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Posted: 11 years ago
I don't know what to say or write. I feel like crying out for them, but not able to. I don't know what to do Deepu, it's so painful, unbearable kind!
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Posted: 11 years ago
quite emotional roler-coaster..!!!
u made me cry/...
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Posted: 11 years ago
great update.arnav got to see the pain ,agony khushi had been hiding all years from everyone.continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
m crying buckets. ..damn it was so emotional. ...
finally arnav was able to c khushi beyond her facade. ..
feeling bad for them...can't wait for the next chap. ...
plzzz update soon. ..waiting
im going. ..n reading this twice now. ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update
Written brilliantly... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

still under the spell of update ...fantastic and beautiful...from starting till end...

payal khushi convo on nk...all lovely and light hearted but the moment khushi told her will ask ur jeeju...ufff deeps...kiya pain i felt her ...cant tell u...how much easy relation she was dreaming at that point...will tell ur jeeju to smack his butts off....aweee...khushi ...we r absolutely fine...y i felt pain here again too...her every discussion is having that missing him touch in that...:(

loved the fact that khushi understand anjali that much...again all characters so much beautifully linked with each other here...if anjali knows khushi so do khushi...khushi know anjali will not do something hidden from aman...wow thats her character...awesome...
loved nani aman anjali convo...nani disccussion on adoption...so true no more history needs to repeat...not another arnav betrayed in family...wow simply fantastic...i loved anjali point...baby needs to be accepted by all family members...how sweeet...big social message here deeps once again from urside...and aman he is fabulous asusal...he thinks that anjali still repenting...which she is but also...loved the fact that khushi the one behind this also...she showed her the peeled the real life of arnav once on road begging...ufff...she decided to give life to atleast one kid...deeps ,love u loads for ur such mature approach to social issues ...ok wt was that sharp elbow in his guts...aweee aman hope u fine ...lol

ufff loved the flying kisss ...hehehe...oyee and pagal...wt a fantastic feel ...her sms messages to him...and his loud wait...deeeps kitna fit likha hay yaar... so he smiled but then a thought hit him that cant be his khushi so bold...he was confused from last few days thinking who is real.??...aweee khushi she trying her best no doubt...to bring him back in life...wt abt ur ownself girl...:(

i loved that post delivery guy and arnav gup shup...hehehe...hilarious...do u know where his husband...right in front...lol...lol...loved it...

restaurant vs khushi...my goodness deeps...part 2 has started to build up that pain thing inside...the way u have written his pain,his tiredness in emotions the fear of lossing her again...his panic state...ufff ufff ufff...
my heart started crying from here...back ground ur vm constantly in mind...banjar hay sub banjar hay...mera yaar mila dey saiyaan aik war mila dey saiyaann...ufff :(
his phones calls on her number...his message ...where r u dammit...
khushi please come back...aweee...:(
his feeling towards going hospitals...his feeling of living a life alone away from family...needed supporty at that time...aweee deeps ...itna acha likha hay...kaha kaha nahi ous ney dhoonda...loved the way he touched her pic in passport...noticing no expression no smile on her face...ufff....i cant tell u deeps how beautifully u have written pain here...craving here...sense of lossing ur precious some one here...i am speechless ...arnav is gem...he is love...i wanted to give him name as love...ufff...

i loved it the way he finally reached patrol office..loved it how he said .my wife khushi singh raizada...ufff and wow...and that khushi...ufff never felt this much pain after listenng to him uttering khushi here...loved the way u have shown him noticing her weak condition and i can well imagine...how weak his heart felt here ...it is obvious in his saying khushi...

ufff deeps khushi condition ...her all insecurities ...her all fears...depressions all comes out ...u broke down me in tears at the point where she was telling arnav...bw i didnt take a sip of water...it must be drugged...:(...ufff deeps ...wt she had gone and wt is still going through...ufff her pain is unbelieveable...but arnav...his all observation...his all confussion all cleared up crystal clear...with that one push...dont touch me ever...aweee arnav i love u ...u such a gem...u dont need any explanations...as hur punaay per tera naam likha hay ...he got it ..u got it all...how he took her fainted weak body...stressed out...the flash back doc discussion...him bringing her home ...there home...no further thing needed...its decided...she is there where she should be...loved anjali and his convo...he has learnt wt he has to do...how to take next step...loved the puke scene...i mean the way he takecare of her...ufff its breathe taking...and in the end...her tears and his tears...she in his lap ...cuddling her like baby...its me ...its only me posy...ur b& w...ufff and wow ...swaying and hugging her
pls dont cry pls dont...wt do i do with u khushi...dont love me so much that it only hurts u...🤗👏...deeps i love u for creating such excellent character of asr..arnav in short love singh raizada...such sensible man in love...he never wanted explanations...the confussion he was having it also solved by his sense and sensiblity :)...ufff deeps ...tussi great yaar...no one can touch ur writing skills ...no one can...as u always know how to hit which chord of heart and when ...excellent writing skills...

p:s i wanted to say my and sair feelings r same same...so pls consider my comment as her too...:)
Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago
Nilpori thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
there's soo much to say...yet i couldn't think of saying anything appropriate that would describe ur efficiency and brilliancy...this the life changing update for Arshi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
outstanding...:)..
i didnt even read somethg like this in my entire life...uufff!!!...my head is stlll paing due 2 cryg...heartbreakg update...
n thnkusomuch 4 mahaupdate...:)..
waitg 4 the nxt one...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Some silly lines that are senseless but i cant resist myself ... as my tears are not stopping...


please stop the tears that are flowing down the cheek
i am unable to breathe and sleep
i was lone more powerful to handle
coming in your arms broke me into pieces
in past years i gained the strength to walk alone
coming to you i lost the path to move along
i lost in past was always to hear you
feel the closeness that now i pull off from you
these past years closed me in a shell
that now became hard for me break or melt
my stubbornness will never say you to break the prison
free me from the slack of emotions that are still hidden
now its time you break the wall of fears that truss
bring back the love that make us...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh such an emotional update

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