ff arshi fun in skul part 20pg 16

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Character Sketch


arnav-he is a fun guy of 18 yrs old...in grade 12,handsome, humorous, dashing ...lives in Canada...but an Indian...


khushi-She is a fun girl,good looking ,smart, 18yrs old in grade 12...lives in India...but she has just moved to canada

payal-khushi friend,lives in Canada,18 yrs, gr 12

akash-arnav friend lives in Canada,18 yrs ,gr 12

itz very hilarious tel.me if u want to continue
part 1,2,3 pg1
part4 pg2
part5 pg3
part6,7pg4
part8 pg5
part9pg6
part10 pg7
Part 11&12 pg8
Part 13&14 pg 10
Part 15 pg 12
Part 16&17 pg 13
Part 18&19 pg14
Pg20 pg 16
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice character sketch
Please Continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 1
A girl from Air India steps on tht land and her hair r coming all over the face cuz of the windthts our dear Khushi

A guy jumps up from the bed like a spring after hearing the darn Alarm and shuts it off and sleeps again, but the sun rays from the window wake him up...thts our dear arnav

pay:Are yaarkitni der laga di I was waiting for u outside the airport..
Khu: Kya kahu yaarwo immigration walo ne roka tha..to take pic and all documents stuff
pay:Oh ok ok.. I get itso..how was the journey..
Khu:Sooo tiringgg..but fun.cuz I traveled in plane for da 1st timelolzzz
pay:Oo I c.yaar.teri bohot yaad ayiaur mujhe tujhse itniii saari batein karni hai .intniii saari baatein karni haitht kya kahoon kitnii saaa

khu:Haanab yeh dialogue baji band karmera samman kaun uthayegatu????
pay:La mein uthati hoon [ moves ahead to take one of the bags]
khu:Rehene de bohot bhari haiand waise bhi its just 1 bagand car is just a few steps aheadI ll do it
Both go towards the car.they put luggage they sitthey go to payal home

Actually payal is living alone(she came on student visa) ,same with khu.now thye r gonna live together

Here comes payal's homeek flat haishe opens the door..typical Indian ghar hai..[from inside] (lolz).Indian khane ki khoshbu aa rahi hai

khu:Are tuje Indian khana banana kab aayatuje toh kuch bhi nahi aata tha naa//!!
pay:Yahan aake sab sikh liya
khu:Wowww.chalo achha hai.where's da washroomI wanna go to freshen up
pay:Straight to the righttum jao.., tab tak , mein khana lagati hoon.

khu:[thinking( to herself)> bol toh aise rahi haijaise mein uska pati hoon."khana laga deti hoon"
She freshens up and comes back and sits on tableher legs r paining.
khu:La tuje help kar do
pay:No just yeh microwave mein hi garam karna hainothing long to dou sit and relax
kash:Ok

Tabhi she picks up the remote to switch on the tvand to her surprise she seesthere is a bill!!!
khu:Are yeh kya be.hotel se layaaa tune.mujhe doubt to ho hi gaya thaki tu meri achanak itni seva kyun kar rahi hai.kya zaroorat thihello mammien burgar ,pizza kha sakti hoon..
pay:No actually burger pizza kaa samaan hai..but mujhe aaj Indian kahana khana tha tere saathaur itne dino se nahi khaya
khus:Yaarleking this cud be expensive naaa..
pay:Are hum toh parties mein bahar se hi late haiand nothing costlyits normal.
khus:Ok I see

They both eatand then go into the room.khu enters the roomits all pink.cuz pink is payal's fav. Color.

khu:yeh kya kiye bepink achha haibut this is too much yaar.ab mein aa gayi hoonI m gonna put curtains sky blue color and bed peach color.
pay:NoI said no.yeh toh aisa hi rahega
khu:No I m gonna change it.wahan India mein bhi hostel mein yeh haal thayyaad heilog hame pinky kehte the..
pay:Kehte hai toh kahenand waise bhi no1 gonaa come here.
khu:Ok lets do 1 thingu take tht bed I ll take this 1and I ll put all my things on this sideu put there
pay:Ok

