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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvSanjana

hey awesome update dr..

nd bst wishs for ur exms..😊
plz post the nxt parts immediatly aftr ur exms ok..


Thank u soo much dear
Sure will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: karishmagsewani

OMG! Finally got the real hang of why this title was given to the story! Yaar I am really loving sanyukta's character alot! She is working so hard in chasing her dreams and her father agreed to support her for 2 months! That's awesome! Apprehensive, I must say yaar! I am sorry, I know I am very late, I really couldn't come on IF these two days with peace, I had family probs! But now its all fine and i am back to pakao you all writers with my annoying comments! :p
Anyways, thanks a tonne for pm'ing! Continue soon babe!
Keep writing,
Love you,
Karishma. :* <3


Oh thank u soo much dear
I hope everything is fine now
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Posted: 11 years ago

i m soo sorry guys for being this much late,i was soo busy,first with the exams then apne bhai ke liye ladki dekhne gayi😃,i m soo sorry guys.i hope u guys didn't loose interest in the story...

so here goes the part 4

Part 4

he reaches his studio "the solace" [name] and blows horn on reaching the gate,

but noone comes He blows it again and soon a watchmen come running and opens

the gate and salutes him

Rd[angry]-sunai nahi deta kya

Watchman-woh sahab mein soo gaya tha

Rd-sone ke paise milte hai kya,agli baar aisa hua na to phir mat ana

Watchman-ji sahab

He moves out of the car on reaching the main door and toses the keys to a man

Clad in a blak pant,white shirt and a black waistcoat alond with a bow tie

Thn rd moves to the back seat and takes the girl[sanyu]into his arms and

Orders the man to bring the luggage inside

He moves inside and a voice calls him

Voice-rd baba,aa gaye aap

Rd-ji kaka,where r u

Ramu kaka emerges from under the table in the sitting room he was in his late

60s and was wearing a dhoti and kurta and was shocked To see his master cum

son carrying a girl in his arms as he never liked visitors in his solace

Ramu kaka-rd baba yeh kaun hai

Rd-woh kaka mein woh galti se meri car isse lag gayi to woh mein

[he was fumbling]

Ramu kaka come near him and sniffs and his expression changes to

Angry mode

Ramu kaka-chalo,isse room mein lita do,iske mathe se khoon beh raha hai

Aur fir doctor ko bulado,chalo

Rd-kaka woh,sor...

But he was interrupted by kaka

Kaka-chalo

Rd obeys him and goes to a room adjacent to living room and places her

on the bed And turns to ramu kaka to say smt but finds him busy talking

on the phone with the doctor and soon he cuts the and turns to rd

Kaka-sahab doctor abhi thodi der mein aa jaenge[coldly] and turns to leave

Rd was shocked to hear his calling him sahab

Rd-KAKA?[shocked]

Kaka-ji

Rd-kaka pls,mujhe aise kyu bula rahe ho,pls mujhe baba hi bulao

Kaka-sirf bulane ka hi to rishta hai,mein kya kuch aur keh sakta hoon,

Rd understood that why he was angry

Rd-kaka i m sorry[hugs kaka]

Kaka-baba apse meine kitni baar kaha hai peekar gadi mat chalea,phir

App mera kehna kyu nahi mante[hugging]

Rd-i , sorry kaka,next time nahi hoga,promise

Kaka-pichli baar bhi yahi kaha tha

But before rd could say anything further,a servant came and informed

About the arrival of doc and ramu kaka went to receive him,thats when rd

Notices a small fragile figure resting on his bed,but the thing which gained his

Attention was that beautiful,angelic face and thn he notices the wound which

Had stopped bleeding by now,he moves towards the bed and forwards his hand

To touch her face but soon the door opens and ramu kaka along with the doc

Walks in

Doc-hello sir

Rd-hello dr.malhotra[shakes hands]

Dr-so,is she the patient[looking at sanyu]

Rd-yes dr,pls check,btw the bleeding had stopped but still she is not gaining

Consciousness

Dr.ok,sir wait i'll check her

And the doctior moves to her and first he dresses her wound then holds her

wrist and checks it and thn checks her eyes

Kaka-ji dr.sahab bacchi kaise hai

Doc-bas thodi weakness hai thats it,issiliye unconscious hai,thodi der mein

Hosh aa jaega

Rd-ok doc thank u soo much

Doc-thats my job sir,i think i should take a leave now

Rd-sure doc,pls come i'll come

Kaka-nahi baba,app yahi rukie,mein doc sahab ko chood kar ata hoon

Rd-ji kaka

With that kaka and doc went from there and rd again looked at her face

With her forehead bandaged,but soon he realizes that her eyes r opening

And he stands up not knowing what to do and by the time he was thinking

Sanyu was all awake and as she opens her eyes she shouts

Sanyu-aaa,papa,papa

Rd-oh god,with that he covers her mouth with his hands

Rd-kya hai,why r u shouting and pls ab movie dialogue mat bolna

"mein kaha hooon"

Sanyu-mmmhhmmm

Rd-what?

