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Posted: 11 years ago

RED PART ONE.
I opened his diary and saw,

LETTERS TO MY LOVE, MY FARZI.

Dear farzi,
How are you? Hope you are doing good.
3 long years, I haven't seen you for 3 long years. How can you do this to me?
I'm all alone in this crowd now. Because the key for my happiness, you--- left me.
Do you think about me, for at least once?
Do you know the importance of this day farzi?
3 years back, the very same day, one girl came to my life. An angel!!!! Who filled my life with happiness, hope and LOVE, my farzi.
Do you remember our 1st encounter??? How could I forget that?
You're sitting on the chair which is reserved for me, the Randhir Singh Shekawat. I was damn sure that you're new to school.
Who else has the guts to do so??
When I said you to get up from my place, you turned your head to look people around you. As if I was not talking to you. Actually muche hasse aa gaya tha, thumari harkathem dekhkar!!! But somehow I controlled my laughter and came back to my angry mode. And when Sahil and Karan pulled you out of my seat, you're scared hell.
You know farzi, I should thank you for sitting on my chair. Bcz of that, I got a friend. Jiggy, a oure soul.
Instead I taunt you by saying that---close your mouth otherwise mosquito will enter. You rushed from the class after that.
After sometime, you entered class along with Vd sir. He said your name---Sanyukta---the beautiful wife of Prithviraj III.
And you took seat which is near mine. I checked you, and saw you were watching me thorough your corner of eyes. And after sometime, you began concentrating on the class. You're not paying attention to me. How could you Sanyu, concentrate on that stupid PKC's class instead of me???
And in the physics lag I saw you talking with Arpita. Oh, sorry, Parth's Arpu. You know one thing? Parth already fall for her even before your entry.
I saw you talking on the way to our class also. What're you talking? About me? I don't know. I wish so!!!!
And the new admission Kauthu came to be your child hood friend. As days passed you 3 become good friends!!!
Lab se yaad aya, our 1st physics practical expt. You know, I already saw your chit showing no 4. And I did those drama just for fun. I mean the blast thing. But believe me farzi, I didn't meant to hurt you. I really don't know that my fun will cause a serious problem. I'm really sorry for that.
When I came to know that Vd sir took you to principal's cabin, I roamed inside our class room. That was all my fault. I shouldn't do that. I wish I could go back to that time and undo things that I have done.

I prayed to Gods to help you. After sometime, you came back to class and he scolded you, asked you to bring your dad next day.

I was shocked. All those happened bcz of me.
I ran to Grandpa's cabin. Yes farzi. Principal Rao is my sweet grandpa. Except Parth, Vids and Vd sir, nobody else know that.
I explained everything to grandpa. He looked me with his angry eyes. And I made a puppy face since I know that he will melt by seeing that. He agreed me that he won't take any actions against you.

That day I saved you farzi. But what you have done to me??? You left me in this darkness.
Is this fair farzi??? Tell me??
Please come back farzi. I'm waiting. Please come fast.
With love
Your's Mr.Sadu

How is this??? Please tell me???
If you don't like it, plz let me know...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
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Unresss...
Yey...i m first... 😃
Btw the update was jst amazinggg...
Loved it to the core...
It was as amazing as always
Beautifully penned...
Bt it was a chhotu update swati...
Koi naa...ab nxt update bhi jaldi se kar dalo...
M eagrly waiting for sanyu's reaction...
So do update ASAP pls...
I really love ur ff...
Nd nxt update pls badawala dena...
Long one haan pls...
Wid all love
Dhruvi
Edited by dhruvi_parsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
Love the first of the update
Rd point of view was amazing
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Resss
Unresss
Damn cute I havent words actually for this update
U wrote the letter so cutely I mean I could feel rds innocence in it I mean through his cute antics
Awww rd cared for her from the start
Plz update as soon as possible I m dying to read further
UPDATISHHH SOOONISHHH

Edited by pritha072angel - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg omg i knew tht he loves her thnx a lot fr d updt nd a big hug for u 🤗
updt asap im just cant wait anymore
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Posted: 11 years ago
the best part till now...
you nailed it girl...
superbly amazing part...
so Mr.Randhir Singh Shekhawat was already in love with Sanyu...
aww... I wanna hug you for this part...
you are truly an amazing writer...
plzz update next part asap...
I am loving this story too much
love
Ashka.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh god so awsme update

Rd letter to his far I damn cute

Puri story baata di

First day se hi rd sanyu ko lyk krta tha n dat attitude n rude behaviour was just a facade

He luves sanyu so much

Rd ne sanyu ko blast wale mess se bachaya tha

Rd missed sanyu so much in these years he craved for her

His letter was fab


Bt I m still confuse why rd proposed vids if he luved sanyu
Ye mystery kab khulegi


Update soon
Wtng

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
God it ws feeling like some love struck person has actually penned it down ..it ws so good..luvd it to d core ...nd thnx fr d pm...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
arey mein tho late ho gayi!!! oh.. i loved the update!!! agar woh isse pyar karta hai tho vidu ko propose kyun kiya? sanyu ko jealous feel karana ke liye? next part aaj nahi mil sakti kya? pls (puppy face)
Randhir ke dadji man gaye uska puppy face dekhe. aap bhi maan jao na?? pls?? (PS: seeing my face)😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww😆...such a cute letter by sadu..
Awesome👏
Update nxt part asap
THANK U so much for pm'ing me😛
And if you update next part plz pm me...😉.😳
Edited by hane - 11 years ago

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