They start talkingkhu talks abt their old Indian friends and pay talks abt her new friends in the school.
khu: hey where is th e schooland when shall I go for admission.and all my documents and my
pay:Ufffdon worryI have already talked with ur counselor and u can hand him ur marksheets from Indian schoolhe ll see it and probably u ll have to take a simple testand they ll give u 4 courses this semesterand listentake physics,chem.,bio and phys edthis semit ll b good for u
khu:Okphysics is hard
pay:u think thtbut over here.u ll not find it hard
Blah blah ballahh.lik this they talk abt school stuffand all tht..


Edited by arhi00 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Start was good, but can u pls give English translation, thank for pm
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part 2
arnav and Akash live together in a flat

ar:Abe chal uth re'
Ak:Aaj kya hai'itna jaldi kyun uth gaya be'
ar:Are school nahi jana kya'?? And I have English test today'who Shakespeare ke play per'I wanna go in library and study for a half an hour'so I wanna go early to the school today
ak:Wht eva'.i don care abt shaky!
ar:Tera shaky jab khafa ho jayega aur phir to tuje bahagwan hi bachaye..
ak:Bhagwan kyun??tu hai naa'.plzzz yaar'aj ke din toh mujhe answers bata dena plzzz'yaar tuje pata hai na'.tht I suck at literature'.
ar:U suck at chem.,bio,math,phy'.everything!!!
ak:Kyaaa be'.now on I m gonna b studying hard on those science subjects'

ar:Why now on..??? pehle kis baat ka muhraat dekh rahe the panditjii!!

aka:Kyaa be'phir finals mein toh teri place kahan hogi aur meri kahaan'I ll nopt b able to copy then naa'
ar:Are panditji toh bohot chalak nikle'
ak:Ab baatien hi karega yaa jana hai library?
arnav goes in the washroom,Akash goes to make coffee for both'.
ak: yaar sochta hoon aaj shave karoon.
ar:Haan haan kar le beta'sadhu jo ban gaya hai 18 ki umra mein!!
rehne de rehne de''.abhi tak dadhi nikli bhi nahi'aur shave karne nikla hai'.kise impress karne ki iraade ghoom rahe hai dimaag mein??
Ak:Kisi ko nahi'kisi ko bhi toh nahi'.[Sharma ke]

Both get ready and go to school in the car..'.
Both are working at a pizza place so they bought a car in installment.,to travel to school,cuz .school is far from their home.

Khushi& payal enter the door..its huge school'looks lik a college to khushi..
pa:This side'come here'.office is here..
kh:Hmm
Counselor( person who decides the level of subjects a student will b able to handle with)
payal:sir,thts khushi,my friend she has just arrived here'
C:yes miss khushi,plz come'do have ur documents and immigrant papers?
Kh: yes I do..here they r[hands them in]
C: miss payal u might b getting late to ur classes,'u may go'miss khu will b joining the school in a few days'payal goes
[to khu so acc to these marksheets ur standard is quite high and I can almost say tht u go t the admission ,u don need to take any tests'thoses tests r for ppl who are very new and unaware of the language spoken here'u seem to be quite confident and good to go'.processing will take 2 days and u can join the schhol from Monday.
khu: thnks 'so shud I come directly on Monday or do I need to come in the office for any documents if need be
C: v ll call u if v need anything'or else u ll b getting ur subjects tht day itself
Khu: Sir,I have a request'can I take phs,chem.,bio,phys ed this semister
C: yes,but if classes are full then v l have to move u to some other class'
khu: ok thnks again;;;
She goes
pay was standing outside
khu:did u tell abt subjects..

