NEW ARSHI OS - ISHQ KA IMTHIHAAN

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello All,

I am not a popular writer but still have tried something and want to post it but just giving sneek peek of the opening. If I get good response I will post the full story by night today.

This story starts when Dadi (Subhadra) tells Arnav that Garima is the lady who was responsible for Arnav's parent's death. Instead of coming back with realization Arnav goes to ASR mode and never comes to Alter.

LEAP OF 2 MONTHS

Khushi is looking at her reports and crying

Khushi (To herself) - Kyon hamesha yeh mere saath hi ho raha hai. Mein une bhoolne ki khoshish kar rahi hoon aur yeh (She keeps her hand on tummy)

Buaji - Bola than a meine tumko sankadevi ki un Raizadans se door raho...deko abhi kya ho gaya.

Khushi - Buaji hum une bohoth karthe hai...hume nahi maloom tha ki wo aisa karenge...

Buaji - Chodo...accha huva ki farishthe jaise log tume hospital mein admit karke gaye warna patha nahi kya hotha. Abhi kal hi jake baccha gira denge...tum fikar math karo

Khushi - Nahi Buaji...aap yeh kaisi baath kar rahi hai...yeh Arnav ji aur hamari pyaar ki nishani hai

Buaji - Arey oh Bhavradevi...tume maloom bhi hai ki tum kya bol rahi ho

Khushi - Han...wo mane ya na mane hum unike pathni hai...aur unhone gusse mein hi sahi hamara maang bhara hai, mangalsutr pehnaya hai aur baki sab rasme bhi hogaye hai na buaji...

Buaji - Leki Khushi tum samal paogi bacche ko akele?

Khushi - Han

Buaji -Jaisan tumari marzi...tum kaha meri sunthi ho (Buaji walks off from there. Khushi hugs the report and starts crying again)

ARNAV'S ROOM (Delhi)

Arnav is lying on the bed and thing about the lady they saved to whose face was not seen due to the mud covered. When he carried her in his arms he remembered Khushi...

Arnav - Kyon...kyon wo yaad a rahi hai...achanak...I don't want to think about her...(he gets frustrated. Again remembers the lady)... But why did I feel nice when the doctor told she was pregnant...

LEAP OF 6 MONTHS

Khushi is standing infront of house looking at the sky and remembers the flashback of the day when her wedding was called off.

Hearing that the wedding is called off Shashi gets massive heart attack. Garima suicides with the guilt. Khushi is shattered with all this happening at once to her. She shifts back to Lucknow along with buaji. She starts looking after the Sweet stall which was saved by Arnav's money that he gave when he came to call her back to teach Lavnya just for the sake of his sister. This was the only way of income

Khushi - Amma... Babuji...hum thode hi dino mein maa banne wale hai...aap log khush ho na. (Suddenly she hear a bursting sound and turns back to see the house catching fire massively she tries going in but is pulled back by the neighbors) Buaji... Hamri buaji andar hai...buaji...(She faints due to the shock)

Hope to get some responses...Love you all

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..Divya.. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start !!
Looking forward to read more !!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Badi dard bari kahaani hain...eagr to read...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Divya..

Nice start !!
Looking forward to read more !!! :)



Thanks Divya...you can read my ongoing FF on Arshi at the link below

PYAAR ISHQ AUR MOHABBAT

Hope you like it... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nimie207

Badi dard bari kahaani hain...eagr to read...



I know Nimie...dard bari tho hai...poor Khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its little different and good. waiting for the full story eagerly
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: surrazdan

this is nice start...



Thanks for motivation
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Originally posted by: Sindhuramakrish

its little different and good. waiting for the full story eagerly



Thank you... i hpe I justify your wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shit so everyone is dead in her family n plus she is preggy??🥺
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Originally posted by: sarunsashasingh

Shit so everyone is dead in her family n plus she is preggy??🥺



Yeah...just the result of ASRs uncontrollable anger...

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