Sandhir ff - reality worse than nightmare part 18 on pg 24 25/9/14 - Page 8

Res
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Unresed

Yay! Moi first!*happy dancing*
Loved this chapter!
Coming to the reviewing of this chapter,
I really am loving the start of dark phase of this story.
The way Randhir is now treating her, though feeling a bit guilty and hesitancy, he is trying to hurt her.
The way he wants to acquire control in their relationship with revenge, you really made a pretty good attempt at bringing out their feelings.
Now the drunk Randhir was vulnerable and unconscious, even then sanyukta took care of him, just how a wife does for her husband. This turns is amazing!
I love how you bring in flashback moments in sanyukta's reminiscences! This really is a great weapon which proves to be useful in depicting the visible change in randhir's temperament and nature for sanyukta! I really appreciate your efforts in bringing out their emotions!
I really personally loved this update.
Can't wait to see how Randhir steps forward to torture her.
Lets see what you have in your mind!
Thanks for the wonderful update!
Continue asap! (I am laalchi and I know it!)
Keep writing, janavi,
Love and kisses,
Karishma. :* <3

Wow am second for the first time😆

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

Res
___________
Unresed

Yay! Moi first!*happy dancing*
Loved this chapter!
Coming to the reviewing of this chapter,
I really am loving the start of dark phase of this story.
The way Randhir is now treating her, though feeling a bit guilty and hesitancy, he is trying to hurt her.
The way he wants to acquire control in their relationship with revenge, you really made a pretty good attempt at bringing out their feelings.
Now the drunk Randhir was vulnerable and unconscious, even then sanyukta took care of him, just how a wife does for her husband. This turns is amazing!
I love how you bring in flashback moments in sanyukta's reminiscences! This really is a great weapon which proves to be useful in depicting the visible change in randhir's temperament and nature for sanyukta! I really appreciate your efforts in bringing out their emotions!
I really personally loved this update.
Can't wait to see how Randhir steps forward to torture her.
Lets see what you have in your mind!
Thanks for the wonderful update!
Continue asap! (I am laalchi and I know it!)
Keep writing, janavi,
Love and kisses,
Karishma. :* <3

Oh god ..!! Thanks for the lovely comment..!!

Originally posted by: Thriller123

Wow am second for the first time😆

Coming to the update it was awesome continue soon😊

Thanks.. 😛

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

<font size="3">Jan this is superb awesome lovely amazine part.</font>

<font size="3">its relly fab ff dark side ab start horaha hai its relly good.</font>

<font size="3">fb superb and cute.ap Rd sanyu ka sath kya karaga?</font>

<font size="3">lovely.updet asap.thanx for pm me.😃</font>

Thanks...

The update was superb

So finally I think dark phase start ho gya yipee 😃

Sanyu rd k office me hi kaam kregi now dis is going to be fun

Rd behving kbi romance krta h toh kbi insult krta h


Dinning table pr usne sanyu ko kese insult kia
Poor sanyu hurt

Bt i think use zyada rd hurt ho rha h sanyu ko hurt krne me he luvs sanyu so much
The fb scenes were awsme
Sandhir were so happy together bt sanyu one mistake ruined everything

Sanyh also cnt see him in dis condition

Poor sandhir


Wtng for next
Update soon


Always keep smiling dear 😊

Fb scenes were just fab dear...Sandhir kithne khush the, bus sanyu ki ek galti sab kuch badal diya... eagerly waiting for next part...pls update asap dear...

Originally posted by: newmoon18

The update was superb

So finally I think dark phase start ho gya yipee 😃

Sanyu rd k office me hi kaam kregi now dis is going to be fun

Rd behving kbi romance krta h toh kbi insult krta h


Dinning table pr usne sanyu ko kese insult kia
Poor sanyu hurt

Bt i think use zyada rd hurt ho rha h sanyu ko hurt krne me he luvs sanyu so much
The fb scenes were awsme
Sandhir were so happy together bt sanyu one mistake ruined everything

Sanyh also cnt see him in dis condition

Poor sandhir


Wtng for next
Update soon


Always keep smiling dear 😊

Thanks dear..

Originally posted by: Athi92

nice😊

Thanks..