khu: ya but he said only if classes have space, and I m joining from mon, and no tests for me'.yaaahhhooo
pay: Coolll'.,k I g2g to my class'.will u b able to go back alone?take any bus tht goes to our area ..or else show our address to driver and he ll guide u
khu: don worry I ll figure it out

in class
payal is sitting on left hand corner with no1 on the other side
akash comes in
payal's eyes sparkle lik a star'she smiles a bit..
akash looks towards her,smiles a bit and sits on the other bench on the right side'now arnav comes and sits with akash..

while the teacher was teaching,akash was looking towards payal with slanting eyes'and payal senses something and looks to her right and akash suddenly starts writing something where as teacher was ust speaking and not writing anything on board(lolz)
and then akash looks at her she kinda behaves lik she was looking at the poster on the wall on her right(lolz)'both r gazing eyes on each other'

class is finished
while coming out of the class

ar:what were you doin???
ak:are yaarr'.nothing,what i do
ar: kya kuch nahi'teacher likhne ko kehte the tab, u were not writing a word and when he told to pay aattention towards him u were busy writing'.te\hen u say'u lll work hard on science subjects!!huhhh'how will you hard'.
ak: ya'i wil do you dont worry..
ar: if i dont get worried what i should do you always copy'
ak: ok ok chill !!!
ar: what was that
ak: kya(smiles)
ar:woohhh

ak: nothing
ar:stop all this and study!
They both go to the locker..
part 3


Its Monday!
pa: khu, do u have hair straightener?
Kh: y am I gonna have it'.my hair r already straight'y do u wanna straighten ur hair'curly hair look good on u ..u hair look fluffy and ur small little face lloks gorgeous with ur notrmal hair,but y do u wannna straighten them???
pa:nothing'just for a change[looking into the mirror ,adjusting her hair]
Khushi pushs her with her elbow & says in a teasing tone
Kh: u have boyfriend?
pa: no wayyy
kh:tell me ,dont hide from me u ill be in problem

pa: no i dont hve

kh:tell me i will help you
pa ok its gotting late I have to pack my bag too'
Kh:[looks at the sky,thinks] what i m thinking she will think 1000 to get involve with someone she is too shy for tht,she too rins away from guys
They get ready & go to school in Bus

pay & khushi reach the school,they go into the office,khushi takes her classroom info ,school mao,etc..
C: u got physics,eng,biophys ed. U ll b able to get chem. ,math,etc, next semister,u can take books from tht room by the front,room 509
Kh: thnx a lot for giving me my desired subjects.
C: if u wish to change schedule or teacher or any prob feel free to talk to me during breaks or be4 n after school.
She goes & takes all her books from tht room,she now has loads of heavy books in her hand.pay was waiting outside
pa:so ur 1st class is eng'

yaaahooo.mine too..so v lll b I same classes ' [after a while]oh nooo'I ll have to return some books in the library ,see, our lockers r on the other side of the school, v ll have to walk a lot for going there and coming back to go to the class'so just keep thes books with u for this period ok? I ll show u locker after this period
khu:ok'.aree wait'class kidhar hai??/

But pay is gone,she is running lik crazy towards the library
Khu: ohh kya karu,'umm..Yes,I do have a map, [takes it out]achha room 623 soo'.i ll have to go left then straight then right & pass by door number 6 then around the gym'ohhh good'its too complicated'[bell rings

she runs lik crazy to find class,she cant ask any1 cuz all r running,not to b late to their classes.she is looking up and searching the room number she was looking fro,on the door of all classes,and
DHADDHHAAAmmm

She bangs into a guy'' the first thing she noticed abt him is his eyes.arnav too noticed her eyes.

Situation:arnav is sitting ,actually kinda lying on the floor,khushi fallen ,kinda sitting on sujal's lap,on his legs, books all over the place
[After a few seconds]


ar: Haiii''''.goshhh'.hello!!u gal!can't u see properly'here take these glasses,,,u need them badly and wht the hack r u doing with these many books??? U don have a locker or wht??
khu: Actually'
ar: areee'myyy fooottt...uuufff

Kh:ask him r u Indian ?
ar:that means,tht u break my leg!

