new sandhir ff.A LIE CHANGE MY LIFE part 3 updet - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: cuteparsh


when???????
ok jab bhi karo pm zaroor karna
and meri tarah update late mat karna haan 🤣

time to nahi ka sakti hu .mera exam chal raha hai but ha 3rd september ka bad jarurkarungi.i am a big lazy girl ha so late updet hosakta hai🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Wow vampire story i just love vampires plzzzsss continue soon. Nd PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MDKRM

Wow vampire story i just love vampires plzzzsss continue soon. Nd PM me

thanx.i will updet soon.😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: chowanisha

interesting!!pls do pm me

thanx.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sry for late commenting
*holding ears *
new concept yar interesting thanx for pm continue soon :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A LIE CHANGE MY LIFE

I woke up.i lift my handsup to block the rays of sunshine from hitting my eyes.The wind shifts and I hear creeks from the massive old house in front of me.Rumors have it it's haunted .The legend is very cheesy ,you know stupid chic,and a guy with a chainsaw,its all stupid.

The legend says that a family once lived there and was killed,the most bloody,torturous kills ever,the baby was kidnapped and never found.The police went there to investigate and looked at the bodies,one claims he saw their eyes move under their eyelids.How corny.People who make these things up desperate for attention .Then I remember why I'm here ,to see for myself all that stuff is nonsense .Being a eighteen year old can be stressful ,so this is the thrill that will get me pumped again.

I was go to washroom,for take a bath.Then I wore a white long skirt,and a sky blue sleeveless top."Sanyu ... Sanyu ...where are you beta come quickly breakfast is ready".' ya mom I will come'.i walked out of room slowly closed the door and walked down the stairs.Mom was in the kitchen . "oh good morning Sanyukta how did you sleep?" "good morning mom I slept good". I eat my breakfast and walked up stairs. I was in my room I sat in couch and read book.

I woke up I saw moonlight I checked the time its 8:00 pm.Then my mom called me and sent me to the supermarket to get some food.it was relly dark and no one is wake .I'v heard the stories of people getting killed drained of blood in these dark alleys and thats what creepsme out the most.I heard some rustling behind me but I shrugged it off and took my headphones out from my bag placing my phone. Clicked on a song,and the music started playing.But when I heard a voice saying"blood".I turned my back ..and I saw long tucks,white skin like he just came out of the freezer,long nails,burning eyes,then he attacked me in this moment I know he was a vampire I dint beleive any thing called vampires it was a story my mother used to tell to memake sure I don't get afraid from anything when I was young,he bites my neck asa I am a piece of cake he keptsucking my blood and I felt like my soul is leaving me I couldn't shout and if I could I would no body is around,then suddenly he lefts me on the floor and kissed in my forhead and said"by love meet you soon".i cant take my breath I feel the poison is moving through my nerves,my head is on fire my body is burning my heart beating so fast,I thought I am gonna die and that vampire who bites me is watching and didn't speak a word.my eyes is hurting me I did't want to close them but they closed alone.

so guys yaha mera first finish hotahai.so tell hwz it.good or bad.

for pm sent me buddy requset.😃

Edited by sudipto-69 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
nice update love it u write it nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update thanx for pm
continue asap :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey darloo the update was awsme luved it totally

N yes it was quite scary too bt I lyk thrill sanyu vampire ban jyegi omg

R vo vampire kaun tha

N darloo next tym a longer update

Eagerly wtng for next update do update soon

Keep smiling sweety 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update dear sounds interesting ...continue asap...:)

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