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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: kondhili
Wednesday is here 😃

Where are you?

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

This was one emotional rollercoaster, Sandy.

You made me cry!😭

My poor Khushi.

Doesn't she deserve Arnav's wholehearted love?

Why does he do this to her everytime?

One can understand his reticence in accepting Garima in his life.

But Khushi is there for him.

Why can't he share his emotions with her, and in doing so destroy his inner demons.

I hope good sense prevails or someone pulls his ears for me!

Will bewaiting for hopefully a happier part B!

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kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Yo!!

*1st Edit*

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

Yeh kya ho raha hain!!

Arnav you silly stupid man haven't you still learnt your lesson. Yeh tum kya kar rahe ho! I know you are hurting and that you need time to heal and come to terms with what has unfolded. I know nobody can replace your mother's place in your heart and trust me nobody is trying to do that either. Don't you remember what happened 5 yrs back aur phir bhi you are going ahead and not giving khushi what she needs right now.

I am sure if at least you assured khushi that at some time in the coming days you will be able to speak freely to her about this she would be fine. Its your stubbornness and unwillingness to share with khushi your thoughts and emotions which are troubling her so much. So much so that she is forced to take a stand...So please i implore you to not let this girl walk out of your life once again.

You can't break some one's heart twice over. So i am expecting you to run across and stop khushi in the next update...OK. Else forget khushi i would never be able to forgive you no matter how sorry you are later. Deal!

Sorry sandy i had to have this side conversation with mr. caramel chocolate eyes 😆

*2nd Edit*

Chaine ki saans!!! 😆

How could i go to sleep once you told me that part 2 is updated😳 especially after the sleepless night i endured courtesy the 1st part 😆 Raat ke 1 baaje but i had to stop here to let you know how relieved i am right now.

My heart was racing the whole time and i waited for Arnav to catch up with khushi with lot of trepidation. Relieved finally to say the least.

All's Well that ends well. BAS ab ke liye itna hi!

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1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

😊

Sorry ladies.

I was so worried I wouldn't get first reserve, I reserved twice!

Sorry Shailaja! 🤗

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

res

My heart stopped beating..what happened suddenly..am blanked out..!!

Sandhya, please make me breath again soon..

I feel Kushi should not have pushed him to open up on Anya's wedding day..she could have waited.

thxxx u Sandhya for one of the best and longest chapters of DND..my heart was going dhak dhak at airport scene and it was playing before my eyes..loved the update ..perfect..

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: 1chilly
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double res Charu..not fair..u made in 4th place..!! ;-)

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kushiarnav1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

what on earth going on...sandhya...its a surprise...can not wait for tomorrow...please kushi don't go ...arnav please call her back...what r they fighting for????

arnav has to open up...it will take time...why kushi wants it now...when the time comes it will come out...

😕😭😛...

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Jay

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Stubbornness personified on both sides. Arnav always thinks and does things without comprehending what will be the result of his actions. Can't he open up little bit to Kushi. Kushi on the other hand can't she wait for wedding procession to be completed to have a heart to heart talk with him?. They are back to square again and my brain is spinning 😡. Waiting for the next part 😕

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Sandhya, what a roller coaster ride of an update!

I must confess to feeling a little grumpy that I couldn't read the chapter before you took it down. But now I can see I saved myself a whole load of heartache and lots of What_the's as well!

On reflection, Arnav's reaction is not entirely unexpected. How can you just shed years of bottling things up to just letting it all out overnight. Even that want has to come from within. And it did, which is what made him rush after Khushi... to give her his hand to help him out of the depths sown by his sorrows... After all she is the only one who can reach into his dark inner recesses and fill them with light.

I'm very happy Khushi didn't back down, and that she came back because she had 'the will to fight'. She's right to demand to be there as an equal.

Once again I am in awe of these three friends. Their bond and care for each other is exemplary.

The love Aman has for his bride and the joy he was feeling at being with her was so heart warming to read. It just gladdens the heart. Her bidaai made me all tearful. The many facets of a woman.

Above all, was the part where Arnav and Garima meet. The pain, the hesitancy, the discomfiture all so evident. And again it's the mother in Garima who sought to put her son at ease. Really really moving.

'The dazzling dusk that resembled an abstract floral arbor embraced them into its fold.'

How beautifully you write of them walking away into the sunset.

You ability to depict nature, emotions, ambience is stunning Sandhya.

Yet another superlative chapter.

Edited by Arshi67 - 11 years ago