Khush suddenly stands up from his leg

Kh:actually I m new, its my first day today,I m searching for room 623 tht English,Mr.Durek's class.
arnav helps her with picking all her books,in this, her bio book gets exchanged with arnav chem. Book.

arl:ok'I have English too, so v r in da same classes ,lets go..
They r running thru the hallway ,cuz class is far wawy and they r already a bit late.akash appears from nowhere and whispers in arnav ear tht u don have any other work than falling with girls!
ak: Hey ,man will u take these books I g2g to my locker and then to the library to return thtt novel'
ar:Yo, wait..i can't hold these many'cant u c I already have'[but akash is gone]
Huhhh Gosh this guy!!is sooo disorganized ..he keeps everything till lastdue date,and panices at the end
Khu: So ,he's ur friend'wht's his name? And ya ur name too?by da way I m Khushi
ar:I m arnav and he was akash.
They reach the class.
Now,they sit lik this'pay and akash come late and come to their places.

Kh:[to [pay] y didn't u tell me where the the class was 'it was sop difficult for me to find this class
pay:ooppsss'.i m sorry'.i was in a bit hurry'then how come u r here early?
Khu:aarav helped me out'.
Teacher: Hello ppl,v have a new student today,this is Khushi and u all r supposed to help her out with her missed classes and notes. [to khu]Don't worry u did not miss a lot,Just a few poems'I am available during lunch hours if u need my help on anything u don understand.I moved the test on thursday instead of today[ all ppl become happy..especially akash,he didnot prepare naaa]SO v just started a Shakespearean play, and v r finished with the analysis part of Act1 Scene 1'''.[blahh blah'starts teaching]
All pay attention
pa and kh whispering
pa: wht the hack were u talking abt?? Who helped u?
kh: aarav yaar'he s in our class..
pa:"which class
Kh'this class'.sitting there with the right guy
Teacher:Silence plz
Now they stop talking & listen to teacher'
'.. '.. '.. '' Class finished



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nice storyline, great start thanks for pm
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part 4
next class?
Kh gives her tht schedule
pa: hmm'so u got physics,bio and phys education'.great'.so u have 3 sub with me but in 1 sub u ll have different class'.fair enough'SO now its physics,room 253
pay: 1st lets go to our lockers
arnav and Akash go to theirs
Khu:oh'how to use these combination lockers?I just don get this'
payal teaches her ,but she doesnot get,sopayal opens it for her & tells her tht she ll get it after doing 2-3 times'They go to physics class ,arnav & Akash r already in tht class But separate,kr and ka have to sit separate too'that teaher makes the ppl sit alphabetically.Teacher teaches'. '.class finished.

Its lunch time...
All go to their own lockers'take their lunch and go to cafetaria.first khushi and pyal then arnav and akash'girls have still not met/seen the guys in cafteria..'..
pa[to khu]:Hey, c I g2g in library for some books to check out, I ll b back in 10 min or so..[goes]
ak[to ar:Yaar, got to go to take question papers from library j,ll b bak in 10 min or so

Khushi sees arnav now'

khu:aarav'aarrraaavvv'.oh hello''(kitna bhav kha ra hai(mann mein))'she goes behind her and slightly taps on her back
khu: hey aarav, whts up?'howz prakash??u r in physics too'am I correct?howz it going?
arn turns back but there is no one'
ar: r u talking to me?
Khu: of course..i don even know any1 else here at this point'
arn: hello!!My name is arnav and his name is akash'.

