beautiful happily ever after dreams were shattered. u have beautifully portrayed the scene. if possible, do write a sequel or anything related.

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Parvathi Devi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

That was beautifully written OS...

But i cant stop my tears... this is so heart touching OS...

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javeria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

wow this is awesome

Khushi pain and agony was very well written.

the song you add in one shot is too beautiful, i love it too.

wonderful piece of your amazing writing 👏

Edited by Javeria3991 - 10 years ago

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Swaran13

@Swaran13

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Very emotional 😭

Written well

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

wow... beautiful OS... so emotional 😭

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Hetal

@Divyahet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: shona_arhilover

you still want to read??😲
Warning diya tha ... baad me mat bolna bataya nahi 😳

Read the OS and cried 😭
what I want to ask is one more OS with happy ending please.
It's fairytale right so why a sad ending ???
if possible please do it for me ...😳

edited my comment.😊

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Hetal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shruti46
I M NOT GOING TO READ IT ..

Shivi this o.s?!!!!that too on sanaya 's bday...
bad bad bad...

Yes it's very Bad...
for Sanaya's sake please give us a happy ending.😡😊