Daddy's Hands - SanDhir Fanfiction (Thread Two Link!) - Page 21

Originally posted by: basket_101

Hey Saffi!!

What do I even say. You make me lose my words. I don't know how to explain what I feel.

I mean you've just posted one part plus a prologue, and I already feel the intensity of the story!

You're doing such an amazing job!
I loved this part as well!

Randhir is obviously tormented by whatever happened in the past, yet he still loves Sanyu <3

He can't love her, or hate her.

I loved their confession! Both are so cute <3

😆 Sanyu wants to be an equal in everything, then why not propose herself 😆 That part was funny

And I'm glad he went for the test. I feel like his sub-conscience doesn't believe that Sanyu could cheat him. Which is why he went for the test.

I enjoyed the part with him and his daughter so much

She sounds adorable!

"Daddy"

That was too cute!

Same nose and hands

That was just perfect! He didn't need a test to say that she's his daughter

But it's sad that she is in this condition :(

Anyway, can't wait for the story to progress!

Want to know the past as well!

So take care and update as soon as you can 😃

🤗

Hinal YOU make me lose my words! I don't even know how to reply to your super flattering, sweet reviews. You're just amazing. He loves her inside, but he can't bring himself to love her openly, and hating her is just too fake for him. I'm glad you enjoyed the flashback!

Yeah he recognized her right away... it's sad right? 😭 The past will unfold soon! Thank you so much for your sweet review.

Originally posted by: sweetdesire

Hey Saify

Just love the update sweety

beautifully written

especially the emotional part

I myself got teary while reading it

Good job done sweetheart

Sandhir flashback moment

their confession

so cute and typical Sandhirish

Loved it

can't wait for more now

so plz continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

Hi Geet! I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading the update! Thank you!

Originally posted by: gujjupari

I don't know if you have watched humsafar or not, but this fic reminded me of that show! I can see that the character backgrounds are definitely different!

Though the simplicity with their daughter talks about their hands being similar! I see what you did there!!! English Class is coming in handy? Who knew?😆

Anyways! Coming back to the point! The way you simply put the bitter, and maybe regretful, truth through the blunt language of an innocent infant is a masterstroke Saffi!

"Woh humsafar tha par hum usse nawaiye nah thi... Ke dhoop chao ka alaam raha... Judaai na thi.. Woh humsafar thaaa"

I feel like I am your official title track person or something🤣

I have watched that show and I love it so much! 😆 I guess you could say it's slightly inspired by Humsafar, but there is something more to this. 😛 Hahaha English class teaches a lot eh? 😆 Thank you so much for taking time to review this Pari. It means a lot!

You can continue being my official title track person! 🤣

Originally posted by: Piya1702

This fiction is really a heart touching one!!!

Loved the update...

Thank you Piya!

Originally posted by: lovearohi

awesome update
I m really eager to know y they broke up though I think it was somewhere bcoz of parth
n that confession it was so cute
sanyu is seriously a kid😆
loved the father-daughter convo
waiting to knw randhir's reaction when he gets to knw she is his daughter
update asap

Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it. Your questions will be answered soon! Haha she was one eh? 😆 Drama queen. 🤣 So cute. I'm glad you liked the scene with his daughter. =)

Originally posted by: sudipto-69

it was just fab and sweet😊.sanyu's daughter is so sweet.total part just awesome😎.updet soon and pm me.👏😊

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: lovearohi

sry bhul gye the 😛

It's okay! <3 😳

Originally posted by: MarriedLove

its very nice...

Thanks! 😊

Originally posted by: gauri95

wow...😊😊

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: -pearlblu-

If everything was fine back in college till the confession, what happened?? Pakka, vidushi ka kaarnama...stupid witch😡

Randhir needs to repent for his hasty decisions...

Great update, thanks for the pm😃

HAHA you're just like Sanyu was! 🤣 You're so cute! 😳 You'll find out what happened soon. Trust me... there'll be a lot of repenting happening. Thank you. =)