Kash: oopss'sorry
ar: Ya, I m in tht physics class too'akash was there too'and tht gal with whom u were sitting in eng class too is in phy class'
khu: are yaar'whom r u introducing me to'??haha i and payal live together
ar: oh I see'akash&payal[stops] ,ya ,so tht physics teacher doesnot let us sit where eva we can..
khu: I know eh'wht class do u have after lunch'I have bio..
arn: really?? Me tooo

khu: great but payal has math
ar: akash has math too'I think they r in same classes, cuz there's just 1 teacher who is teaching math of gr 12 for diplomas'
Khu: oh I see'.but ther might b lots of bio classes'I have bio with mrs. Burges
arn: me too'.she is a nice teacher'
khu:wht after tht? I have physeducation
arn:this is unbelievable!! me too'.
khu: so wht r they teaching in tht
arn:its just some normal exercising and jogging cuz its good weather out ther'
khu: hmm'I see..
payal and akash come from different doors in the cafeteria & see arnav & Khushi sitting on 1 table together& talking so heartedly & laughing. Both akash and payal 's mouths get wide open.Khu: payal has still not come?(in mind)

ar (in mind)

They c both akash& payal , both drag them towards the table, and all 4 sit lik this in circle'

ar: akash thts khushiKhushi feels something abstract and undefined when arnav says her name for the first timeakash: Hii..ya I know'u r in eng and physics with us ryt?khu: payal yeh aarav I mean arnav who helped me to find i eng class arnav felt something diverse and special when she spoke his names for da 1st time

pay: ohh I get it now..u switched the suffixes of their names'haha

Khu:haan be'it happens sometime regarding anme .., and u know arnav is in phys ed too with us

aka ya me 2 in phys ed in 4th period

arnav kicks leg on akash ang nd whispers " do u know happening in the world 'nothing new'.koi nayi news de"

khu: oh I seee

They all eat pay and akash remain silent they hardly talk to each other'.

arnav & khushi in bio class

ar:so [gives previous notes]v r doing nervous system ryt now, v r done neuron structure,types or neurons so far.

Khu:ok I See,can I have them taken home for today ?

ar:if there is no exam or quiz on this portion then u can certainly have it

Kh:ok thts fine

[after some time]

ar oohhh!!!'.see'tht'.whts tht'vovvv

Khu: whts wht????

ar: udhar dekho

Khu: [looks] where ???wht??

ar:there'cockroach!!..

Khu: umm.,,..i don c any cockroach in here'nothing is there

ar:umm'.ok'fine..

kh: I m surprised!..wht happened

ar umm'well'I was just tryin to scare u ,but'U didn't!

Khu [laughs]scare me!!no wayyy!! Haha haha I m really strong

arn:haan'India ka oil u eat you will haelthy gal

Khu: i m fat!!achha,'i m not fat i m strong ,STRONG

ar: lekin i saud u fat'

Khu:at least I m not lik u ,who falls down and cryind and shouts ,'ahhh uhhh ouchhh'ufff'

ar:achha! Halki phulki!!aur that books weight

They both remember tht falling scene and stop momentarily, look into each others eyes and get lost for a few seconds

and then, burst out loud on tht girne wala incident'.

arn& khu: hahah haahah hahaah ahaha haha a uhhh,,'.they laugh so much

arn: says remember i told you tht take these specs u need them'hahah ahah

Khu: u can say

arn:umm,..sry I said tht by mistake

Kh: dekh main tuje tu bulaungi and u ll call me tu also'.c'mon noww'arn: ok'toh giv me ur cell number ,ur address, everything

Khu: umm'wht

arnav: I m just kidding'I ve heard of ppl asking for p #s and address'line marne ke liye'

Both laugh out loud :Hahaah ahahah

khu: toh tum mujh pe line marna chahte ho!?!?

arnav is speechless'.he just keeps on laughing to neglect tht question

Khu: when you came from india

arn:5 yrs ho gaye but 5 yrs have pass so quickly did no know the time

Khu: o I see, mujhe toh 3 din bhi nahi huye and I m missing everyone

ar:same here but u ll b more close to every1 cuz they all r gonna call u every weekend and will care more for u 'mare then they used to do in India'

K:thts true

Class finish'

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Very nice nd interesting
Looking Forward to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow nice
Pretty big to read
Lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice story thanks for pm update soon 😊

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