Sanyu[pointing at his hand which was covering her mouth]-mmmhhh

Rd-oh,he removes his hand

Sanyu[takes a sigh of relief and thn]-omg the randhir singh shekhawat

Omg sir,i respect u a lot sir,u r soo awsome,u know what i had see all

Movies directed by u and u did a splended job sir,but wait what m

I doin here,kya apne mujhe kidnap karliya,nahi nahi app kyu karoge kidnap

Apko kya zaroorat hai,wait mujhe to kisis gadi ne takkar mari thi na,woh

Bewada shayad peeke gad chalaraha tha,andha kahi ka...

Rd-easy lady easy,will u allow me to talk

Sanyu[a bit embarrassed]-oops,i m sorry sir

Rd-so listen,it was me who hit u with that car and i m not sorry for that

Hearing that sanyu's jaw dropped

Sanyu-what?

Rd-yeah u heard it right,tum road dekh kar nahi cross kar sakti thi

Sanyu-hawww how mean,appne ek to mere upar gadi chalakar

Mujhe marne ki koshish ki aur upar se meri galti,btw thanx

A lot sir apne mujhe unn gundo se bacahaya,woh kya hai na

Mein delhi se aayi hoon,i want to be a director[dreaamily],so

I thought that i can assist some good directors like u and thn i

Reached here but i don't know anyone so i was just going to

Find some place to stay temproraly but when i was on that road

A few men followed me and i ran from there and thn u hit me

And btw it was all ur mistake

Rd-excuse me i m not here to listen to ur life history and it wasn't mine

Sanyu-yes it was

Rd-no,it wasn't

Sanyu-yes

Before rd could say any further ramu kaka entered with a glass of glucose

Kaka-arey baba yeh uth gayi aur tumne bataya nahi

Rd-ismein batane wali kya baat,uth gayi na ab apne ghar jae

Sanyu-oh,hello mujhe bhi koi shouk nahi hai yaha rehne ka

Kaka-arrey nahi nahi beta,app pehle yeh glucose wala pani piyo aur

Baba app mere saath aenge

Sanyu[smiling]-thank u kaka

Rd-ji kaka

With that kaka and rd goes out

Kaka-baba,app mujhe bataenge ki kya hua,app arpita baby ke ghar gaye the?

Rd[takes a big sigh]-ji kaka aur waha pe mr.harsh aa gaye phir u know

[saying that rd hugs kaka and kaka hugs him back]

Kaka-app waha gaye kyu the,sab theek to hai na

Rd-oh shit kaka mein apko batana bhool gaya,apko pata hai mein mamu banne wala

Hoon[he lifts kaka and twirs him]

Kaka-baba,mujhe neeche utaro,mein gir jaooga

Rd makes him stand

Rd-kaka ajj mein bohjt khush hoon

Kaka-arrey baba mama banne ki khusi itni hai to jab aap baap banoge to kya hoga

Rd-[his smile fades]-pls kaka,not again,pehle hi arpi ne mujhe assis...

He stops in between as if some idea hit him,sanyu's words were ringing in his mind

"so I thought that i can assist some good directors like u"

Rd[self thought]-iss bewakoof ko le leta hoon,koi kaam to karegi nahi

Lekin yaar iski bak bak sunni padegi,rd beta yeh puri

Zindagi thodi na rahe gi tera dimaag khane,iski life aise

Bana doonga ki 1 mahine mein hi bhaag jaegi apne ghar

[his trademark smirk on his face]


Precap-new assistant and residence problem


i hope u guys liked it and pls do hit the like button if u think it deserves

and i really wait for ur precious comments so do comment guys

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ress

Unress

Omg me come first
Let me do the happy dance first [:D/]

Really super happy finally I became a gud stalker 😎

Now coming to the update
The update was fab yr

I so luved it

Rd so close to kaka he respects him so much
I lyked kaka he's so caring

Sanyu b na hosh me ate hi rajdhani express ban gi
R rd j muh pr hi use drunkard bol ri thi r uski burai kri thi 🤣

N den dey again started dere never ending argument

Rd sanyu ko assistant bnayega
Now the real fun starts
He thinks he will get rid of her so easily

Bt vo toh tym hi btayega kya hta h 😉

Wtng for nxt
Updte soon

Alwz keep smiling dear 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG! THE BICKERING AND EVERYTHING WAS SO CUTE!
Loved this chappy to the core of my heart! It was great yaar!
The way they started blaming each other for the accident, was so funny!
I loved the minute details you brought in about the relation of kaka with randhir! The best part about this chapter!
Then the idea of hiring her as his assistant attacked his mind! The EVIL mind! *grinning*
I am so happy about this new twist!
I am excited about what he will do next and how will he approach her for working as his assistant and his tricks to torture her!
Thanks for pm'ing, girl! Continue pretty soon!
Keep writing!
Love,
Karishma. :* <3
Edited by karishmagsewani - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update...
precap is exciting..
thanks for the pm dear
nxt part ASAP!!
much love
MANSI
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Posted: 11 years ago
haww i loved it.. sanyu was so innocent!! hehe.. kya planning
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update... bt plz... next updte jaldi dena...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome.. Thanx for the Pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for pm and awesome part sanyu and rd ki fight so cute...

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